以下是小编整理的高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第六节），本文共9篇，欢迎阅读分享，希望对大家有帮助。本文原稿由网友“雪涞”提供。
篇1：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第四节）
描述物体（Describing Things）
美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）
General Sherman
You are looking at the biggest tree in the world. Its name is “General Sherman”. General Sherman is growing on the slopes of the Rocky Mountains in the United States. General Sherman is about 11 metres across and about 35 metres round. During playtime join hands with 25 of your friends and make a circle. This will give you an idea of General Sherman’s size. General Sherman is also very tall. It is over 80 metres high. It began as a tiny seed many years ago. Imagine! It has been growing since about B.C. It has been growing for almost 4000 years and it is still growing! General Sherman is as old as the Pyramids. It may live for another 2000 years. What will the world be like in 4000 A.D.? General Sherman will know!
General Sherman是谁？读完本文后，你会发现：General Sherman原来是一棵树，一棵巨大无比、年代久远的树！
本文文笔清新，用词简洁；特别是时态的变换生动地描述了一棵树的过去、现在与未来。文中采用拟人化的写作手法，又给这棵树赋予了生命的色彩。另外，还应注意学习描述物体的一些具体表达方法。
读至文末两句，不由感慨：世间千般事，谁堪评说？唯我树大将军！
推荐背诵文段
常用表达法
1.形状（Shape）
-What shape is it?
-What does it look like?
-It’s square/round/oval/triangular /rectangular…2.大小（Size）
-How big is it?
-What size is it?
-What’s it like?
–It’s 32 centimeters wide and 2 meters long.
–It’s 5 inches by 5 inches (by 5 inches).
–It’s 45 centimetres in diameter.
3.颜色（Colour）
-What colo(u)r is it ?
-It’s red/blue/green/gray//black/purple/pink/
yellow/orange/brown…(in colour).-It’s dark grey/light blue/bright green…4.材料（Material）
-What is it made of?
-It’s made of leather/cotton/nylon/denim;
-It’s made of metal/wood/plastic/glass;
-It’s made of brick/stone/bamboo…5.特点（Something Special）
-Can you describe it in detail ?
-Is there anything special about it?
–It’s a long black leather coat with a belt.
–There is a zip at the front and a pocket beside.
–It’s an old brown Italian leather shoe with a hole in it.
–I like these old black Chinese wooden tables.
特注：多个形容词的排列顺序：
当两个以上形容词修饰一个名词时，形容词该如何排列呢？一般情况下，我们可以借助opshacom这个词来帮助我们：
①op代表opinion，指表示人们观点的形容词，如beautiful, horrible, lovely, nice等;
②sh代表shape,指表示形状的形容词，如long, short, narrow, round等；
③a代表age,指表示年龄、时代的形容词，如old, new, young等；
④c代表color,指表示颜色的形容词，如red, black, orange等；
⑤o代表origin, 指表示国籍、地区等的形容词，如British, Canadian, German等；
⑥m代表material, 指表示材料的形容词，如plastic, metal, wooden等。
⑦冠词、物主代词、指示代词等应放在最前面。
请看下面几例：
①a nice long new black British plastic pen
②She wears her beautiful brown leather jacket today.
（她今天穿着她那件漂亮的褐色夹克。）
③It was a lovely old French song.
（那是一首有趣的法国老歌。）
④I have seen this fantastic new British film.
(我已看过这部新的英国幻想片了。)
写作练习
习作点评
本文第二段衔接过渡自然，马上将文章引向了具体的描述对象。对两面旗子描述清晰，给人以比较生动的“图像”。值得一提的是：习作作者较为恰当地应用了所给词汇，这一点常常为部分学习者所忽略。
修改建议：
1.第三段最后一句，应改为：for every national flag has ,at least ,the colour of one of the five circles.
2.最后一段首句，应改为：Second, the flag of the U.N., the back- ground of which is blue.
篇2：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第三节）
人物介绍（Introducing Somebody）
美文欣赏
Although Princeton, New Jersey, has a world-famous university, it is still a small quiet town. It is not a place where anyone would expect to see strange characters on the street. That is why one woman will never forget the day in 1940 when, as a child, she suddenly saw a funny-looking man coming towards her. “I remember,” she tells her children now, “how wild his white hair looked---as if it had been electrified. He was short. His clothes seemed to be just pulled on to keep him covered, like a blanket to keep one warm. He had a big nose, a short, thick moustache, and deep-set eyes. He was staring, thinking. He almost knocked me down before he saw me. He gave me a friendly smile, then he walked on and went on thinking. I noticed he had on bedroom slippers. He had forgotten to put on his shoes. He looked as if he had just stepped out of my book of fairy tales and had passed me like a spirit. That night at dinner when I told my family about the strange, funny man I had seen, my father put down his knife and fork, looked at me and said,‘My child, remember this. Today you saw the greatest man in the world!’”
That man was Elbert Einstein. How and why he had come to Princeton, New Jersey is a story of struggle, success, and sadness.
曾经诵记过不少老高中教材的英文片段，这是留下非常深刻记忆的其中一段。想想看，应该有两个原因：一是当时的教材中的确缺少这样描写人物的材料，二是这一段的确写得很精彩，以至于每每看到爱因斯坦的画像时总想起这段描写，而背读起这段文字时眼前又总是浮现出爱因斯坦的形象。这或许就是我们常常说到的“形象生动”、“栩栩如生”吧。
文段边忆边叙，为我们刻画了一位大鼻深眼、短须乱发、衣着随意、不修边幅的人物形象，而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的爱因斯坦，也难怪He was staring, thinking。
推荐背诵文段
常用表达法
1. 性别与婚姻（Sex & Marriage）
I’m a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.
She got married in 1980 and now she has been married for more than 20 years.
I’ m 35 ,male and unmarried.
I got married five years ago but now I’m single.
2.年龄（Age）
He was born in 1995 and is eight years old now.
Born in 1985,he is now an 18-year-old student, studying in a university.
He began to make a living at the age of 14/at an early age.
In his fifties, he began to feel his age .
By the age of 14, he had set up a chemistry lab of his own.3.外貌特征（Appearance）
She is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long waving hair.
He is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.
He is a good-looking/funny-looking man, with a thick moustache but no hair left.
He is a tall man, with blue eyes and blond hair. deep-set eyes ,big bright eyes, long straight nose,
brown curling hair, broad shoulders,4.身高（Height）He is 1.76 meters tall.
He is 176 centimeters tall.
He is 176 centimeters in height.
The boy is not tall enough to reach the apple overhead.
He is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.
My height is 1.76 metres .(不合英语习惯)
I’m 1.76 meters high.（身高不宜用high）5.健康状况（Health）Well looked after, the children look healthy.
I’m not so strong, but (I’m) in good health.
Having been in hospital for six months, now she looks very weak.6.教育状况（Education）I started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.
I went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later I graduated (from that university).
We learned many courses, including…I’ve been studying in Tianshan Primary School (No.1 High School, Fudan University) for more than two years and will graduate next semester.
I got my bachelor’s (master’s, doctor’s) degree in mathematics in April ...7.特长爱好（Specialty & Hobbies）
I’m good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
I won the first prize in the English speech contest at school last year.
He got the first place in the homepage designing contest.
My favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis.
In my spare time, I like reading and enjoying traveling. 8. 详细特色（Something in detail）
举例法（Giving examples）:
–He was strict with everybody and in everything he did. One day, we were having classes when…–He was very forgetful. Once he came across an old friend of his in the street and ...
–He had a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting. I still remember my first day as a chemistry student.
写作练习
李涛是我校年轻的老教师。他被看作是老教师，是因为他教化学课已经有了。说他年轻，因为他今年还不过38岁。 他长得较瘦。头上头发不多，灰白了。他戴着深度眼镜，牙齿又缺了2颗。所以他看上去比他实际年龄要大。他说，在公共汽车上常常有人给他让座。事实上。我曾看见他不止一次地给怀抱婴儿的妇女让过座。只要听一听他的化学课--那课又生动又有趣，你就会发现他真正的年龄。
习作点评
Li Tao is a young but “old” teacher in our school. He is often regarded as an old teacher because he has taught chemistry for over 20 years. He is a thin man with thick glasses. The little grey hair and lacking of two teeth make him look older than his real age.
He often says that there are many people giving their seats to him in buses. But in fact, I saw him giving his seat to the woman who takes her baby in her arms more than once. If you have his lively and interesting chemistry lessons, you will find that he is no more than 38 years old
本文叙议结合，对原材料调控有度，取舍得当，是一篇很好的习作。
修改建议：
1.第二段第一句有chinglish之嫌，可改为:…says that many people give their seats to him.
2.who takes改为 who took。
3.最后一句应改为If you have ever had…
参考范文
A teacher
Li Tao is a young and old teacher in our school. He is regarded as being old for he has been teaching here for 20 years. He is seen, at the same time, as being young as he is now but 38 years old. He doesn’t have much hair on the head. And it is nearly all white. Missing two teeth and wearing thick glasses, he looks older than he really is. He says people often offer their seats to him for his old looks. On the contrary, I myself saw him give up his seat to a woman with a baby in her arms. At least twice he did so. When you attend his interesting and lively classes, you will be sure of his real age ---still young.
篇3：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第二节）
事件描写（Describing Something That Happened）美文欣赏
It happened to be a beautiful summer afternoon, and Mr. Phillip
was taking a walk in the downtown area of Paris, capital of France.
When he turned to a street corner, he heard the voice of a lovely French singer coming from a nearby restaurant. The sweet music attracted him, so he went into the restaurant to hear it better.
Mr. Phillip sat down quietly at a table near the door. Noticing the waiter come over, he ordered a glass of French wine’
The waiter returned with the glass of wine and put it on the table. Mr. Phillip started drinking the wine slowly and watched the other people in the restaurant.
There were three customers sitting at a table near him. He could tell by their accents that one of them was an American, one an Englishman and the third man was a funny-looking stranger. The polite waiter served each of the three men a glass of beer. By chance, each glass had a fly in it.
Out of curiosity(好奇心), Mr. Phillip watched carefully what they were going to do. To his amusement, he found that each of them took quite a different attitude. The American picked up his glass, took a hard look at the fly, and then poured the fly and half of his beer on the floor. The Englishman looked into the glass, noticed the fly and reached for a spoon, with which he took the fly out of the beer and drank the rest of it. And the stranger noticed the fly in the beer, picked it with his fingers, squeezed(捏紧)it carefully in order to save every drop of the beer, and then drank it up. 这篇228字的短文讲述了一个带有滑稽色彩的小故事，在轻松的一笑之后，我们还应该看到它具有典型的“事件描写”特征:
Who--Mr. Phillip and the other three;
When---a beautiful summer afternoon; Where---a restaurant in Paris;
What---something funny;
How---Mr. Phillip watched the three drinking beer.
其次，我们应该注意短文中用了基本上不重复的34个动词和8个非谓语动词，使得整个事件动静结合，可读性强。
同时，作者在描述三人对同一事件的处理上也各有不同，颇有民族特色。
另外，短文的结尾干净利落，出乎意料，令人忍俊不禁的同时又很想知道：第三人是哪国人？
推荐背诵文段
常用表达法
1. 写作技巧
1）叙述完整5个W（5 Ws）:
Who, What, When, Where, How,(Why)
2）描写生动3要点（Vivid description）:
Using different verbs;
Using verbs;
Using proper prepositions.
3）写好开头与结尾（A good beginning and a good ending）
A good beginning---引人入胜
A good ending ---回味良久4）时态语态要贴切（Good tenses and proper voices）
2. 表达技巧
1)用好过渡词，使文章前后连贯
(1) 表示时间过程的：
now, then, afterwards, five minutes later, soon, before long, after supper, to this day, just now, just then
（2）表示前因后果的：
because, because of, since, thanks to, so, as a result, thus ,therefore, luckily, unfortunately
（3）表示同等并列的：
and, also, as well as, and then
（4）表示解释说明的：
that is to say, for example, and so on, such as, according to, for this reason
2)把握两个原则，用好不同时态
（1）“一致”的原则：在同一时段中的动作、状态等应该用同一种时态，形成一种并列结构。
误：He had gone to the market, buys some flowers and then returned home.
正：He went to the market, bought some flowers and then returned home.
误：He will go abroad after he finishes his high school education and studies there until he gets his doctor’s degree.
正：He will go abroad after he finishes his high school education and (will) study there until he gets his doctor’s degree.
（2）“呼应”的原则：在同一句话中或在同一段文段中，一般不能产生时态的“跳跃”，应形成一种呼应状态。
误：He said he has been there for three days and he will leave the next day.
正：He said he had been there for three days and he would leave the next day.
规则一：和一般过去时“呼应”的时态应该是过去完成时、过去将来时或过去进行时。
误：He has lived in this old house since he had been a child and he would move into a new house soon. He works in an office not far from his new house.
正：He has lived (has been living)in this old house since he was a child and he will move into a new house soon. He works in an office not far from his new house.
规则二：和现在完成（进行）时“呼应”的时态不应该是过去完成时或过去将来时，反之亦然。
写作练习
(NMET98)五月三日，你参观了一个农场，请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
注意：1.日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；
2.词数100左右。
习作点评
May 3rd suny
It’s a lovely day today! The students of our school visited the Red Star farm.
In the morning, we get together at the gate of the No.1 Middle School, then full of happy, we were singing and laughing on our way to the farm.
We walked and arrived at the farm nearly at noon, there we received a warm welcome. After that, the farmers guided us to see many kinds of vegetables, telling us a lot of knowledge about those plants, asking us to taste some fresh fruites.In the middle of the day, we had a picnic on the farm, talking with each other. Then we held a small party, singing and dancing with the beautiful music.
Time also flies quickly, we had to say goodbye to the farmers. Twilight was falling as we returned to our school.
Night is coming, I am still excited about the visit today, washing to have a second chance to visit the farm again.
日记格式；suny应为Sunny
farm也应大写为Farm
记述过去，应为got
on our way 改为all the way更好
telling 与asking用得好
with 应为to
also多余
结尾较好。但有两处不妥：1.washing似为wishing之误 ；2.a second chance与 again意义重复。
参考范文
May 3 Sunday Fine
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well! At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sun-shine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
篇4：高考书面表达专练（第一节）
第一节
描写某个地方（Describing a place）
美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）
Santa Fe, the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A., is in the central part of the state, on the Santa Fe River, which flows into the Rio Grande 35 kilometers west of the city. More than two thousand meters above sea level, it lies in the Sangre de Cristo Mountains with the Ortiz Mountains to the southeast. Santa Fe was founded in 1609 by the Spanish on an old Indian village. In 1680 the Indians seized the place but only held it for twelve years before the Spanish retook it. the city remained under Spanish rule until Mexico won its independence in 1821. From then on it was a Mexican city until 1846 when it was taken over by U.S.A. troops.
With a population of 48,953,Santa Fe is now the second largest city in the state. Because of its sunny weather, rich history and surrounding mountains, it is a good place for holiday makers. Besides hunting and skating in the mountains people enjoy shopping in the Indian and Spanish shops, which brings a large income to the city every year. In summer there is an international opera season when operas are shown in a partly- roofed, openair theatre daily for people from all over the world. (Adapted from MET1993)
本篇文段选自1993年高考阅读理解部分。全文仅用205个单词就向读者清晰地描画了Santa Fe这个地方的地理位置、人口状况、资源特色，特别是用较大篇幅叙述了此处的历史变迁等地方特征。全文有详有略，重点突出。
文中追溯历史的片段（划线部分）尤其值得借鉴；学习时请注意其中表示时间的连词、介词，几个动词的用法以及主动、被动时态交互应用的特色。
另外，同位语the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A.,介词结构With a population of, Because of, besides等的使用亦使文段显得紧凑、连贯。
推荐背诵文段
常用表达法(Useful expressions)
1.所处位置（Location）
Our school lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of…/between/among…
The temple stands at the foot of/on the top of…
Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has experienced many changes in this area.
There stands an old temple near the river.
2.周边环境（Surroundings）
The beautiful town is located/situated on the west of the lake/to the west of the mountain/in the west of the province.
West of the city stands a tall building.
Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east.
3.人口（Population）
Japan has a small population of …China is a developing country ,with a population of 130 million.
The population here is increasing year by year.
Eighty percent of the population here are farmers.
4.面积（Area）
Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers an area of …
Tiananmen Square, covering an area of…,is the largest square in the world.
This square is meters long and 1500 meters wide.
Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.
5.历史（History）
China has a history of over 5000 years.
Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history.
Built in the16th century, the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history.
6.名胜（Places of interest）
In Sydney, there are many places of interest , such as the Opera House.
The Opera House in Sydney is one of the most well-known places of interest in the world.
Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest, among which is the Opera House.
7.特色(Something Special)
Development,
best season
写作练习
根据以下内容写一篇100词左右的说明文，标题为“Australia”。
1)、澳大利亚位于太平洋的西侧，是大洋洲（Oceania）最大的国家，面积760万平方公里。
2)、人口稀少，只有1，000多万，多数集中在东部沿海地区。
3)、首都堪培拉（Canberra）风景秀丽。
4)、悉尼（Sydney）是澳大利亚最大城市。有许多名胜，其中悉尼歌剧院（Opera House）闻名于世。奥运会就是在悉尼举行的。
习作点评
Australia, to the west of the Pacific Ocean, is the largest country in Oceania, which is about 7,600,000 square kilometers.
Although Australia is so large a country, it has a sparse population, which is only more than 10 million. And most of the people live together in the East Part by the sea.
Australia is an attractive place. Canberra is the capital, and it has very charming scenery. But it is not the largest city in Australia. In fact, Sydney is the largest one. There are a lot of places of intrest. Especially the Opera House is so famous that almost everybody living in the world knows it. And the 24th Olympic Games was held in Sydney in 2000.So you can see that how important the Sydney is.
In a word, if you want to travel abroad，Australia is a right place. 应加上标题Australia
此句后应加上in size
together为赘词
此处But及下文In fact过渡自然巧妙
interest拼写错误
准确
简洁
was held应为were held
专有名词Sydney前不应加the
结尾自然
参考范文
Australia, the largest country in Oceania, lies on the west coast of the Pacific. It covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a small population of over 10 million. Most of its population live in the east of the country by the sea. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest. The Opera House is well known all over the world. The 2000 Olympic Games were held in Sydney.
篇5：阅读表达专练及解析
试题预览
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With rapid increase of economic rate in western countries, more and more married young couples tend to have no child or only one. At the meantime, many developing nations adopt family planning policy to get rid of poverty. All these facts result in a world with population growth rate declining. But I myself would like to grow up in a big family.
Of course, a small family had its advantages. Firstly, small family makes it easier for parents to bring up and educate their children. Parents could spend more time and money educating one child than several. The child could grow up in an influential environment. Secondly, the child could learn more survival skills for future success.
However, ______________________. The only child becomes the little emperor. It would make the one child ask more for him and think less of others. Besides, after the child grows up and gets married, the new couple has to take care of four old parents. That means the two children must work hard to support the old parents. At present, many nations are facing the problem of becoming aged society. China will face this situation in a short time to come.
On the contrary, a big family weighs over a small family in many aspects. Firstly, parents could educate several children with almost the same time as they spend with one. Moreover, the old brothers or sisters also could help their parents bring up little children. Secondly, if one of the children turns out to be successful, it may mean he or she is becoming a model for other children to learn from.
Despite the fact that parents have to spend more time and money bringing up several children, it is not as difficult as people think it to be. With the help of good educational system and modern technology, it is becoming easier to afford several children.
1. What is the writer’s attitude whether it is good to grow up in a big family? (Please answer within 10 words.)
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2. Translate the underlined sentence in the first paragraph into Chinese.
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3. What’s the main idea of the second paragraph? (Please answer within 10 words.)
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4. Please fill in the blank with proper words or phrases. (Please answer within 10 words.)
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5. What else do you think will help afford several children besides what is mentioned in the article? (Please answer within 20 words.)
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1. He would like to grow up in a big family. / The writer supports the idea of a big family. / The writer thinks big families have more advantages.
解析：根据文章的最后一段可以判断作者的观点。
2. 同时，许多发展中国家为了摆脱贫困实行了计划生育政策。
解析：adopt family planning是“实施计划生育政策的意思”。
3. A small family had its advantages. / Advantages of small families.
解析：第二段的第一句即为本段的主题句(Topic Sentence)。
4. the small families also have their disadvantages
解析：根据上下文逻辑关系判断，该句应该是说小的家庭的弊端。
5. The better living conditions can also help to afford several children.
解析：本题是开放性试题，可以有多种答案，这里只提供其中一种。
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Reading to oneself is a modern activity which was almost unknown to the learned in the early days of the history, while during the fifteenth century the term “reading” undoubtedly meant reading aloud. Only during the nineteenth century did silent reading become popular.
One should be careful, however, of supposing that silent reading came about simply because reading aloud is distraction to others. Examination of reasons connected with the historical development of silent reading shows that it became the usual mode of reading for most adult reading tasks mainly because the tasks themselves changed in character.
The last century saw a gradual increase in literacy (读写能力) and thus in the number of readers. As readers increased, the number of listeners dropped, and thus there was some reduction in the need to read aloud. As reading for the benefit of listeners grew less common, so came the popularity of reading as a private activity in such public places as libraries, trains and offices, where reading aloud would disturb other readers in a way.
Towards the end of the century there was still heated argument over whether books should be used for information or treated respectfully, and over whether the reading of material such as newspapers was in some way mentally weakening. Indeed this argument remains with us still in education. However, whatever its advantages, the old shared literacy culture had gone and was replaced by the printed mass media on the one hand and by books and magazines for a specialized readership _________.
By the end of the century students were being advised to have some new ideas of books and to use skills in reading them which were not proper, if not impossible, for the oral reader. The social, cultural, and technological developments in the century had greatly changed what the term “reading” referred to.
1. What is the writer of this passage attempting to do? (Please answer within 10 words)
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2. Find out the sentence in the passage which can replace the following one.
It shouldn’t be generally considered that it was the disturbance to others that led to the popularity of silent reading.
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3. Please translate the underlined sentence in the passage into Chinese.
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4. Please fill in the blank with proper words and phrases. (Please answer within 10 words)
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5. What did the development of silent reading during the nineteenth century show? (Please answer within 10 words)
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1. To explain how present reading habits developed.
解析：本题属于主旨概括题，作者的目的在于解释现在的阅读习惯
篇6：高考英语课堂：书面表达
高考英语课堂：书面表达
首先，我们来看看书面表法的评分标准。书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求：“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看，每篇文章都有“亮”点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的'“亮”点。
一、词汇选择－标新立异
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析：is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析：B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished，这比good语气强，也显得生动。
在造句时，“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句－与众不同
在造句时，既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
篇7：高考英语书面表达节选
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame-they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.
Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
2.福建省高考书面表达
假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容要求：
1.描述漫画内容； 2.发表个人感想。
注意：
1. 短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数； 2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3. 词数120左右; 4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇: 告示牌sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.
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篇8：高考英语书面表达节选
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
3.20重庆市书面表达
某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换（exchange）。请你用英文在该网站上发帖，发布物品交换信息。
内容应包括：
你将拿出什么物品进行交换
具体介绍该物品
你希望换回什么物品
请愿意交换的朋友给你留言
注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）格式不限；（3）文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。
篇9：高考英语书面表达节选
Hello everyone!
I have a great book about learning useful English skills that I want to trade with someone.
I bought the book two years ago and the contents are all about how to learn English grammar and vocabulary. There are many useful skills and methods in the book and it may be helpful to your English learning. I want to exchange the book for a Chinese dictionary. I need a portable dictionary, because I want to look up some common words on the go.
If you want to exchange your portable Chinese dictionary with me, please send me a message. My email is lyce@163.com. Thanks a lot.
4. 2012年浙江省高考书面表达
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子:“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” 请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：
1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；2.举例说明理由；
3.注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”
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