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下面是小编整理的高考英语满分作文真题分析，本文共17篇，欢迎大家阅读分享借鉴，欢迎大家分享。本文原稿由网友“MIDSUN”提供。

篇1：高考英语满分作文真题分析

题目：

你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：

1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;

2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;

3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

注意：

1.词数不少于50.

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Joe

考点：考察提纲类作文

写作指导：

本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友Chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。

要点：

1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;

2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;

3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【一句多译】

我可以建议把旅行推迟到8月份早些时候吗?

(1)Can I suggest that we put it off until early august?

(2)Would you mind if we we put it off until early august?

【参考范文】

Dear Chris,

How is everything going?

I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.

I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Joe

篇2：高考英语真题满分作文参考

满分作文(陕西卷)题目

假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受。

注意：1.短文词数不少于100;

2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数;

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

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【范文】

I’m an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.

Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.

At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.

英语作文(湖南卷)题目：

湖南卷高考英语作文主要是通过英语作文讲述一次关于他人或者是自己的经历，主要是需要考生把给出的关键词，镶嵌进去，match winner loser result。

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【范文】

Last week, a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two.

The players from both sides are all excellent basketball players, so the match went on fiercely at first. At last the result is: the winner is Cass Two, and we were the loser.

We didn’t win the match, but we didn’t lose heart. One the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and match comes second. On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret. In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there’s no need feeling regret for these failures. What’ more， we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for the next time.

In a word, success is important, so is failure, because it’s the mother of success

篇3：英语高考真题作文满分

英语作文(山东卷)题目：

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件：

1. 未及时回复的原因;

2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

注意： 1. 字数：120~150;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【试题点评】

今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于山东卷(道歉信)和四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。

【经典套路】

第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的

第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)

第三段：“假期安排”部分

第四段：补充说明+客套话

【范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? (问候) Youasked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation。(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply withoutdelay。(写信目的)

How I wish I would read and reply youremail as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final examat that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but tocompletely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make thesame choice。(第二段为道歉信常见套路)

By the way, I have a busy schedule for mysummer vacation。(主题句) First and foremost, I would do apart time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved。(拓展句1)

Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course inthe New Oriental School。(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as avolunteer for the school as a teaching assistant。(拓展句3)

These are my plan for the summer vacation.What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply。(以合理的客套话结尾)

英语作文(湖北卷)题目：

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”， but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语;

②除诗歌外，文体不限;

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

④词数为120左右。

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【思路点拨】本文以“我们应该意识到，言语也可能会伤害别人”为题，让学生写一篇短文。体裁可为记叙文、议论文和说明文。但根据考生的实际情况，还是记叙文好些，可以通过自己的亲身体验来证明这句话。考生成文时应注意：1.结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题;第二段讲自己的亲身体验;第三段说自己的认识，回归主题。2.时态：以一般过去时为主。3.人称：第一人称。4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

【范文】

My classmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.

One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it.I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate's face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn't been helped by others.My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.

Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative.We should avoid hurting others if we can't always be encouraging when we speak.

篇4：高考英语真题满分作文

题目：

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.

注意：

①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语;

②除诗歌外，文体不限;

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

④词数为120左右。

范文：

As is widely acknowledged, whatever small good deeds we do can definitely make a big difference in our life. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during my Senior One school life.

One day, when I was wandering through the street, I suddenly witnessed an old man fall to the ground. Without hesitation, I hurried to help him stand up and rested him in a street chair nearby. What surprised me most was that some classmates warned me not to do it again as the family might mistake me for the offender. I was so frustrated that I almost accepted the fact that I had really done something improper. It was my parents’ approval and the teachers’ praise as well as the family’s gratitude that helped me the good deed I had done. From then on, whenever possible and wherever necessary, I am always willing to give a helping hand to those in need. It wasn’t long before I was chosen as one example in our school for helping others.

From this story, I am absolutely convinced that small kind deeds are worth doing in spite that we may be wronged for this. Only in this way can we contribute to building a harmonious society.

篇5：高考英语满分真题作文

满分作文(安徽卷)题目

假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。

内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规;2.注意举止文明。

注意：1.词数120左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数

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【范文】

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.

I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.

满分作文(辽宁卷)题目

―个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一;2. 家人团聚;3. 赏月、吃月饼; 4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake

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【范文】

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

篇6：满分英语作文真题参考

满分作文(新课标卷II)题目

假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

2. 象征意义

3. 价格

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头已为你写好。

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【范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!

满分作文(重庆卷)

看图作文，一定要仔细看清楚，图画中的每一个细节，同时把整个照顾生病的妈妈的细节记录清楚。

【提醒】考生们平时还要注意多多的积累英语句型，这样才能让英语作文有高分。

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【范文】

I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree. Though I know Mum is the most important person in my world, I just can not do what she likes me to do. It seems that I quite often stay away from my dear mum in playing my phone, sleeping, hanging out with my friend, or just shutting out my mum in my room.

Having read about the above common complaint from so many mothers, I feel ashamed and guilty. From now on, I shall try my best to stay with my dear parents as often as possible. I must confess we young generation must realize that our parents care for us as well as hoping to share what we have been doing with them.

篇7：中考满分作文真题分析

有人说，女人是世界上最麻烦的动物。而女孩似乎也很麻烦，但女孩也有不少优点．

女孩子心灵手巧，干起事来比较利索。在我的印象中，从小到大做值日，都是女孩子扫地多，可能就是因为这个原因，一张平平凡凡的纸，到了女孩手中，不一会儿就会变成一只只展翅高飞的千纸鹤；一根又细又长的吸管，到了女孩的手中，只见吸管不多久接成了一颗美丽的幸运星．记得一本书上讲，女孩子经过练习，很快就能写出娟秀的字来呢！

女孩子情感丰富，朗读课文往往比男孩子有感情，念起诗来也显得更加柔情似水。不过，情感丰富也是女孩子的一个缺点。有时，看看电视连续剧也会泪流满面。有时，小磕小碰也会哭个没完没了。所以，男孩总以为女孩只会哭啊闹啊．因此，有利亦有弊也！

女孩子爱美，总爱打扮自己。但爱美之心人皆有之，也就不为过了。平时，一个蝴蝶结，一根丝带，一个小挂件，都会成为女孩子的心爱之物，爱不释手。一些女孩子的书包上往往会挂满了小饰品可多了也就显得杂了。但女孩子们仍是＂乐死不疲＂．

女孩子心眼小，常常会为了一些芝麻绿豆的小事吵起来。比如谁买了一支和谁一样的笔，其中一个便说另一个学自己的样子．再比如某某同学最近跟别人玩而没有找原来的伙伴，两人也会吵得不可开交。

女孩子爱干净，不像某些男孩，一件衣服穿了又穿，穿了还穿都不洗．女孩子总喜欢浑身上下都干净，从头发一直到鞋子．

女孩子的思想比较保守，总是抱着一种男女授受不亲的态度，因此很少有女孩跟男生打成一片．

女孩子……

所以说，女孩的心思你别猜，你怎么猜也猜不明白。在下奉劝一句，调皮的boy还是少惹girl比较好！

篇8：高考英语作文真题

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节情景作文（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的'先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。

注意：1、日记的开头已为你写好。

2、词数不少于60.

Saturday, June 2 Fine

（请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

第二节开放作文（15分）

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50.

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.

（请务必将开放作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

答案：

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节情景作文（20分）

一、内容要点：

1、发现

2、询问

3、告诉线路

4、分别

二、One possible version:

Saturday June 2

This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and

advised them to take Bus No. 20, the bus came. We waved good-bye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.

第二节开放作文（15分）

One possible version:

I think the white pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the black pencil by saying

In reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.

篇9：高考英语真题作文评析

【北京卷】

【试题回放】

第一节情景作文(20分)

美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：

1. 信的开头已为你写好。

2.词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,

I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。

【全国卷I】

【试题回放】

假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。

注意：

1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：牛津――Oxford 费用――fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours,

Li Hua

篇10：高考英语作文真题

【例文】

Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year.The college entrance examination is approaching day by day.Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count.

It cannot be denied that they have their own time schedule after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room.What’s important，with their morns taking care of them，they can spare more time for studies.However，there exist some disadvantages.For example，sometimes their minds go wandering easily without competitors round.Furthermore，a student who is left alone to study at rather an easy atmosphere tends to get distracted or even feel tired easily.

In spite of the fact that the dorm life is full of fun and friendship，noisy songs and shouts in the dorms after evening classes only quiet down long after the blackout at 10：30 p. m.，leading to a serious lack of sleep，I think.Worse still，they don’t make fullest use of time to study so，from my perspective.I prefer to live in the rented room.

【译文】

时间仿佛加快只要到他们的最终和重要year.The高考学生的步骤是接近一天day.Quite不少学生已经从宿舍出来，在学校附近的一个出租房住，使每分钟数。

不能否认，他们有自己的时间后，班级的时间表，容易在他们的小room.What'单独集中教训很重要，他们的早晨，对他们的照顾，他们可以腾出更多的时间用于studies.However，也存在一些缺点。例如，有时他们的头脑去流浪很容易没有竞争对手round.Furthermore，一谁是独自学习的气氛，而一个学生往往容易分心，甚至觉得容易疲倦。

鉴于该宿舍生活的乐趣和友谊，充分和嘈杂的音乐班后，晚上才安静下来后不久，在10:30停电山口尽管在宿舍条留言米，导致睡眠严重不足，我think.Worse的是，他们不从我perspective.I充分的时间来研究，以便使用，宁愿住在出租房内。

抗震救灾，众志成城

1、考题示例

假设你是李华，在得知四川大地震的消息之后，作为校学生会主席，你决定给灾区的中学生写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

1、得知四川发生突如其来的特大地震灾害，心情非常难过;

2、看到你们表现得非常镇定、坚强，感动得热泪盈眶;

3、患难见真情，全校师生向你们表示慰问的同时，共计捐款12万元;

4、美好家园可以重建，希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。

参考词汇：捐款 make a donation to

例文：

Dear friends,

I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. A better hometown can be rebuilt. Therefore, never give up whatever happens. Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

篇11：高考英语真题作文

“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。

要求如下：1. 简述你对这句名言的理解;

2. 用一个具体事例加以说明;

3. 给出恰当的结尾。

注意：1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数)：

2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。

【优秀满分范文】

Planning Is Good ,but Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful prounnciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

篇12：高考英语真题作文

假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

篇13：高考英语作文高考真题

高考英语作文例文高考真题

请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，就漫画主题发表感想，题目自拟。参考词汇：公民道德civic virtue

本文要求描述漫画内容，结合生活实际，就漫画主题发表感想。体裁为议论文，人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。先读懂漫画含义，抓主体;然后展开合理想象，揭寓意;最后根据实际，谈认识。

1.细心审阅画面，包括提示文字，描述漫画。本文写清以下要点⑴随地吐痰;⑵乱扔香蕉皮;⑶孩子手拿《公民道德》，询问谁丢了公民道德⑷发表议论。

2.联系实际，揣摩画面寓意。

3.遣词造句

①see sb do sth

②throw sth on the ground

③The boy handing the book, shouted, Who lose civic virtue?

④I wish

4.根据画面构思，连句成文。

Who Lose Civic Virtue?

One day, a child went home after class. On his way home, he saw some adults spit on the ground. On the other side of the road, a man threw the garbage on the ground after eating a banana. The child found a book Civic Virtue, lying on the ground. So he picked up the book and shouted, Who lose civic virtue?

The childs words should make people think more. Now, many people are scared of civic virtue, and dont protect public environment at all. I wish this cartoon can wake their virtue and make our life better.

篇14：高考真题作文满分展示

高考英语满分作文(福建卷)题目：

如今孩子的成长以及教育问题是社会议论纷纷的话题，福建高考英语作文题目就以这个话题，配有一副漫画图。对父母包揽一切，孩子过度依赖父母的现象进行评析。看到了这样的漫画，你想到的什么呢?为同学们提供一篇范文，看看都是从哪几方面谈论，有什么地方是值得我们学习的呢?

内容要求：1.描述漫画内容;2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题; 3. 提出你的看法。

注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;

2.词数120左右;

3.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;

4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:pave the way

_________________________________________________________________

【范文】

From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. One possible version:

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son , well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

篇15：江苏高考满分作文及真题

江苏高考满分作文及真题

【作文题目】

根据以下材料,选取角度,自拟题目,写一篇不少于800字的文章;文体不限,诗歌除外。

有人说,没有什么是不朽的,只有青春是不朽的。也有人说,青年人不相信有朝一日会老去,这种感觉其实是天真的,我们自欺欺人地抱有一种像自然一样长存不朽的信念。

【范文】

狂童之狂也且

《诗经》中曾描写过这样一位年轻女子：她隔着湍急的河流，对着心爱的男子大喊：“你若喜欢我，我便摄衣渡河来找你;你若不喜欢我，我便另寻他人，向我提亲的人排了满大街哩!”文末发出“狂童之狂也且”的感慨。

好一个将青春挥洒到极致，用专属青春的奔放，洒脱地去爱、去恨的女子!

如此女子，必坚信青春不朽。用年轻人的狂妄、潇洒去践行人生的人，即使到了头童齿豁之日，内心深处必定还珍藏着一段明丽而永不朽蚀的青春。

可现实似乎并不如此。明明是“日出之光”、“日中之阳”，却感叹着青春不再，用理性而僵硬的公式，计算着青春逝去的那一天，嘲笑着坚信青春不朽之人的天真无知。这样的人，色未衰而心已老。以老成持重的视角看待本该绚烂多彩的青春，以至于暮气与戾气过早地染指他们的生命。上世纪的伦敦，曾流行刚毕业的医科大学生蓄起络腮胡、戴上金丝镜的“时尚”，以此来彰显自己的老到医术。然而，与之俱来的是腐败、贿赂之芽的潜滋暗长。

草让青春仆从于暮气。以“青春不朽”的观点看待生命，并不是虚妄地渴求永葆童颜，生命不逝;而是让一颗激越洒脱的，甚至“狂傲”的心永远跳跃。“不朽”与“逝去”其实并不矛盾，外在、表象、肉体可以逝去，内在、精神、灵魂却可以不朽。正如金岳霖先生在独居生活中与孩子们一起斗鸡，正如《射雕英雄传》中洪七公疯疯癫癫顽劣不堪却同时豁达善良。

英谚中的一句“年老而勿衰”。年老之人尚不能衰颓，更何况青年们?青年是时代的晴雨表，是潮流的扬帆人。“少年强则国强，少年富则国富，少年进步则国进步，少年自由则国自由”。那么，少年青春则国青春!若是人人都保持一颗“狂”心，则人人都是少年，时代便朝气蓬勃，生意盎然。

朋友，无论你的年龄，绽放青春之花吧!愿“狂童”之心，去热烈地拥抱太阳!

一事能狂便青春

诗人纪德在《先知的花园》中说：“时光易逝，唯有你的青春之心不会老。”

的确，“老去”是自然的`不可抗拒的规律，但正如王国维先生那句“一事能狂便青春”，物质会腐朽，但保持一份青春心气，执著、积极，纵然我们白发苍颜，心却不会颓然老去。青春便作为一种精神存在，石古不废。

6月13日即将近来八十华诞的戴尅戎老先生，便是极好的典范。作为中国工程院院士，享誉海内外的骨科专家，高龄的他仍活跃在科研、医疗第一线。青春之心是他不竭的动力。他说：“我喜欢一切从头开始，像一个青年人一样地去工作。”正因如此，他才能像青年人一样，始终保持对新科技的高度热情，并将它们运用到医学领域，不断发明出类似于“形状记忆加压骑缝钉”的“魔术般的金属制品”。

戴尅戎先生喜欢这样一句话：“公爵是因为偶然的出身才成为公爵，而贝多芬是靠自己成为贝多芬的。”我要说，是青春心气使戴尅戎成为了那个老当益壮、青春不朽的戴尅戎。

青春心气，是青春不朽的催化剂;是对生和死，青年和老年，人生和宇宙的富有审美情怀的考量。古往今来，历史化作尘埃，但总有一些人的青春心气，如炳烛之明，不朽地燃烧着。

我们不会忘记，诗人拜伦怀着少年心气、青春之心，完成了诗人到革命战士的角色转换。我们不会忘记，当伤痕累累的海明威从战场上退下来，以一种怎样的执著勇敢、热情求索，开辟了一条艰辛卓绝的写作道路。海明威有言：“那时的巴黎对我，是一个流动的圣节。”是啊，一个始终怀有青春心气的人，他的每一步都将不朽，都是一个流动的圣节。

当《黄金时代》里那一群理想青年：鲁迅、萧红、丁玲怀着狂热用他们的文字呼告历史的来人;当史铁生带着青春的质朴在轮椅上放声歌唱，新时代的我们有什么理由失落于生命之将老，而不积极地面对生活?

清华大学有一句口号：“为祖国健康工作五十年!”作为初出茅庐的我们，更应当胸怀青春心气，去营造健康的新世纪!

一事能狂便青春，虽向死而生，但青春不朽!

篇16：高考英语满分作文分析

作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1、词数：100左右;2、参考词汇：房租―Tent(n.).

作品一：

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

作品二：

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport,see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

作品三：

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

作品四：

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

篇17：历年高考语文真题满分作文

纪历史峥嵘，念初心岁月

时间是河，纪念日是河岸上的塔；时间是路，纪念日是路上的碑。于人生之路上行走，我回首望见那些日子在往昔熠熠生辉，我将历史融化在灵魂里；我抬头，望见那些日子在未来发出眼光芒，我将初心镌刻于心房上。纪念日，是纪历史峥嵘，念初心岁月，而后奔向远方。

它是岁月的注脚，是成长的路标。

纪念日之于个人，代表着人生一个个重要的节点。我们的生命，正是由一个个纪念日所代表的岁月组成的。带着懵懂无知走进校园的那一天，带着满腔热血加入共青团的那一天，带着青春热情戴上学士帽的那一天，我们纪念它们，因为它们见证了成长。纪念日之于国家，代表着伟大复兴的百年征程，是国家的历史上最宏伟的篇章。嘉兴南湖红船上的觉醒，长征路上生死攸关的转折，改革开放时满载希望的挥笔，我们纪念它们因为它们见证了历史与发展。纪念日是个人与国家发展道路上的碑，碑上刻着岁月和成长。

它是历史的敲钟人，钟声长鸣于时代之下。

百年征程波澜壮阔，百年初心历久弥坚，建党_年提醒人们时刻铭记历史，铭记先辈的牺牲和热血，铭记革命路上的胜利与挫折。“五四”运动，前辈们以革命者的姿态唤起民族的觉醒新民主主义革命，共产党人以探索者的姿态寻求道路;新中国成立后，全体人民以建设者的姿态投身于伟大实践。7月1日这个纪念日不仅教我们“为有牺牲多壮志，敢教日月换新天”，还提醒我们要时刻总结前人经验，吸取教训，更好地建设中国。纪念日为人民敲响历史的警钟，长鸣于社会主义天空之下，长鸣于每个国人的心中。

它是初心的承载者，传承使命于世代之间。

人们为纪念日的到来而庆祝，不是庆祝那日历上的数字，而是庆祝当年的一腔热血、一段深情、一片真心。而因此，纪念日也不单单是那具体的一天，只要矢志不渝，不忘初心，纪念日便是心中的一盏明灯，照往日岁月，亮今日前路。“柔蚕老去应无憾，要见天孙织锦成，一生不休只为将吟诵留给世界的叶嘉莹；“代表人民的利益”，将满目青山化为丰碑只为与共和国同进步的申纪兰；七攀珠峰，两下南极，只为用汗水和生命丈量广袤土地的国测一大队……他们不忘初心，因此有了无穷的精神力量。我辈青年当将初心从纪念开始的那一天传承，跨越世代，绽放光芒。

纪历史峥嵘，念初心岁月，将“纪念什么、为了什么纪念”铭记于心而后全力以赴，是最大程度地发挥纪念日的意义的有益之举。期望吾辈青年铭记历史，不忘初心，在新时代的浪潮中，劈波斩浪，奋勇前行，书写新的时代华章。

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