下面是小编整理的托福作文人物类话题段子,本文共5篇,希望对大家有所帮助。本文原稿由网友“colin7749”提供。
篇1:托福作文人物类话题段子
托福人物类话题万能段子
人物题要分类讨论
我们首先给人物题分分类。
主要分为两种:普通人(ordinary people)和名人(celebraties)。
今天,先详细讲讲第一种——普通人。
普通人里面,ETS主要考察五种人,我们直接看一下往年的真题:
1 What characteristics do you think a good neighbor should have?(邻居)
2 What do you think makes someone a good parent?(家人)
3 Describe a special friend in your childhood.(朋友)
4 Talk about your favorite teacher.(老师)
5 What qualities do you think a good leader should have?(领导)
答题时只需围绕
一个品质展开
对于一个普通人来说,我们在进行回答的时候只需要围绕一个品质展开讨论,就可以套用到任何普通人的题目中去。
也就是说,准备段子时,普通人的准备原则就是2个形容词2个例子。
这些品质可以有:hard-working, intelligent, a sense of humor, brave, helpful, a sense of responsibility, knowledgeable等等。
比如,我们选取乐于助人(helpful)这个品质,那么老师、家长、上司、朋友、邻居这五类人都可以使用;
例子也可以通用,比如出差的时候照看孩子或者宠物这个例子就可以用于这五类人。
我们下面以刚刚提到的第四题作为例题来分析一下。
Talk about your favorite teacher. Using specific details and examples to explain why you like her.
?首先第一步,我们需要决定我们的描述对象。
这里我们选择英语老师-I really like my English teacher in my high school.
?第二步,我们需要简单的对这个人进行一下描述。
上面提到的描述的切入点很多,注意只要不跟我们的理由点重合便可。
比如,她教英语已经了-she's been teaching English in our high school for ten years.
_小tip:我们对描述对象进行描述的时候,建议使用定语从句,用一个who来引出描述切入点。上面的描述就变成了:I really like my English teacher in my high school who has been teaching English for more than ten years.这样的回答比你单句的回答要“高大上”很多,能让考官看到你的英语水平。
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第三步,我们想一个理由点。
比如我们选择creativity.这个老师的课很有趣,她比较创新。
于是我们的分论点就变成:
I like her mainly because she's really creative and her class is really interesting.
?第四步,我们开始举例子或者作比较。
可以讲一次有趣的上课经历,比如老师上课让我们分组做游戏,赢了的小组可以赢得奖品;
也可以列举一下这个老师的上课风格,然后提出另一个老师的上课跟他作对比。
这样,一个结构完整的回答就准备好了:
Well, personally speaking, I really like my math teacher Linda, mainly because her class is interesting and I could really learn a lot. She divided us into several groups and gave up a lot of time of discuss one specific topic which is cool. And we could do some game in the class like spelling bee and stuff. Most importantly, she assigned us presentation tasks rather than the rigid written assignments which are boring. As a result we can only be in learning math but also practice the communication skill. So she is my favorite teacher.
注:斜体部分是要留意的地方,回答的时候加进去这些内容(情感态度词、详细的列举、逻辑连词等),能让文章听起来更自然、更有说服力,考官听了也不会觉得很单薄。
但是!
这样的回答,如果发音不错也只能拿到3分(fair);如果发音差一点那就只2分(limited)左右了。
为什么?
问题就出在了我一直跟大家强调的ETS口语评分标准之一语言使用(language use)上面。
单词的选择没有问题,没有使用写作词汇,很自然。
但是,语法问题就比较多了。
首先,时态问题。整个文章的展开都是一般说明,不存在过去时态,所以划线部分的过去时态都应该改成一般现在时态。
其次,短语及各种搭配用法不当。如give up是放弃,这里只有“给”的意思,所以改成give;of discuss这里根据句意应该是to discuss;assignment应该是复数形式,和前面的tasks平行;not only...but also没有用对。
把这些问题都改正一下,其实就是一个满分的版本了:
Well, my favorite teacher is my English teacher in my high school, who has been teaching English for ten years. I like her mainly because her class is really interesting. I could really learn a lot in the class. I mean, she would spilt us up into several groups and give each group a specific topic to talk about; she also let us take part in in-class games where we could be rewarded, like getting a bar of chocolate or something if we win. We could remember all those English words and grammar while enjoying the games and stuff. Most teachers, however, will do all the talking in the class, which is boring and it seriously makes me feel sleepy.
加粗部分显示了整个文章的逻辑:简单又清晰。
下划线部分能够看出对人物的描述和对事情的细化。
下面我们再来看另一类常考人物——名人。
这次同样要给大家讲一讲:
1.应对此类题的方法
2.针对此类题Fiona常套用的万能段子。
我们先看一下往年的考试题目:
1 Describe your favorite movies star or singer.
2 Talk about two different singers.
3 Talk about a character in a movie or book you like.
4 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the opinions of celebrities such as famous actors or athletes have positive impact on young people.
对于这样的题目,我们的破题方法和普通人的破题方法一样。
对于名人的回答一般理由点可以从两个方面展开:个人成就和个人品质。
? 个人成就:如果是歌手,我们可以谈论专辑数目、粉丝数量、是否原创等;如果是演员,我们可以讨论电影类型、表演特色、获得奖项等。
? 个人品质:又回归到了普通人的品质中去,如a sense of humor, have responsibilities, easy-going等。
直接上真题: Describe your favorite singer or movie star.
我们先来看一个学生的回答,一起挑挑错误:
Jolin is my favorite singer, because she made a lot of beautiful music which cheer me up. Once I got a bad grade in English exam, and I felt sad. And I almost wanted to give up learning English. But when I listened to sound of Jolin, I felt better. The lyric in her sounds was motivated, it taught me that facing the challenge bravely and giving up something was not worthwhile. Then I gained a lot of motivation to study English.
接下来,严格根据托福口语评分标准来对这个回答进行评分。
(一)话题陈述 topic statement
优点:回答中有总观点(Jolin is my favorite singer),有分论点(because she made a lot of beautiful music which cheer me up.),也有相应的细节(Once I got a bad grade...)。
缺点:但是因为这个题目中带有“describe”,我们的回答结构就应该是MDR.这里欠缺人物描述。
一般说来,人物题都是需要对人物进行描述的,因为考官不认识这个人。这道题可以改成:I really like Jolin who is a popular singer in China.
优点:下面再来看细节。学生用了举例子的方法展开了论证,事件中包含了完整的起因、经过和结果。
缺点:小问题在于“once”的使用,我们在讲论证方法的时候就说过once这样的词太宽泛,不够具体。这里可以改为:Last month等。
(二)表达 delivery
文章整体逻辑感还不错,但是分观点和例子之间衔接不明显。也就是说分论点说完没有先解释一下就进行了举例子,感觉很生硬。这里可以加入下文斜体的句子:
Jolin is my favorite singer, because she made a lot of beautiful music which cheer me up. I mean, her songs convey positive energy which could really get me out of tough days. Once I got a bad grade in English exam, and I felt sad...
(三)语言使用 language use
文中一共6句话,却出现了7处语法或用词的错误。我们一个一个看:
a.主谓不一致。music单数,后面应该是cheers me up
b.名词单复数。可数名词之前一定要有相应的冠词a/an/the;不可数名词之前什么都不加或者加some/lots of等可以修饰名词单复数的词。所以English exam应改为English exams; lyric改为lyrics; motivation改为the motivation。
c.语义相反。facing the challenge bravely and giving up something...这句学生想表达的是:应勇敢面对困难,半途放弃不值得。但是文中的意思就变成了勇敢面对困难和中途放弃都是不值得的。应改为:we should face challenges bravely instead of giving it up easily.
d.motivate的用法。当形容物的时候,用motivating。如:the movie is really motivating;表示人得到鼓舞的时候,用motivated。如:I was really motivated.
以上问题改正后,这位学生的回答就变good啦!
除此之外,再给大家分享一个常用的高分回答:
Well, my favorite movie star is Jackie Chan who is one of the most popular action movie stars in China. I like him because he is really an excellent actor and he never use stand-ins to replace him in dangerous scenes. I remember that in one of his action movies called Who I Am, there was one scene where he had to jump from a helicopter into a river. And he did it by himself. I heard that he got hurt because of that. It was really impressive. He really is a star!
托福写作句子的改进方法
句子:
1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
2. For example, you work in a big factory.
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
6. Their brain is still very young.
改进: They are still immature.
7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
托福写作连词内容的积累
1. 表层次
first,firstly to begin with further in the first place
second,secondly to start with still furthermore
third,thirdly what is more last last but not least
also and then next besides
and equally important too moreover
besides in addtion finally
2. 表转折
by contrast although though yet
at the same time but despitethe fact that even so
in contrast nevertheless even though for all that
notwithstanding on the contarary however in spite of
on the other hand otherwise instead still
regardless
3. 表因果
therfore consequently because of for the reason
thus hence due to owing to
so accordingly thanks to on this account
since as on that account in this way
for as a result as a consequence
4. 表让步
still nevertheless concession granted naturally
in spite of all the same of course despite
even so after all
5. 表递近
furthermore moreover likewise what is more
besides also not only...but also...
too in addtion
6. 表举例
for example for instance for one thing that is
to illustrate as an illustration a case in point
7. 表解释
as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this case namely
in other words
8. 表总结
in summary in a word thus as has been said
in brief in conclusion altogether in other words
to conclude in fact finally in simpler terms
indeed in short in particular that is
in other words of course on the whole to put it differently
namely in all therefore to summarize
托福作文人物类话题万能段子
篇2:托福独立口语人物类话题
托福独立口语人物类话题梳理
1.你认为领袖必需的素质是什么
(1)信任下级:鼓励讲真话/show confidence in team-members
(2)赏罚分明:制度面前人人平等/be equal to everyone without showing favor to any particular one
(3)努力学习、勤奋工作:给大家做榜样/work hard to inspire people
(4)鼓励下级:encouraging to team-members Etc
Sample answer: (为了方便阅读,将每个小点分别列出)
Well, first of all, I think, a good leader should be encouraging enough.
For example, I had a boss, Jason, who used to say,”You are a capable young man, I know you can do it well” whenever I was not confident enough with my job. With his encouragement I was so successful in my job and became a team leader in 6 months.
Also, I believe a good leader should set good examples for all team-members. I remember my boss Jason used to workharder than any of us who were working with him in a team, even though he was the boss. We were so moved by what he did, and everybody followed his suit. So we were the most efficient team.
That's why I still remember Jason as my best boss till today.
2.你最敬重的一个人是谁?
思路:老师、父亲、母亲、领导、消防员、科学家、运动员、志愿者等等
eg. 父亲
(1)生活俭朴:live a simple life
(2)敬业精神:work hard and diligent
(3)乐于助人:be helpful to others
Please refer to the sample answer in your lecture handout (请参考讲义中的范例)
3.描叙你的好朋友要有什么样的 characteristics?
(1)热心:always help me when needed
(2)有趣:在一起不觉得闷 tell jokes
(3)知识丰富:tell things that I don't know
Sample answer:
In my point of view, I like to stay with an honest friend. I see honesty as the most important part of a friend because no one likes to hang around with a liar.
Also, I like my friends to be helpful just like my friend Tony. You know, I am bit weak with my math. Tony often spends his spare time explaining to me those difficult math problems. As a result I am doing pretty well in my math exams.
What's more, I like to stay with interesting friends. Tony is a lot of fun. He knows so many jokes that you can laugh yourhead off when you crack jokes with him.
4.Describe a person that influenced you most.
Sample answer:
The person that really influenced me most was Ms.Xing---my college teacher who taught us English literature.
Her class was quite different from the other teachers.In her class we were not expected to sit there and listen.We had to get more involved in the class activities,like discussions,comments or debates sometimes.Our creativity and imagination were developed enormously through the active participation.
On the other hand,she let us think more about life by sharing her experiences and more importantly,she taught me how to live on my own.So that's why I was greatly influenced.Not only did she give me knowledge,but also she gave me courage and confidence as well.
5.What are important characteristics you look for in friends?
Sample answer:
I think what makes a good friend is someone who is honest,supportive,and has a good sense of humor.I just look for someone who's honest to me no matter what.He should not tell stories behind my back;he should tell me my short-comings at my mouth,but never praises me in front of me.
It is a well known saying that “A FRIEND IN NEED IS A FRIEND INDEED.” Therefore,a friend should stand by you in the hour of any sort of need.I just think that a good friend won't leave me if I‘m in trouble.They can be my friends in sunshine and in shade,care for me even when the times are bad and even more when the times are great.
Also,I'd love to spend more time with someone who can make me laugh and is fun to be around.
6.What charactereristics do you think a good teacher should have?
Sample answer:
In my view,a good teacher should have different characteristics.
First,a good teacher should be faithful and dedicated to the job.If a teacher is faithful to the job,then s/he never cheats and will be impartial(偏向) and students will respect such a teacher.If a teacher is dedicated towards his/her work,then s/he will teach with his/her heart.
Another most important characteristic of a good teacher is patience.
Teachers should never lose their patience in class when students ask questions repeatedly.A teacher should explain each and every aspect of the topic in the easiest way.
Most of all,a good teacher should update his/her knowledge because further learning can make a good teacher re-discover the beauty of the teaching profession.
7.In your opinion, what is the most important quality of a good team member?
(1) 团结: COLLABORATIVE --- Working together precedes winning together
(2) 适应性:ADAPTABLE --- If you won't change for the team, the team may change you
(3) 有热情:ENTHUSIASTIC --- Your heart is the source of energy Etc
sample answer:
In my point of view, one of the important qualities a team-player should have is to be co-operative. You see, working in a team means we cannot be an ego-maniac who does not care about others and do whatever he likes to do. Instead, we should work side by side helping each other to finish the job well.
Also, another point I value is enthusiasm. You see nothing great can be achieved without enthusiasm. I have a colleague, Mike, who not only works hard but also inspires other team-members whenever we feel low. So it is always a niceexperience working with him. And whole team sees him as our treasure.
托福口语模板:收到礼物卖掉或送给别人
托福口语题目:After receiving some presents, several months later, some people choose to sell the gifts or give the gifts to others. Do you think it’s a good idea and why? Give specific explanation in your response.收到礼物几个月后,一些人会卖掉礼物或转送他人。你是否认为这是个好主意,为什么。请在回答中给出具体的解释。
郝新宇老师的Sample response:
Personally speaking, I don’t think it's a good idea. The main reason is this choice will lose the meaning of giving presents. When giving you a present, no matter it is for your birthday or for the Christmas or for the New year or something else, the present represents the wish, the care, the love to you given by your friends; such good blessing is priceless and worth remembering everlastingly. However, if selling them or giving them to others, it means you don't cherish them, the good blessing to you is gone, which will make people giving you presents heart-breaking or even annoyed.
托福口语模板:大学教育有什么用
托福口语题目:Apart from getting relatively good jobs after graduation, what else benefits do you think can university students gain from university education? Give specific explanation in your response.除了获得相对好的工作,你认为大学教育对学生还有哪些益处。
郝新宇老师的Sample response:
In my view, one benefit is about affection. Studying in universities, youngsters tend to be mature in mind, polite in behaviors, elegant in appearance, thus young boys and girls will be more likely to be attracted by each other’s magnetism, consequently, they may harvest a beloved one or even a spouse.
The other benefit I think is that they can get acquaintance with friends from a variety of industries. They may meet friends who are adept in computer science or skilled at biology research or rich in knowledge on laws and policies and so on. In daily lives, whenever meeting some troubles, asking for help will be easier
英语口语
篇3:托福写作热点话题人物类高频词
风俗习惯 n. custom
尊敬的 adj. respectful
很有活力的 adj. energetic ≈ dynamic
有前途的 adj. promising
保守的 adj. conservative
根深蒂固的 adj. entrenched/ ingrained
悔恨的 adj. rueful
常规 n. norm
做事很主动的 adj. proactive
老式的 adj. old-fashioned
过时的 adj. antiquated/ outdated
恶化 vi. deteriorate
过时了的,没人用了的 adj. obsolete
僵化不变的 adj. fossilized
人均寿命 life expectancy
史无前例的 adj. unprecedented ≈ groundbreaking
某事物并不是一成不变的 is/ are not carved in stone
不实际的 adj. impractical/ unrealistic
沉思 n. reflection
怀旧的 adj. nostalgic
空巢综合症 empty-nest syndrome
中年危机 midlife crisis
困惑的 adj. confused/ bewildered/ puzzled
迷失了方向的 adj. disoriented
心态 n. mindset
成熟 n. maturity
有活力的 adj. dynamic
挥之不去 linger in one’s mind
退休状态或者退休后的时间 n. retirement
退了休的老人 n. retiree
老年公寓 retirement home
养老保险 retire-ment plan/ pension plan
1~2岁的小朋友 n. baby/ infants
走路摇摇晃晃的那种孩子 n. toddlers
13~19岁的孩子 teens/ teenagers
未成年人 n. kids/ children
十几岁的孩子 n. adolescent
20/30/40……多岁的人们 people in their 20s/ 30s/ 40s …
中年人 middle-aged people
老年人 retire people/ pensioners/ seniors/ the elderly
年长者 n. seniority
祖先 n. ancestors
老龄化社会 aging society = graying society
反动派(的) n.&adj. reactionary
松弛的皮肤 sagging skin
历史悠久的 adj. time-honored
永恒的 adj. timeless
过去的好时光 the good old days
皱纹 n. wrinkle
花白的头发 salt-and-pepper hair/ pepper-and-salt hair
分清是非 distinguish right from wrong
相互了解 mutual understanding
逝去 vt. fade
蹒跚 vi. stagger
老兵 n. veteran
主动努力地去回忆 vt. recall
温情回顾 reminisce about
温情回顾(名词版) the fond memories of …
向……致敬 pay tribute to
贬低 vt. denigrate
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:research center for business or agriculture
篇4:托福写作热点话题人物类高频词
A center for business research or for research in agriculture?
A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
写作思路展开结构分析
本题不存在倾向性,两者择其一展开合理论述即可。如果选择商业研究,陈述中需阐明开展商业研究的必要性;如果选择农业研究,也需要给出充分的理由。另外题目中有提到针对国情的推荐,因此也需要联系我国的实际情况来进行论述,比如根据我国情况,建议偏重农业技术研究,同时加强市场的调控等等。
本话题高分范文赏析
China is currently one of the fastest growing economies in the world. A new research center whether business or agriculturally based, would be beneficial for both our country and the rest of the world. When considering if it would be more valuable to build a business center or an agricultural center, one must realize that both fields of research work hand in hand with each other to develop and expand a country's economy. In a bustling economy like China's, either research center would have great value. There is no doubt that a country's economy is strongly influenced by its ability to not only feed its own people, but also to export agricultural products to other countries. In this sense, an agricultural research center would help further development in China's sustainability and further the country on a global scale. An agricultural research center would also be a great idea in China, as our country already has excellent agricultural techniques. By having this type of research center in China, the world's knowledge on this important field would grow exponentially. Agriculture also has the ability to employ a large percentage of the population, and through agricultural research, these people's efforts could be used in a more efficient manner. A business research center would also be an excellent idea in China. As China becomes more and more prone to the power of globalization, a business research center would allow China to not only keep up with the business-minded West, but also, this type of center could possibly allow our country to surpass the West in new business ideas. China has the largest population in the world, and therefore, the business industry is bound to grow at an alarmingly fast rate. In conclusion, I believe that either of these centers would be beneficial to our country. Perhaps the best solution would be to raise funds for both of the centers, and allow the two centers to work together to build a better China.
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:spend all school day studying or exercising
篇5:托福写作热点话题人物类高频词
Should we spend all school day studying or set aside some time for exercising?
Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
写作思路展开结构分析
同意前者更容易写一些。身体健康对每个人都很重要,并且是学习进步的前提。体育训练可以使学生学到很多东西,比如团队精神。合理的课程设置是学校的责任,学校应该想办法保证学生的健康。
本话题高分范文赏析
Some people believe that it is important to have physical activities as part of a child's everyday curriculum at school. Others disagree, and argue that students should spend all of their time on academic studies. Personally, I believe that physical education is a vital part of an education as it teaches children to take care of their bodies, how to work as a team, and gives them a method of releasing tension and aggression. Humans have always known about the importance of taking care of our bodies, but it seems that in recent years, we have gradually forgotten this important fact. It is absolutely necessary to get some physical activity at least a few times a week, and engraining this idea into children when they are young is the best way to ensure their health for life. Physical exercise usually involves teamwork of some sort. Much of the exercise that young people get involves games such as basketball, volleyball, or football. All of these sports teach children how to work together to achieve a common goal, in this case, winning. I also believe that allowing the children to work together in a fun environment, rather than only on academic projects, brings a stronger sense of camaraderie, which helps the children to have healthy relationships with others. Finally, physical exercise is an excellent way to release tension and aggression. If one is particularly stressed about school or life, getting exercise can help the person to relax. As for letting out aggression, it is much healthier to kick a football than it is to hit someone who has made you angry. Exercise should definitely be a part of a student's education. Exercise has much more to offer than simply getting “a break” from academics. Physical exercise can balance out a student's hectic life, and make it much more pleasurable.
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