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篇1:雅思写作分词结构解析
雅思写作分词结构解析
示例
· Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.
生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针。 (法国作家 大仲马)
· Dancing in all its forms cannot be excluded from the curriculum of all noble education: dancing with the feet,with ideas,with works,and ,need I add that one must also be able to dance with the pen.
所有高尚教育的课程表里都不能没有各种形式的跳舞:用脚跳舞,用思想跳舞,用言语跳舞,不用说,还需用笔跳舞。(德国哲学家 尼采)
· How much more profitable for the independent mind,after the mere rudiments of education ,to range through a library at random,taking down books as the mother wit suggests!
受到初步的基础教育之后,对于愿意独立思考的人来说,在图书馆里信手取下一本书来,根据个人的天赋随意涉猎,这该是多大的好处啊!(英国纽曼红衣主教 享利)
从上面的例子我们不难看出,英文作者大都喜欢在他们的文章和语言表达中使用“分词结构”,因为这种结构可以使得描述更加生动,更加富有节奏感。同样地,对于参加雅思的考生来说,在写作中适当适量使用这种句型无疑可以提高写作的成绩。
这种分词结构实际上是把两句话合并成一个句子,只是其中一个句子省略主语,成为半句话(作为主句的状语)。这半句话视其含义置于主句的前面或后面。以下是通过分词结构把两个句子合并成一个句子的实例):
1)China’ former leader Mao Zedong once declared war against sparrows.
2)Mao believed sparrows,were a pest and a nuisance.
两句并为一句的先决条件之一是主语相同;其次是这两句话的半句要补充或解释主句,主句为主,半句为从,这个主从关系必须确认。上面两句话符合这两个标准,因此我们可以合并为:
1)China’s former leader Mao Zedong once declared war against sparrows,believing they were a pest and a nuisance.
2)Believing sparrows were a pest and a nuisance,China’s former leader Mao Zedong once declared war against them.
上面的两种形式都可以,即可以把分词结构放在主语的前面或者后面。以believing为首的分词结构告诉我们毛泽东向麻雀宣战的背景,宣战是主要含义,两者的从属关系不能混淆。
分词的独立主格结构
对于主句来说,分词结构通常充当主句的状语。用状语的分词短语的时态要根据分词与主句中谓语的时间关系确定;分词的语态要根据分词与主句中主语的关系确定。若分词的逻辑主语不是主句的主语时,必须要自带。自带的方法为:with/without+名词/代词+分词。这种结构通常被称为“独立分词结构”。分词在句中作状语,用来进一步说明谓语动词的动作,或者说明整个句子所表达的概念。
1.独立主格结构常放在句首。表示时间、条件、原因时,其作用分别相当于个时间、条件、原因状语从名句。表示伴随方式时,相当于一个并列句。如:
Supper finished (=After supper was finished),we started to discuss the picnic.
吃完晚饭,我们开始讨论野餐的事。
All the tickets having been sold out (=As all the tickets having been sold out),we had to wait for the next week’s show.
所有的票都卖出去了,我们只好等着看下周的演出。
2.表示独立主格结构中的being常省略。如:
The football match (being) over, crowds of people poured out into the street.
足球赛五结束,从群便涌到大街上。
Nobody (being) in,I didn’t enter the hall.
里面没有人,我没进大厅。
3.表示伴随方式的独立主格结构,有时可用“with+宾语+宾语补足语”的结构来替换。如:
He lay there thinking,his hands behind his head (with his hands behind his head).
他双手放在头下,躺在那里思考着。
The river looks more beautiful,flowers and grass growing on both sides(=with flowers and grass growing on both sides).
这条河看上去更加漂亮,因为两岸长满了鲜花和绿草。
with+宾语+宾语补足语的结构是英语中常见常用的结构,其宾语补足语可以是现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词、副词、介词短语等,在句中可作定语,也可作状语,表示原因、方式等。如:
The children looked at us,with their eyes opening wide.
孩子们眼睛睁得大大地看着我。
I would miss the train,with no one to wake me up.
没人叫我,我会错过火车的。
The river with grass and flowers on both sides runs through our schoolyard. 这条两河两岸长满鲜花和绿草正从我们校园穿过。
With the examinations over, we had a long time to rest.
考试结束了,我们有一段长长的时间可以休息。
4.有些惯用的分词短语在句里可以没有逻辑上的主语而独立存在,它们往往作为句子的独立成分来修饰全句。如:
generally/strictly/roughly/broadly/narrowly speaking,judging from/by, considering,supposing,providing,provided等。如:
Talking of the computer,I like it very much.
谈到电脑,我非常喜欢。
Considering the time,we have decided to start early tomorrow morning.
考虑到时间,我们已经决定明天一早出发。
雅思写作考试中跑题了怎么办
为什么会偏题呢?
雅思烤鸭写作偏题原因之一就是生词问题
烤鸭们会有偏差的大部分问题在于生词。其中一方面是烤鸭的年龄越来越低龄化的出现:大部门的烤鸭们年龄比较小,许多词汇量的掌握是非常少,部分烤鸭会认识的词汇可能没到一千个。
在另外的方面,雅思的大作文写作考题主要是学术类的话题,更倾向于社会的话题,言语方面更偏书面化,所以有大部分的宝宝,这里面不乏有更多大学生,都会发出这种感叹:这文中的单词居然不认识呀。
那么有如下解决的办法
一积攒话题的主要核心词
A.什么是“题目核心词”
雅思考试议论文的题目虽然比较多,但总有部分出现频率较多较高的实意词就是:“题干核心词”。
B.如何解决“题干核心词”办法
针对“题干核心词”的联系,希望宝宝们能从“写作机经”下手,这样来寻找题目中出现的实意词并作出话题积累。
下面来看雅思写作的真题
①International travel often leads people to have somethan broad-mind. What are the main reasons of this phenomenon? What do you think people can do to get better understanding of the countries they visit?
以上的雅思真题虽然提问的方法有些差异,但文中的核心词还是一致的,而且主要是【prejudice】这词是理解辨析难度比平常大。所以要是宝宝们仔细的复习机经和积累题目里的实意词,这样遇到的生词概率就会降低很多。
二、讲解借助连接词
1、什么是“连接词”
它主要表明的是“词与词”、“句与句”、“段与段”之间相互连接的词。所以文中出现的频率会多点,这样能提高烤鸭们预测词义的有:表示比较、让步、并列、转折的连接词。
2、主要练习“连接词”的方式
提议烤鸭们能按照连接词原先所代表的不同逻辑来区分对待。
这样文中会有频率多一些的连接词有
代表比较:in contrast、similarly、while
代表让步:although、despite
代表转折:however、nevertheless
代表并列:and。
接下来我们详细的看下面雅思写作的真题
Many people believe that today theregeneral increase lack of respect for others. have caused this situation? How to improve it?
在这里面的雅思写作文中,anti-social behavior是一个代表相当高难度的词汇。一些情况下烤鸭词汇的面与量都不满足的情况之下,那么这词是很难解析出来的。不过有一部分情况,比如有些烤鸭们背过前缀词汇的话,那么这次词的理解就能得到解析。不过事实是少有的烤鸭会去背前缀词汇,比较太枯燥无味了。
这样子我们借助的并列连接词“and”能不能猜出来生词的主要意思呢?
肯定的回答是可以的,“lack of respect for others”代表对他人的不尊重,它是不利于的社会和谐举动。如此的话,跟它并列的“antisocial behavior”呢?自然而然一样对社会不利的行为了,相当于人们所说的“反社会行为”。
欧啦,此次经验分享就到这儿啦!
把你的学习效率转化一个模式,你的高效提分从这高效技巧开始。
雅思写作高分技巧:如何避免五大易错语法
很多童鞋在备考雅思作文的时候,总是喜欢使用各式各样华丽的辞藻和句式。他们认为,自己的作文分数不高,都是因为文章中的句式和词汇太low,过于接地气。
然而,词汇和语法共同构成了一个句子。过分注重词汇,而文章中又存在大量的语法错误的话,必定会让考官读文章的时候感到困惑。
今天,我们就来列举大家写作中最容易犯的“五宗罪”,给你的备考提个醒儿~
1、第一易错点错误:Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.
错误分析:可数名词不可“裸用”。
在正式英文写作里,凡是常规的可数名词,必须在前面有限定词,比如冠词 a/an/the,物主代词 my/their/your 等等,指示代词this/that 等等。否则,这个可数名词就必须用复数。
在这个句子中,government要么用the government,要么用government,后面的teacher和student都一样要加上复数。
正确:The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.
2、第二易错点错误:Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
错误分析:动词原形不能作主语。
而且在这个句子中如果work做了动词,后面can enhance也是动词,就出现双谓语的情况,因此把work改成working.
正确:Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
3、第三易错点错误:Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.
错误分析:词性使用错误。
different的词性为形容词,而修饰形容词或者动词的时候应该用副词。
正确:Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.
4、第四易错点错误:A lot of houses were collapsed in the earthquake.
错误分析:句中出现双谓语
句中 collapse已经为动词,再加be动词之后就变成了被动结构,此处be纯属多余。
正确:A lot of houses collapsed in the earthquake.
5、第五易错点错误:Letters were the most important way of communication in the past , e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
错误分析:这个句子的句型并不属于简单句、并列句或者复合句中的任何一种的定义。
因为出现了两套动词,因此我们可以将这个句子变成并列句,而前后两句之间是对比关系,所以我们可以在中间加对比连词或副词,比如while。
正确:Letters were the most important way of communication in the past while now e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
虽然雅思的作文并不要求大家做到语法全对,但过于低级的语法错误,也会直接影响我们的作文成绩,以上雅思写作高分技巧:如何避免五大易错语法,希望可以帮助同学们实现雅思写作高分梦
篇2:雅思小作文饼图写作结构解析
The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries have a duty to assist developing countries in every way?
Model Answer:
Every day the rich countries in the world get richer and the poor countries get poorer. Can we reduce this gap? Of course we can. The question is whether the people in power want to do it?
Reducing the wealth gap can be achieved by cancelling third world debt, cancelling trade and farming subsidies so that third world countries can compete, getting rid of third world corruption and investing and building in third world countries using local people and skills and allowing them ownership of businesses. There are other things as well. Unfortunately there is no profit in business for first world countries to do these things. Some will do them but most will not. The ordinary man on the street wants things to be better for poorer countries and the politicians say that they will help but the politicians will in the end do what business tells them to do. Politicians also rightly feel they have a duty to protect their own countries and keeping economically dominant is part of this duty. Creating effective competition for their own country?s businesses is not part of what they are expected to do.
This then leads on to whether I believe that developed countries have a duty to help the developing countries. Yes, I do. As an individual I believe that we have a duty to assist the poorer countries with their development in all aspects. We can provide teachers and education and doctors on the small scale and on the larger scale the things that I have talked about in the previous paragraph. Can we do this? Yes. Will we do this? See the previous paragraph again.
In conclusion you can see that I believe that there is a split between what would happen in a perfect world and what actually happens. We have a duty to reduce the wealth gap between developed and developing countries and we can do it, but it is unlikely that this will happen quickly.
篇3:雅思小作文饼图写作结构解析
Children's lives these days are quite different from our generation's. Describe what are the biggest changes in younger generation and explain some factors of this phenomenon.
Model Answer:
Over the past few decades, the world has significantly changed. Nowadays, many have begun to wonder what the reasons behind [=for] these changes are. Two major factors contributing to this phenomenon are advances in media and change family dynamics [=organization].
First, advances in media, such as the Internet and TV, have meant that children spend a large portion of their leisure time in front of a screen. Consequently, they are not getting proper amounts of exercise, which results in an increase in the number of children who are overweight and obese. In addition, fast food restaurants have become increasingly popular, which has also contributed to children's health problems
Moreover, another leading force of this trend is changes in the family unit. Compared with a half century ago, nuclear families have become way more common in modern society. People tend to have only one child, which has caused personality disorders such as depression, loneliness, and selfishness. This is mainly because parents with one child have tendency to put all their focus and money into their only son or daughter. Studies have indicated that over 65% of children who are brought up without siblings show self-centered behavior find it difficult cooperating with their peers.
In summary, there are many factors that have caused children to live very differently from the generation before them. There are high hopes that parents exercise(s) wisdom in treating their children.
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篇4:雅思小作文写作中趋势图的写作结构解析
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.
Model Answer:
Some people think that fiction books have no use at all. They claim that people should read about real events that took place, real people, and established facts. I have to totally disagree with this statement. From my everyday experience and observation I can stand that fiction, miracles and fairy tails are required in our life. For several reasons, which I will mention below, I believe that fiction books play an essential role in our life.
First of all, it is kind of difficult to imagine a six year old child reading about politics or history with the real facts that are not always pleasant. I think that children need miracles and Santa Claus because the real world is too complicated for them. They are too innocent and inexperienced to know the real facts and understand what a real life is about. In addition, I am sure that making a child read only non-fiction books can result in shock.
Second of all, following this statement about refusing from reading books about fiction events we also should refuse from festivals, parades, and celebration such holidays as Halloween because most of the characters there are fictional. Moreover, comic books will disappear as well as animated films and fiction movies. The disadvantage of non-fiction lies in the facts that nothing happens to excite the mind and spirit. From the other side, fiction provides a great slope for a mind to think creatively.
In conclusion, I think that people need miracles. We can not be satisfied with only naked truth. Human kind must believe in something and this belief helps people break limits and make new inventions.
篇5:雅思小作文写作中趋势图的写作结构解析
Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Model Answer:
It is generally accepted that we all need leisure time to recover from the stresses of work and everyday life.
Personally, I prefer to be active during this time, as I think this suits me better. However, what we do with our leisure time is up to us and no one can say that any particular activity is the best.
Some people relax by watching movies, reading or surfing the internet. People who have physically demanding jobs may choose these types of activities. If you are a nurse or builder, you may feel that you don't want to do a five-kilometre run after work, because you are already physically tired.
Other people do very sedentary jobs. Computer analysts, for example, may spend all day sitting in front of a computer screen. At the end of the working day, they may be keen to stretch their limbs and improve their health by swimming or going to the gym.
Another factor that influences our choice of leisure pursuit is where we work. People who work indoors often prefer outdoor hobbies, whereas for people who work outdoors, the reverse may be true. I am a student myself and this involves a lot of sitting in lectures, so I need to get out into the fresh air afterwards.
In any situation, the important thing is that people need to stay healthy by choosing what is best for them. The only wrong way to spend free time, in my view, is to have a sedentary job and then go home and watch television.
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篇6:雅思小作文写作中趋势图的写作结构解析
以时间为主的主语
4.时间+witness +趋势+in 对象
以上就是雅思小作文写作中趋势图的写作结构的内容。我们可以看出在小作文的写作中,审题是一个非常重要的步骤。在审题时,我们要审什么?一个是图表类型,一个是图表的极值和走势趋向。对于趋势图这种图形,我们更应该重视数据的趋势,在写作当中多描述数据的走向和到达的极值。如果是几组数据进行对比,我们还应该注意描述它们的不同。