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篇1：gre考试写作修改如何进行呢

gre考试写作修改如何进行

gre写作修改技巧介绍

1、积累足够多的形容词，辨析他们之间的不同，vocabulary.com是个很棒的网站。里面有近义词的辨析。比如significant, vital, crucial, critical, indispensable都是重要，那具体有什么区别呢?

2、不要放过英语场景，那是学习形容词准确意思的非常好的机会。比如某期美国好声音里shakira在形容一个歌手声音的时候用的词是otherworldly，那么因为我们实际的听到了那个声音，所有会真正的理解在老外眼里什么声音是“空灵的”。

3、在gre考试写作过程中觉得有个词不好，又没有积累的情况下，可以找相关的可能出现这个词的英语场景。比如我写了a good job，但是不知道还能用什么词来替代good, 那我认为在wikipedia上搜索“the pursuit of happiness”《当幸福来敲门》应该会找到答案。

gre写作考试修改的过程就是一个提高的过程，绝对不能写完了不改就扔在一边，那样只能停留在原来的水平。推荐大家先不限时写几篇，写完一篇就立刻打印出来逐字逐句修改，把过于简单的词和句子一一替换，注意别用太难的词和没把握的词，能用到6级词汇就差不多了，如果想要添加一下较难的词汇建议大家用词典将相应单词查找出来，用进文章里，并且将这个词的含义，词性，用法以及搭配都摘抄到笔记本上。久而久之，你便会形成自己的单词库，还能在无意识间扩大词汇量。

修改gre写作还需要做的一点就是找到自己认为漂亮实用的句式，往自己的gre独立写作里套。尤其开头段，结尾段以及中间各段的衔接，找到了漂亮的句式就从此永远用这个不要再改了，这就是自己独家的写作模板。

高分GRE写作提纲举例指导

22“Many people believe that a few individuals or small groups (family, friends, teachers, celebrities, for example) have caused them to think and behave in the way they do. Yet it is always society as a whole that defines us and our attitudes, not a few individuals.”

.分同意

1、社会作为一个整体 define our attitudes and behavior

japan diligence; moral behavior; romantic life style in France; open-minded and tolerant American

2、日常生活中，我们更多的是受到周围人的影响

3、周围人的影响更深

criminals; autocratic society, th ose advocate democracy are influenc ed not by society but by people around

22T “Many people believe that a few individuals or small groups (family, friends, teachers, celebrities, for example) have caused them to think and behave in the way they do. Yet it is always society as a whole that defines us and our attitudes, not a few individuals.”

很多人认为只是一些个人或者小团体(比如家庭、朋友、老师、名人)促成了他们的思维和行动。其实一直以来不是一些个人而是社会作为一个整体在定义我们和我们的态度。

①被小群体影响。因为与我们自身更密切相关。如：选学校

②被社会媒体以及因特网影响：

③被社会传统影响

society as a whole defines us and our attitudes.

in daily life, we are more often affected by those persons, who are around us

each individual is under dual im pact both of society as a whole and small groups as a part

高分GRE写作提纲举例指导

26“Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served.”

.一定都要让位

1、承认随着 modernization许多古老建不符合经济发展需要，只能拆掉

2、有些古老建筑具有历史价值，是文化遗产，拆掉会使城市失去特色

history textbooks, provide vivid education for young generation cultural heritage for descendants, tourism resources; can never be restored

3、区分处理，有的没有价值又破旧可以拆掉，有的古老建筑可以在修缮基础上服务于现代社会，带来效益

integrate the preservation of historic buildings with modern development

store, entertainment and relaxation

.多数人都同意建筑是任何一个社会历史的重要记录，但当现代城市的规划者觉得这些以前的建筑所占据的土地用于现在的开发可以更有价值的时候，争议就产生了。在这样的情况下，现代发展应该比保留历史建筑优先考虑，以便于满足眼下的需求。

历史建筑和现代建筑之间的矛盾是人类发展的必然产物。

1、与过去的实际用途相比较，历史建筑在现代社会的主要作用是作为活的教科书，它不光能够帮助人们重建过去的记忆，同时也能够使得年轻人更清晰的认识历史

2、尽管历史建筑都曾经在人类的发展中发挥了非常之能够要的作用，但是在现代社会中，历史和现实的矛盾逐渐变得越来越明显。相比之下，现代建筑的目的则更为实用，随着人口的增多，城市变得越来越拥挤，而生活在都市中的现代人类似乎更看重效率和自身利益。这时候，历史建筑和现代建筑的矛盾就产生了。

3、在人们更加注重效率和金钱的今天，历史建筑仍旧发挥着现代建筑所不能取代的作用。首先，它能够提醒人们在发展经济的同时不要重蹈过去的覆辙;其次，历史建筑能够让提醒我们要珍惜现在有我们的祖先为我们重造出来的条件

4、历史和现实的矛盾充斥在社会发展的过程中，在这两者之间找到平衡直观重要，一方面，在发展现代社会的同时要保留在过去有重要意义的重要建筑，另一方面，有需要让保留的历史建筑尽可能的不影响社会的发展。

ISSUE26

大多数人都同意一个社会的建筑物代表了它有价值的历史纪录，但是当现代规划者们觉得这些以前的建筑物所占据的土地可以被更有价值的使用于新目的时，就产生了争议，现代发展应该比保留历史建筑物更受重视以便于满足眼下的需求。

1 部分历史建筑的文化, 艺术和经济价值决定它们应该被保护。

2 另外一部分历史建筑缺乏上述价值, 所以应该被现代建筑所代替

3 所以在现代化规划中, 人们应该综合考虑利弊,合理进行选择。

4 总之，我们应该尽量保护历史建筑，但是当现在发展需求的利益大于保护古建筑的利益时，我们应该牺牲古代建筑来满足当代的发展。

.Save valuable resources and reca lls a community’s goal and dreams ，一个民族的文化与历史就是通过历史遗迹来保留的，所以为了后代保留这项历史建筑，故宫，大雁塔，西安城墙带来经济利益。保护古代建筑好的城市吸引更多游客，使他们停留更久花钱更多。A recent travel industry survey over 40% Americans visiting historic place, battlefield, building spent 40% more than typical traverler.西安，北京

当矛盾出现时候，如果历史建筑有历史价值，保留意义，应该保护。否则一旦破坏，无法恢复比如西安的城墙 circumvallation ，已经有 700 年的历史了，是世界上保存最完整的城墙，当时为了修火车站，就拆除了一段城墙，这样就破坏了城墙的完整性。使得城墙不能再恢复其原貌。

.Most people would agree that buildings represen t a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern pl anners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served.“

提纲：同意

1.首先得承认历史建筑有很高的历史价值，比如古代建筑艺术，古代庭院设计等等，一旦被破坏掉就再也不存在了，我们应当为了我们自己以及后代保护历史建筑。

2.此外，很多历史建筑已经成为了当地的标志 emblem，很好的旅游景点等，因此要尽量保护。

3.但是，有很多历史建筑已经相当破旧，并且和周围的现代化环境很不协调。考虑到城市的发展的土地需求，一些古建筑就应该拆除，或者平移到另外一个地方。

4.总之，我们应该尽量保护历史建筑，但是当现在发展需求的利益大于保护古建筑的利益时，我们应该牺牲古代建筑来满足当代的发展。

.护建筑物

一、Owing to the complexity, 不能 irrespective/indiscriminately, Balance ，保留一部分，或者改建

二、有些该拆 In a developing city, vacant lands for modern development are indeed essential for citygrowth.

1.旧房子跟现代化冲突，老北京 replete with one-storey hous e, raze, make a way for new

2.如果跟实际迫切需求冲突，如建医院 satisfy increasing health care needs

三、但有些是时代象征，极具文化价值 as old buildings may be valuable not only in architecture, may even be a hallmark of a time, or a culture carrier of the city

1.拆了就没了 irreversible ，仿制品description literatures or replications 也不 as stunning as

2 .文化传承 Egypt Pyramid pilgrimage, Babylon 留下来的少，Greece, Parthenon Temple, column,fountainhead

四、To strike a balance among competing interests, some old buildings should be conserved while some are not, 虽然who can decide the fate of these buildings这篇文章不解决了

1.平房保留一部分 representative are sanctioned to survive

2. 保留 places of interest Imperial Palace, emblem

3.或者改建，Louvre Museum 从palace retrofit

26T ”Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern pl anners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served.“ 26. 很多人认为建筑代

表了一个社会过去的历史价值，但是当现代城市的规划者想要利用老建筑占用的地盘做新的规划时，就会引起很多争辩。在这样的情况下，现代的发展应该优先被考虑，以使当代的需要得到满足

① 历史建筑代表了一个民族的过去，不光是现代人、也是后代人的财富。Historic buildings are irrecoverable resources we should preserve not only for ourselves but also for our descendants and representatives of our national past.

② 很多历史建筑具有审美价值 aesthetic value、或者代表了一个时代的奇迹 wonder，能吸引旅游从而促进经济。

如：Great wall. Pyramid Historic buildings are valuable records of a society’s past, and they serve more as travel attractions, city emblems.

③ 对于那些Some old buildings which are of less value and in bad state can be removed for contemporary needs。因为经济的发展城市越来越拥挤，现代的建筑更实用，更能满足人类的需求。

高分GRE写作提纲举例指导

27”No one can possibly achieve success in the world by conforming to conventional practices and conventional ways of thinking.\"

.部分同意

1、现代社会对人提出新的要求，如果仍旧按照传统习惯与思维方式，难以成功

cooperate, teamwork; education emphasize individual learning, pay no attention to collabrotive learning; failure in education awareness of life-long learning; to enrich one's knowledge; or eliminated by the new age

2、历史告诉我们创新需要突破传统习惯与思维

Einstein; Corpernicus

3、但也不是所有的传统思维都过时，有一些对成功还是很重要

Chinese ancient thinker's ideas are still useful for people in modern society; Confucianism; Sunzi military stragetigis

which dates back to thousands of years ago in China, still plays a great role in today's society of business. Many successful enterpriser place high emphasis on it and put it into use in their business battle, especially in the management of the public relations.

gre考试写作修改如何进行

篇2：gre考试写作修改如何进行

gre考试写作修改如何进行?

gre写作修改技巧介绍

GRE作文范文：审查的公正性

Censorship is rarely, if ever, justified.

GRE作文范文参考：

“Censorship” is a word which seems to be authoritative rather than democratic, which implies the will of the governors rather than the will of general people. Since the occurrence of the censorship, which could be traced back to the Ancient Rome, it has been playing an important part in the domestic affairs while arousing applause and condemnation as well. Here the our government faces a dilemma, is it fair to carry on the censorship at the cost of sacrificing part of democracy, or just open the gate letting flows of ideas and thoughts in, at the risk of losing its own rampart.

Since censorship suggest an act of changing or suppressing speech, writing or any other forms of expression that is condemned as subversive of the common good, it must have a close relationship with the one who applies such supervision, and the word “common good” should be redefined under different conditions. There is time when we were all under a powerful monarchy, and the “common good” is the “monarch good”, then the censorship itself is the instrument of the monarch which solely depended on the will of the monarch; in the Middle Ages, both the Roman Catholic and the Protestant Churches practiced censorship that seemed to be oppressive to any ideas challenging the doctrines of churches and the existence of God; even now, in some authoritative countries, the censorship is used to rule its people by restricting their minds, of course, for the stability of their governing over the people. With these regards, censorship itself is questioned at the rationality of existing, regardless of the practices made by the democratic government, while the justice of the democratic government is quite doubtable.

The matter concerning is not only who practices the censorship but also how it is practiced. Since different men make different comments on the same work of art, for example, it is hard to set up a measure by which we could decide whether one should be prohibited, especially to the work of arts, as its content always labeled as “subversive” and “revolutionary”, two words detested by the governors most. Such cases could be found in Ulysses by J. Joyce and Lady Chatterley’s Lover by D.H Lawrence, these two great novels were firstly considered to be guilty of obscenity and were put to prohibition by the American government, but turned out to be true masterpieces today. So any form of censorship, to some extent, lags behind the development of ideas and will put more or less a negative effect on their development.

Though the censorship is such a disgusting word embodying so much oppression and might, it is a compromise we made with the reality far from being perfect, to provide a comparative stable ground which we could stand on. At this point, I don’t agree with the institute like ACLU who oppose any censorship. The censorship, though rarely justified, should exist as long as a more ideal and practical form is found to replace it, or we could only expect our God to create a more ideal species instead of imperfect human beings.

GRE作文范文：想法付诸行动的困难

Practicality is now our great idol, which all powers and talents must serve.Anything that is not obviously practical has little value in today's world.

GRE作文范文参考：

In today’s society idealism seems to become an ideology that is marginalized and practicality is our great idol, thus, the speaker asserts that anything that is not practical bears little value. I admit that being practical is the wide-accepted dogma in order to survive in this world, but by going too far to claim that anything that is not practical has little value is against the empirical observation as well as the general stimulus that push the human society forward.

Admittedly, practicality has become a cult in today’s society. Too often do we hear people talk about being practical whenever they come to make important decisions or choose between several alternatives. The deep-rooted cause underlying this phenomenon is that with the development of modern society, the emphasis is placed more on financial gaining, quick fame, sensible choice and so forth. Our society is rather stable compared with that of the last century when war, violence, human right movements has become the symbol of that period. People are enjoying this peaceful environment with less crucial missions rested upon them and as a result, they shift from idealism to struggle for the common well being of mankind to the practical concept of individual achievement.

This ideology has its merits since after all the disaster and upheaval that our human race has undergone, it is judicious to focus on the economic aspect of things in order to tackle the most important social problems such as poverty, hunger and environmental problems which all deserve us to sit down and work out practical solutions. On the personal level, being practical is how a person would possibly succeed in his career or personal life. One is likely to make sensible decisions for his education and job choice on the basis of practical consideration of his own strength and weakness and careful analysis of the prospect of research direction and job market. Even those in power and intellects need to consider practically since hasty decision built upon pure ideal meditation would hardly find its way in the modern society and is doom to failure.

Agreeing with the speaker that practicality has become the great idol in our society, I am strongly against his point that anything that is not practical has little value. Even in today’s society, idealism is by no means relegated to the place of total neglect and disregard. For one thing, in history, so much achievement is the outcome of several generations’ struggle such as fighting for equality for women, human rights movement,etc. In today’s society, practicality is the way we can obtain our goal but idealism offers the philosophical explanation of why we should set this as our goal and the clear the ultimate value of our pursuing. What is more, by totally fixed one's eyes upon the practical aspect of things, we face the danger of neglecting one important part of our pursuit, that is the mental enjoyment brought out by idealism. If we have a clear goal set in mind and put practical endeavor at the same time, the result would be more satisfactory and valuable.

To sum up, I agree with the speaker insofar as the wide acceptance of practicality is considered. Being practical is the tenet of modern society and it does shed light on the wise way of doing things and obtaining goals, no matter in the personal or social level.But the speaker goes too far by claiming that it is the only valuable ideology in society.I am strongly against this idea since in history or at present, we human beings still need the philosophical explanation to clear our goal and to provide motivation. In this aspect, idealism would never be replaced with pure practical consideration. Otherwise,human society will be replete with insensible people directed by economic profit and quick fame and recognition.

GRE作文范文：知识的影响

The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.

GRE作文范文参考：

Ever since the appearance of convenient printing method and huge libraries, modern education became possible. Since then, the process of accumulation of knowledge was greatly accelerated, for mankind's knowledge storation can be developed in a systematic way. Education's function is to prepare our youth for the future by lending them the ability to discover mysteries of the world themselves or from books. The history of the human race gives us the impression that the major benefit we get from the academic training is the ability to perceive the world in different ways.

The most primitive form of education, which helped our ancestors, the cavemen, to survive in the harsh conditions during the pioneering period of human history, already possessed the power to change people's perspective. When a child learnt how to make a fire, he was brought to a brand new world, in which he was no longer the game of wild animals and the weakest creature facing the mightiness of nature. He could better understand and conquer the surroundings; the long winter, might have been one of the dangerous enemies in his eyes, seemed weaker since the fire he made could ensure him the victory. Once we have the ability to harness more power, we regard the nature in new ways; we used to have to adapt to the nature absolutely, however,today we could transform it to certain extends.

It is the coming of science and many other realms that truly and profoundly changed our view of the world. We can see further and deeper, thanks to the inventions of macroscope and microscope. But that is hardly the whole thing the science has presented in front of us. Science, widely taught in every secondary school around the world, not only allows us to see what we couldn't see before, but also allows us to get new information and knowledge from that we could see before. Only when a student finishes his course in basic physics, could he understand why some things are hot while others are cooler, and could he know what happens during the cooling down of a cup of hot water. What we observe does not change; nevertheless, the knowledge we learn from changes because of the new power science gives us. The study of science enables us to learn the truths behind the complex phenomena and to use the truths learnt to serve the mankind.

The study of diverse disciplines not only provides us with the ability to learn more, but also the intentions to think more and seek for the general principles. The study of philosophy, histories, classics, and other disciplines deepens our thoughts rather than broadening our scopes. Let's take philosophy for example, which inspires us to dig more deeply in our thoughts and hones our ability to form a correct judgment of our situations and our worlds. We may encounter the death of others, however, we won't understand the life and the death, were it not for the study of philosophy. We will also get more from the reading of all the good books, which is just like a conversation with the finest men of past centuries. We may not see more, but we inspect more; we may not hear more, but we listen to more. This best demonstrates the power of these disciplines and the value of studying them.

Human, the most intelligent, and rational beings on the Earth, stands in the dominant position of our world for thousands of years. We cannot make the wildest guess at what our world would like without the different realms of our thoughts and the education imparting these treasures to our descendants. Different fields of study give us different perspectives of this world, only when we properly and usefully assimilate the various discoveries in myriad disciplines, could we form a most brilliant picture of our today and of our tomorrow.

篇3：gre写作考试练习怎么进行

gre写作考试练习怎么进行?

精通gre写作练习题

为了达到公平，公布了考试的所有gre写作练习题。为了与母语者竞争，考生应在考试前预习所有试题(节省考试时间)，通过写100-150篇大纲来了解GRE写作的总体结构，通过写30-50篇文章来练习自己的写作思路和表达方式。练习题里的试题越熟练，考试就越好。

新的GRE写作遇到了评论家对论文评分的想法

每个评论员都很快地评论你的文章。不可能把每一个细节都看得很仔细。考生应迎合阅卷人的阅卷思维，用最规范的结构和最清晰的表达方式来反映自己的思维：第一段要明确提出自己的观点，gre写作方法, gre备考要多久中间段要打开，每段的开头应该是该段的主题句。

新GRE写作评分注重三个方面

首先，根据公布的各评分环节的评分标准，其评分主要集中在以下三个方面：

逻辑分析能力(洞察力要求)

文章组织(要求组织良好)

语言能力(标准书面英语;简明;可变结构等)

尽可能提高人工智能部分的写作能力，确保AA部分满分

由于aa的写作不涉及自身观点的发展，只需要指出作者的逻辑漏洞，因此经过训练后写作并不困难;而ai的写作则需要发展自己的观点，不仅需要逻辑洞察力，还需要展示观点的能力，而且语言组织能力强，所以对中国考生来说很难。在这段时间里，情况有了很大改善。

GRE写作高分范文：法律的灵活性

Laws should not be stationary and fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

法律不应该是僵化或固定的，而应该根据不同的环境、时期和地点而足够灵活。

GRE写作范文：

Should laws be stable and fixed or be flexible in taking consideration of various factors such as circumstances, times and places? The speaker concludes that instead of being stationary, laws should be constantly changing. The speaker’s claim have merits in declaring that law should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances since adaptation to changing social environment is how the law properly guard the function of social engine and the general welfare of people as a whole. But to some extent, we would not go too much in neglecting to importance of the stability of laws because they are the principles we adhere to in our daily life, if changed too abruptly and constantly, will result in egregious chaos and confusion.

Keeping stability, consistency of laws is indispensable in helping people to make prediction of the consequence of their behaviors and figure out the legal obligation and rights exerted upon them by the legal system. In the personal level, consistency of laws defines the properness and legality of their doings and thus endows people with sense of security and good citizenship. If as the speaker claimed that laws should never be stationary or fixed, people face the threat of being constantly threw into turbid mud of bewilderment and insecurity and finally lose their sight in how to adapt to sudden alternation of in this aspect or another.

Another example that aptly illustrates this is in the field of business. As we know, the ultimate goal of a business is to maximize its profit of shareholders within the framework of laws to define that a enterprises function within this framework, obey its obligation and hamper no interest of the general welfare of the society. In order for a enterprises to thrive, it must carefully study the relevant business laws, including anti-dumping law and torts, etc.Given the choice, most leaders are unwilling to see the prospect that laws are constantly changing since it takes time and effort to build a well-defined frames within companies and overthrow established practice and code would demand another round of revising and reevaluation....

GRE写作高分范文：如何避免偏激

GRE作文题目：

Most people often look for similarities, even between very different things, and even when it it is unhelpful or harmful to do so. Instead, a thing should be considered on its own terms: we should avoid the tendency to compare it to something else.

人们总是在寻找相同点，即使是在非常不同的事物间也不例外，甚至有时候这样做是无用乃至有害的。实际上，我们应该具体问题具体分析;我们应该尽量避免比较的倾向。

GRE写作正文：

In the age of accelerating changes, the eagerness to understand things in an effective and equally efficient way is more than ever. Although all kinds of complex techniques, skills and equipments helpful for understanding and studying the objects are easily accessible to people, the basic strategies stay the same as before: one is starting from similarities and the other from distinction. From my personal point of view, only by using the two in proper proportion and order can one achieve his/her goal to understand a thing.

Looking for similarities is a proper starting point. When we first meet something new,we need to clarify its basic attributes, finding similarites with other familiar things and classify it according to those attributes. Classification according to similaties is of great assistance to provide us with an outline, basic knowledge which we can base further investigation upon. Although things in contemporary age represent themselves in various forms and styles, similarities exist in any pair as long as certain perspective can be found. For instance, Bookcase and window are so different that at first glance, one

may not be able to find the similarities, or even such an effort seems to be meaningless. Yet, they are both part of a house, something that must be taken into consideration when decorating or refurnishing the house. Such a comparison would be helpful for us to realize that “buy” and “sell” are two basic operation we can have upon window even though we have no idea what window is made of, how it is produced or what its function is.What’s more, looking for similarities not only refer to the object itself, but the relationship with others. Similar relationships helps people understand things in groups or pairs using the strategy: analogy. Analogy is especially useful when the charactertistics of a relationship rather than the objects themselves are the focus of understanding and when similar relationships are known and objects unknown. For example, if told that the relationship between window and ASVE is similar to that between book and read, one can safely guess that ASVE is the operation people can take on window although ASVE stays an unknown action.

Definitely, mere similarity usually exclude the distinctive characteristics of a thing. We need to investigate its own terms for deeper understanding. Within the rough outline sketched by similarity, a more detailed and well-articulated picture can be drawn by grasping own terms of a thing. Still take window as an example. From careful observation, we know that it is transparent, it consists of different chemical materials, it performs the function as to protect privacy, to preserve desirable temperature indoor, and sometimes to prevent rains and snows from going inside. Deeper and further understanding of window can only be gained when we take its own terms besides those it shares with bookcase into consideration.

In the newly development software engineering model named Object-oriented model,the strategy “similarity first and differences later” functions as the core and focus of the whole model. Objects sharing common points are put into same “classes” and common points are processed together, later they are defined, discussed and processed respectively according to their own characteristics. This method greatly reduces the repetive time and energy spent over and over again on similar, if not utterly same, terms. Translated into daily life, starting from similarites for a quick outline and transferring to grasp distinctive characteristics for deeper understanding isthe approach we should always bear in mind when hoping to understand a thing with effectiveness and efficiency.

篇4：gre考试写作部分修改建议

1、积累足够多的gre考试形容词，辨析他们之间的不同，vocabulary.com是个很棒的网站。里面有近义词的辨析。比如significant, vital, crucial, critical, indispensable都是重要，那具体有什么区别呢?

3、在写作过程中觉得有个词不好，又没有积累的情况下，可以找相关的可能出现这个词的英语场景。比如我写了a good job，但是不知道还能用什么词来替代good, 那我认为在wikipedia上搜索“the pursuit of happiness”《当幸福来敲门》应该会找到答案。

GRE考前一周应该如何准备GRE写作

关于GRE的写作部分，很多同学都定位不清，而且市面上流行的说法非常多。比如有的说要写长句，要写难句，甚至有人说要押韵。对这些说法姑且不做评论。今天万炜老师在这里只分享的考试前最后一周GRE写作该怎么做。

万炜老师教GRE写作的时候有一项明确规定：上课认真听讲，下课不复习，考前一周甚至考前3天再开始准备写作。之所以这么要求，是因为中国考生的GRE Verbal都还来不及复习，甚至数学准备都不充分，所以不建议将宝贵的复习时间用于写作。

事实上，申请中只有极少数专业对GRE写作成绩有要求。这一点几乎适用于所有理工科院系、教育学、MPA、艺术类、与数学有密切联系的社会科学专业(如经济学)。即便你申请哈佛耶鲁，也是如此。只有如英语文学、新闻这一类纯文科专业GRE写作才有可能要求4分甚至更高。因此，尽管万炜老师对大家GRE Verbal的要求是精益求精，对GRE写作则不然。

本文介绍的短期突破方法主要针对写作目标分数在3到5分的选手。而那些GRE写作考了2.5分的同学，你可能根本不知道GRE写作在考你什么。

根据最近两年ETS发布的数据来看，中国考生GRE写作的平均成绩为3.0分。这个分数并不算高分，但对大部分考生来说足够申请使用。事实上，当你的托福写作分数达到20分以后，GRE写作基本可以随意考到3分。但是需要注意的是，GRE写作考的不是写作，而是你的分析能力。

考生语言水平要求：TOEFL写作分数大于20分，那么GRE可以随意考3分。GRE写作考的不是写作，是你的分析能力。

这里和大家分享万炜老师独家整理的GRE写作argument和issue的题目分析。此处需要注意的是，因为argument短期内更容易有所突破，所以建议各位考生更加重视argument。

对于Argument的复习要求是，看完上述资料的所有分析，写至少三篇文章，字数400，三篇文章形式必须一样。也就是三篇长得非常像。Argument必须保证每篇文章写得差不多。

对于Issue的复习要求是，看完所有分析，写每篇文章的框架(开头，各段段首理由)。

考前一周GRE写作Argument的写作方法

每一篇argument都是一个完整的论证线路。你所写的并不叫Argument，而是你读到的文章叫Argument。我们要做的是，按照顺序，对原文每一个论证步骤进行以下三步分析：

1、指出你所讨论的步骤的要素(前提、结论、假设)

2、指出使得作者假设不成立的可能情况(制造反例)

3、指出作者需要补充的额外证据以加强其论证

请注意，我们的目的并不是驳倒对方，很多时候更可能是完善对方的论点。同学们写Argument常见错误是把Argument当驳论文去写。但是事实上我们不讨论前提的对错，不讨论结论的对错，我们只是针对文章的假设，提出可能的错误。我们关注的不是结论的对错，而是逻辑链，即原文的前提是否足以支持结论。

接下来再看Issue。

如果只剩下3天就要GRE考试，那么其实Issue部分可以不用看了，因为GRE的Issue写作短期不容易提高。

如果还有一周时间，最好还是看一眼，但是一篇都不用写。因为每一篇Issue的话题不同，没有可以复制的内容。所以同学们只需要练习整体结构性的东西。

此处万炜老师介绍一个万能的结构，不是最好的，但是什么情况都可以用。

首先，同学们完成Issue时要做到以下三点：

1、无个人视角，站在话题双方考虑可能的理由;

2、选择证据支持/反对每一条理由;

3、结合以上分析，得出结论(不要在意是不是太极端或者中立)。

4、语言准确(字数你能写400真不错了，4分足够用)

GRE Argument写作逻辑思路分析

关于GRE Argument和Issue

GRE Argument：评价别人的论证，相当于托福的综合写作，不需要说出自己的观点。

GRE Issue：表达自己的观点，相当于托福的独立写作，你的观点是什么。

可以简单讲Argument定义为Counter Argue：读懂作者的思路，然后进行逆向反驳，或者说进行抬杠。因为评价别人可以是正面，也可以负面，因此写的时候可以加强也可以削弱，但是一般推荐削弱。因为我们论证一件事是错的比证明它是对的要容易很多。比如我们做一个360度分析，作者只看到了其中的一面，想要论证他的问题，只要论证另一个方面不同就可以。但如果想要论证加强，必须要把其他359度都思考一遍，并且具有一定的排他性。所以这里想说，并不是Argument一定是驳论文，但是因为反驳比支持好写，所以一般会写驳论文。

篇5：托福独立写作如何进行修改

托福独立写作如何进行修改?

在托福独立写作的练习过程中，同学们先练习如何流畅的完成内容，再求出彩。一般都是这样一个过程。那么怎样达到突破?对已基础一般的同学来说，修改就是一个提高的过程。绝对不能写完了不改就扔在一边，那样只能停留在原来的水平。有的时间多少不重要，只要你愿意，写几个小时都可以，但是内容以及用词的质量必须要体现出来。

托福独立写作推荐大家先不限时写几篇，写完一篇就立刻打印出来逐字逐句修改，把过于简单的词和句子一一替换，注意别用太难的词和没把握的词，能用到6级词汇就差不多了。

托福独立写作如果想要添加一下较难的词汇建议大家用词典将相应单词查找出来，用进文章里，并且将这个词的含义，词性，用法以及搭配都摘抄到笔记本上。久而久之，你便会形成自己的单词库，还能在无意识间扩大词汇量。

改托福独立写作还需要做的一点就是找到自己认为漂亮实用的句式，往自己的托福独立写作里套。尤其开头段，结尾段以及中间各段的衔接，找到了漂亮的句式就从此永远用这个不要再改了，这就是自己独家的写作模板。

托福独立写作全部写简单句，可以吗?显然就不行了。在表达通俗直白的观点时，用过于复杂的句型会使得句子含义很晦涩，反而会阻碍到读者对文章的理解。我们追求的是长短局的结合和表达的难易的结合，并且能够用简单句表达的最好避免使用复杂句。

平时练习托福独立写作任务的时候可以用尽量多的句式，多尝试，找到适合自己的，既能记住，又能灵活运用，在结合上课时老师提供的句型选择，那么限时模考的时候就开始逐渐找到自己的句式表达和段落结构，形成自己固定的模板套路。

只要你有了属于自己的惯用托福独立写作句型，在进行托福写作考试的时候便会事半功倍了。希望同学们通过阅读，对托福成绩提升有一定的帮助。

提高托福写作：在不断修改文章中实现

1独立写作是不是字数越多越好?

Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words.

独立写作词数没有上限，最少300词，但300词难免显得内容较为贫乏，建议最少写350。对大部分人而言，400~450词是比较合理的选择，写完后要留时间检查常见错误，如主谓一致等。

在语言质量相同的前提下，内容充实的文章更能展现出作者的写作能力。但不能为了追求词数而牺牲质量，因为在能力不扎实的情况下，写得越快犯的错误可能越多，导致优势失去。

同时，不能用跟话题相关度很小的模板凑字数，网络模板句大多数有中式英语的痕迹，过于注重形式而限制了想法的表达。

只写了350-400词仍然获得25分以上的学生不乏其数。说到底托福是一门语言考试，最看重的还是你的语言质量，而不是数量。

2托福写作要不要用模板?

从网上或者大班授课的教师讲义中得来的模板往往千篇一律、缺乏个性，容易给评分人留下抄袭背诵的印象而判定考生写作水平有限，这种情况难以获得25以上的分数。

给大家个建议：不要使用任何模板句来套文章段落，但平时可以从原汁原味的英文文章中摘录和积累好词好句，形成自己的个性化句库。

应该避开的开头段写法：“随着社会发展……某某话题争论颇多……一些人怎么想;另一些人怎么想。在我看来……”

这些都是废话，显然是由于有不同观点，所以题目要询问你的意见，这种写法导致开头段毫无新意，且很空洞，大部分都是在重复题目本身的词汇和句子。

3是不是我的辞藻不够华丽，句式不够多样?

90%以上的情况并非如此。我在批改作文的过程中，看到不少同学因为刻意使用“高级词汇”，而增加了不少错误的几率，因为他们并不知道这些词的适用语境和固定搭配，只是依据其中文意思套用进句子，结果弄巧成拙，给了考官扣你分的理由。

写任何句子，首先应该保证基本语言、句子正确性，当有足够能力写对时，才能追求写“好”，而不能为了写“好”而不怕写“错”。有不少同学功底不够扎实就去尝试复杂的句式，结果漏洞百出，同样得不偿失。可以这么说，凡是分数在26以下的同学，最紧迫的任务都是纠正文章中存在的错误，而不是追求华丽的句子和词语。

4托福写作评分标准

Your essay will be judged on the quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the organization of your essay, and the quality and accuracy of the language you use to express your ideas.

你的写作质量最重要，这包括没有各类语法错误，使用准确的词语和句子流畅地陈述观点，句子有序衔接，议论思路清晰。

5写作时选取什么立场更好?

托福是一门语言水平考试，语言质量的重要性大于你的观点，不论你选择何种立场，只要切题，言之有理，能自圆其说，都是可以的。你可以支持也可以反对话题中给予的“statement”，所选择的立场不影响分数。对方评判地更多的是你的语言表达能力。

6写作时要不要写让步段?

让步段现在被大量滥用，并不是一个明智的选择，写得不恰当会削弱总观点，导致论证不够有说服力，给人优柔寡断、立场不鲜明的感觉。考官看那些用Admittedly开头的让步段已经看到吐了，请尽量饶过他们。

建议写旗帜鲜明、一边倒的文章，以三个分论点支持你的立场。托福写作并不是GRE写作(GRE更注重论证的辩证全面)，而托福独立写作应当观点明确，然后用充分的细节和事实去支持自己，无需试图两边讨好。

为什么我对自己说的写法信心满满呢?因为在过去的托福考试实战中，我就是用这样的写法得到了作文、听力、阅读三项30分。

7写作时能不能用生活化的例子?

最好不要写 “我”、“七大姑八大姨” 、“我的朋友” 或随便编造一个名字“Tom, Jack, Mary”等过于生活化的例子。

建议学习一些有效的论证方法，学会看到话题后进行头脑风暴，深刻有理地议论话题，避免“为赋新词强说愁”，导致缺乏说服力。

8托福写作大部分考生得几分?

大部分学生分数在23以下。18-22最多见。22是good的最下限，与fair临界。

经常听到学生说：我的独立是good，综合是fair/limited;于是他们得出结论：我综合不行，独立已经够好了。其实这种想法是不恰当的，因为good包括22~30这个区间，但这个区间两端的学生写作水平还有相当大的差异。即使你已经获得了good，只要你的作文分数还低于27，独立写作就仍然要不断改进。

如果你的分数低于25，那么每篇独立写作需要至少修改50个错误才算彻底。50个?这么多?!是的，这些错误往往你自己看不出来但却很重要。

很多同学考了多次之后阅读和听力随着时间积累有明显提高，但写作分数却变化不大，这是因为他们没有进行严格的纠错和根本上的改进，只是在重复自己惯用的写法。只写不修改很难有质的提高。

9处于典型分数段如何提高?

(1)需要对每篇文章进行专业的修改。

(2)积累写作素材，摘录好词好句。

10是否可以参考网上的范文?

网上(论坛等)、国内出版物中的范文，大多数仍然存在较多错误，且中式英语很普遍，语言并不地道。可以说它们并不是真正的高分文章，大部分只是25-27分左右的。最可靠的是借鉴英语母语者写的文章(买作文书时看作者，必须是外国人;区分编者与作者这两个概念)。不要因为“方便”和“免费”就盲信网络范文。

应该采用什么方式修改托福作文

(1)同学互改

有一定帮助。但作用有限，因为大部分小伙伴的写作水平跟你差不多(20-22分居多)，虽然他们能指出你的一部分错误，但也会误导你。绝大多数真正写作分数高的同学不会来进行互改，往往要忙于准备其他出国考试、实习、学校课程或申请，考好托福后没有时间精力再来为别人改作文。

(2)用某种程序或网站的免费修改

这些修改只是指出错误，却不能详细地给你解释原因和如何改句子，所以作用也很有限。机器、程序无法代替人脑，它们只能根据固定的“语法规则”来检查你的句子，但对于复杂的成分是分析不清楚的。甚至你写对的东西它也可能认为是错的。正如你把一句话放到Google进行翻译，那么得出的结果大部分是有问题的。尤其是你让Google把中文翻译成英文时，即使英文中没有那样的表达，程序也会生硬地帮你拼凑出来，通过这个方式得到的句子和表达并不可靠。

(3)用廉价的批改

价格的高低意味着批改人所投入的时间、批改的负责程度、和语言实力。详细负责地书面批改一篇25分以下的至少需要2-3小时，批改人所花的时间会比你写作文的时间更长。大白菜价型的批改只能说明是在短时间内仓促完成的，意味着批改人的语言素养不高(看不出所有问题)或不够认真，于是得到的结果往往不尽如人意，不能帮你最大限度地提高写作质量。

(4)自己修改

能找出一部分简单的错误，但无法解决深层次问题。有些地方你写错了，恰恰是因为你不知道那样写是错的，所以自己看不出来。只写不改或写完后自己修改都容易停留在某个瓶颈。

相对好的修改方式：

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1.找托福写作28分以上的小伙伴修改

潜在弊端：口头详细讲解一篇作文中的所有问题至少要1小时(24分以下的独立或综合作文每篇必须修改至少50个错误)，但大家时间都很紧张，所以请同学或朋友免费修改往往只是改一个大概，没有彻底纠正所有语言问题;另外，改两三篇是不够的，而如果详细改5篇以上，意味着要让对方为自己付出大约10小时义务劳动，显得有些inconsiderate;一个同学考28+说明他的语言功底比较深，仅通过修改无法把对方的语言积累转化为你自己的。

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2.找负责任的外教批改

潜在弊端：外教作为母语者可以告诉你正确、地道的写法是什么，但他们比较难从语法角度分析，就像我们说中文时根本不需要考虑语法一样，一切表达对母语者是一种自然而然的反应。而纠正写作挺重要的一个方面是知道自己为什么会写错，比如，受到了哪种中式思维的影响。外教大部分不会中文，难以帮助你看清问题背后的症结。可能导致对问题的归类、产生原因、出现规律分析不够，只是表面纠正。

推荐的修改方式：写作满分者+有经验的老师

同时，建议大家先把阅读听力提高到平均分至少25分，然后集中解决写作的问题。很多同学听力阅读基础本身不够扎实，这时候练写作只会导致四项的进步都很难，想要有质的飞跃同一时间不要做超过2件事情

托福写作模板思路：保持身体健康

托福独立写作题目：Agree or disagree: it is easier for people to maintain good health today than it was in the past.

是否同意：相比过去，人们更容易保持身体健康。

Vicky老师的思路讲解：

一道老生常谈的今昔对比型考题。今昔对比题是每年必考题型，这道题更是在过往的几年于中国大陆和北美至少考过三次，重要性和经典程度不言而喻。

如果选择同意，即人们现在维持好的健康状况比过去更容易，可以这样展开构思：

1. 医疗技术的进步可以预防及治愈在过去或许会致命的(fatal)疾病。可以拿手术、HPV疫苗等举例。

2. 现代人饮食更全面均衡，这对健康有利。过去人能够吃到的食物种类较少，甚至在灾害发生的年份，只能吃到草根树皮等;而现代人能够接触到各种食材，包括蔬菜、瓜果，鸡蛋和谷物等，营养摄入更充分。

如果选择不同意，也就是人们在过去比现在更易维持健康，可以考虑现代社会存在哪些不利健康的因素，如空气污染，繁重的生活工作压力等。

篇6：gre考试写作这么有用

gre考试写作模板这么有用?

gre写作模板

开头

In the argument, the …(主题对象) recommends that …(对结论做论述，基本上可以抄原文，用另外一种方式表达即可). To support this recommendation the argument point out that …(说明文章用了什么论据去证明观点了，同上抄袭即可) however …This argument is logically flawed in several critical respects (说明这篇文章逻辑上是有缺陷的)。

攻击论据

1. 调查结果没有证据申明

To begin with, the argument depends on the assumption that… (阐述说出了一个没有根据的申明，并说出文中的原因) —rather than for some other reasons. Yet it is entirely possible that… (说明这种猜测可能的原因) or some other factor. Without ruling out all other reasons why… (重述这个申明)…(说出反方向的结论)。

2. gre写作提到了样本，但是数据不具有代表性(数据不够)

Firstly, the author provides no evidence that the survey is statistically reliable. Perhaps the survey’s sample is not sufficient in size or representative of the quality of …(说明对象的数量和质量不够) For that matter, this survey is not strong enough to establish causation between… (在这里列出原因和结果，做比较) However, the other reasons of the survey which (叙述其他原因下的情况). As a result, without the evidence that the survey is statistically reliable the author cannot justifiably draw any conclusion by relying on this survey.

3. 猜测，但是没有证据

Thirdly, the argument assumes that… (阐述文中的猜测) However, the letter provides no evidence to substantiate this assumption. In fact, the letter suggests that this might be the case. By admitting that …, the letter implies that …说明影响他们happy的因素还有其他的方面，不光是研究中所列举。

gre考试攻击论证过程

1. 时间上的错误类比

To begin with,…(陈述某个数据) may not a reliable date of that rate would be now(和现在相比较是不可信的). Perhaps the… (反例)， For that matter, perhaps …(说出反例的情况下会导致何种结果). In short, without ruling out other possible reasons for …(假设说出针对反例应该怎么做)the memo’s author cannot convince me on the basis of …(说出应该有的结论)

2.错误的因果关系

3. 两个事实错误的类比

Even if…(让步，即使某个条件成立) the argument unfairly assumes that…(说明错误的类比的情况). It is entirely possible that the …(比较对象) own different situations. Perhaps …(具体说出反例) Without accounting for such differences between the two places is unreliable.

4. 错误的推论

Even if …(让步，即使某个条件成立)the argument relied on the future assumption that …(说出要让步的是事实). Yet the only evidence the argument offer to substantiate this assumption (说出文中的根据). Perhaps …(说出有可能出现的其他情况导致这个事实)if so, (说出不一样的结果，与上面事实相矛盾). Or…(其他的情况) In short, without more information about…(对上面的可能情况总结) were established it is impossible to assess …(回到上面的结论)。

结论的攻击

说明结论不完美，可以有其他的方法

Finally, the argument fails to consider …(有更好的办法实现目标). Perhaps by…(办法一)， or by (办法二)， (对目标进行展望) In short, without weighing the suggestion against alternatives, it is unconvincing that (说明提供的方案不好)。

赢利

Finally, even if the families support to build the new seafood restaurant, the restaurant would not necessarily be profitable as a result. Profitability is a function of both revenue and expense. Thus, it is quite possible that the restaurant’s costs of obtaining high-quality and healthy seafood or of new promoting restaurant might render it unprofitable despite its popularity. Without weighing revenue against expenses the argument’s conclusion is premature at best.

同时叙述两个错误的论据

The memo also makes two hasty assumptions about …(说明两个猜想相关的内容). One such assumption is that …(第一个猜想的情况说明). It is entirely possible that …(反例). Another assumption is that(另外一个错误的猜想) Common sense informs me that (反例)

Furthermore, the difference in the two firms’ overall placement time last year does not necessarily indicate that Delany would be the better choice to serve XYZ’s laid-off employees. These employees might have particular skills or needs that are not representative of the two firm’s clients in general. Besides, one year’s placement statistics hardly sufficient to draw any firm conclusions.

结尾段

In sum, the argument seems logical, but is based on nothing more than pure speculation and perhaps wishful thinking, yet lack of some warranted investigation. To strength it, the author needs to evaluate all possible alternatives and provide detail and comprehensive evidence before jumping to the conclusion that …(文中的结论)

成为GRE写作达人8大因素

GRE考试中，新GRE作文向来被考生所重视，特别是在GRE考试改革以来，大家对新GRE写作的练习抱着“不成功便成仁”的想法拼命去看。这种复习精神值得赞扬。不过，在练的过程中大家还需要注意一些问题。小编在此为大家整理八点高分作文的达成办法，帮助考生顺利拿到作文高分。

1.必须研究新GRE写作范文，尤其是5分和6分的范文，他们真的非常重要，因为那是最权威的辅导资料!不是简单的熟读和背诵，而是逐字逐句的体会作者的意思及修辞。还有提醒一点，ETS对范文的评论也都非常精彩，建议大家参考!这会非常有利于理解考试所考的重点。

2.必须要熟练，重要的是形成惯性思维。GRE考试时间真的是太紧张了，要想现场思考每句话的调理性真的是太难了，远远超过了大脑运转的速度，只有有充分思维准备的人，才能驾轻就熟，运用自如。题目中提到politics，大脑中就应当出现Franklin Roosevelt， Lincoln， Gerhard Shroeder， Gandhi……; 提到ART，就该想到Rembrandt， Van Gogh， Starry night， night watch， Henmingway， the old man and the sea……; 提到Scandal，就该想到Nixon，watergate，bill clinton，sex sandal，Enran……总之，熟练是非常非常重要的!

3.必须多修改，如果不勤修改自己的新GRE作文，就不知道自己原来的漏洞和不足在哪，闷头写，只能导致lose the stake! 当认真学习一段时间写作之后，再回头改第一篇习作，肯定会发现自己很多毛病，这说明：我们在进步!

4.必须学习别人的文章，不管是老外280，还是同主题习作，都是非常宝贵的学习，参考资料，看到别人的文章和新GRE写作思路，是提高自己水平的有效途径!建议大家看看其他考生原来写的习作和互拍，真的会受益匪浅!例如：imong，needle，pooh，鬼谷子等牛人的，不一一列举了。

5.必须多思考，多写不如多改，多改不如多想，当然这种想不是fantasy and daydream.二是针对写作思路和自我总结，当我意识到这点时，已经太晚了!

6.必须看arg的全部题库，不要抱侥幸心理，在考试之前找到文章中出现的逻辑错误，远比在30min中为它而浪费时间值得的多。

7.必须多交流，听听大家的意见，有益无害。

8.必须要有自己的例子，这个，没有哪个考官会喜欢几百号人都说Van Gogh， Einstein， Curie吧?

好了，关于新GRE写作的高分达成注意点小编就整理到这。要拿新GRE作文的高分着实不容易，大家在GRE考试的复习时候一定要打牢基础知识，同时掌握一定的作文技巧，再者就是多看高分作文范文，这样才能在有限的复习时间内达到最大的复习效果。

GRE范文：独立思考

题目：

What most human beings really want to attain is not knowledge, but certainty. Gaining real knowledge requires taking risks and keeping the mind open―but most people prefer to be reassured rather than to learn the complex and often unsettling truth about anything.

大多人真正想要得到的不是知识而是结论。获得真正的知识需要冒险和不停歇的思考――但是大多数人更愿意获得确定的答案而不是去学习复杂而不确定的真理。

正文：

What does most human beings want is not discovery and change but reassurance.Although discoveries and changes are the real impetuses of human civilization, most people prefer reassurance than innovations and changes in that in this world most people are conservative and the discoveries and changes would sometimes harm some ones' benefit, which based on the obsolete systems.

On the one hand, in fact, most people value what they have obtained much more than what would be gain through new ways. This conservative kind of thinking in some sense is very common indeed since trying new ways always means taking risks of losing the present benefit. Take many Chinese workers for example. In China now,during the transformation of economy system, many factories and companies are under the danger of bankruptcy due to their rigid ways of thinking. And the workers in these companies or factories do not have positive attitudes neither. They ignore, or we can say give up, the better chance such as leave the old companies and find a new one which would be more suitable or quite for a short time to study some new skills; but stay where they are to wait for reassurance from the companies or government. the reason for this kind of behaviors is that they are fear for losing the jobs, whish however have little points after all. Simply put, they think they can survive if they keep the salary, but maybe lose everything when taking risks. Actually, these people fail to see the wealth behind changes and discoveries. No pain, no gain. One reluctantly loses something, he/she would not gain more important and valuable.

On the other hand, discoveries and changes would bring new systems and value and moral standards, which would necessarily break the outdated ones. In this sense,discoveries and changes could harm some ones or some classes' benefit. Therefore, it is not difficult to understand the resistance against new things and the preference of reassurance to the obsolete system. The Industry Revolution is just a case in point.

The significant change had brought human beings into a new stage of both material and spirit; but during the revolution, many people hold the point of view that the change is very dangerous to human civilization. Such individuals included peasants,old noble men and some government officials. The fundamental reason for this situation was that such a profound and overall change shook the old social and economy system and thus those depended on such a system felt they were threatened.

For example, the peasants lost their lands and the old noble men lost their taxes from the peasants; even the government officials, were in the fear of losing their positions.Thereby, for the men who would still receive benefit from the obsolete system, they would prefer reassurance than changes and discoveries.

It is true that sometimes changes and discoveries would bring some damage to the present society; yet they would automatically build a new one full of vigor and creativity. So people should not be restrained with the conservative ideas and open their minds to see the future benefit they would gain from the new system built by changes and discoveries. Anyway, new things are always prior to the old ones.

篇7：gre考试写作如何避免雷同

gre考试写作如何避免雷同

1.绝对不能照抄原文。

gre考试要在语言上可以使用一些范文的句式，但是绝对不能照抄原文，而是要换掉一些关键词。或者如果要借用关键词，则必须使用别的句式。

2.在观点上要具有洞察力，要有自己的原创特色。

观点是新gre作文考试的核心内容，考察考生能否对一个issue进行深入分析与思考并最终提出一个有层次的观点。有了原创观点就不用担心雷同。我这样说也许有有点像让快饿死的人去吃肉粥。如果真的要借鉴范文观点，我建议应该尽可能做一些调整，以避免第二个雷区。或者干脆在文中讲明这个思路是借鉴了哪一本参考书的。美国人对真小人比对伪君子要宽容。

3.可以引用范文例证。

在例证方面，使用新gre写作范文用过的例证没有问题，哪怕用那些被判雷同的例证也没问题。例证是人类的共同知识，谁都可以使用，关键是我们不能用和范文作者同样的思路和语言来诠释例证并展开类似的论证。

因此，越是耳熟能详的例证如牛顿与苹果树、爱迪生孵蛋，要写出原创的内容就越困难，雷同的危险就越大。

4.在结构上可以采取声东击西的策略。

比如把北美范文用在120题的结构和破题策略用在210题上。

GRE作文备考：搜集与美国思维相关的素材

1.GRE写作素材积累

我们要多看报纸，多看杂志和书籍，从这些素材挑选好的文章，从而使自己的文章可以得到润色。作文素材积累很重要，因为有时我们可以跳过自己写的环节直接引用他人的文章素材，这是一个节省时间的最好方法。所以注重GRE作文素材的积累是一个很有效的方法。

2.GRE写作素材评估

作文素材也有好有坏，我们要对自己的作文素材进行评估，那么这样的话就不会使自己的作文显得很没有水准。我们在看报纸或是杂志或是书籍的时候可以边看边记录，这样有用的东西都被我们记录下来，在考试的时候直接运用，取得高分。

3.GRE写作素材运用

作文素材运用也是一门学科，因为我们如何去把握素材，如何运用素材也要自己考虑，通常写作得用一到两个素材为最佳，一个太少，二个则显得太过于杂乱，好好把握素材的量是一门很必要的学科。

有意而为之，专门为了新GRE作文来准备一些相关的资料，就可以取得理想的成绩。若是想要考出一个好成绩，花费时间是一定的，没有提前准备就绪的话，其实很难达到理想效果。所以在准备新GRE写作时候，一定要认真收集GRE写作素材。

GRE写作必要掌握积累的谚语素材

1. Waste not,want not.

俭以防匮。

2. From saving comes having.

富有来自节俭。

3. A penny saved is a penny gained.

省一文是一文。

4. Take care of the pence and the pound will take care of themselves.

金钱积少便成多。

5. Frugality is an estate alone.

节俭本身就是一宗财产。

6. He that regards not a penny,will lavish a pound.

小钱不知节省，大钱将滥花。

7. Small gains bring great wealth.

积小利，成巨富。

8. Many a little makes a mickle.

积少便成多。

9. As the touchstone tries gold,so gold tries man.

试金之石可试金，正如黄金能试人。

10.Courage and resolution are the spirit and soul of virtue.

勇敢和坚决是美德的灵魂。

11.The path to glory is always rugged.

光荣之路常坎坷。

12.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.

世上无难事，只要人肯试。

13.The fire is the test of gold;adversity of strong man.

烈火试真金，困苦炼壮士。

14.Great hopes make great man.

远大的希望造就伟大的人物。

15.No way is impossible to courage.

勇士面前无险路。

16.A smooth sea never made a skillful mariner.

平静的大海决不能造就出熟练的水手。

17.The good seaman is known in bad weather.

坏天气下才能识得出良好的海员;要识好海员，须凭坏天气。

18.The best hearts are always the bravest.

行为最勇敢的人心地总是最善良。

19.We must not lie down,and cry,God help us.

求神不如求己。

20.He that falls today may be up again tomorrow.

今天跌倒的人也许明天就会站起。

21.Rome was not built in a day.

罗马并非一日可建成;坚持必成。

22.Success belongs to the persevering.

胜利属于坚忍不拔的人。

23.We must repeat a thousand and one times that perseverance is the only road to success.

我们要多次重申：不屈不挠是取得胜利的唯一道路。

24.Perseverance is failing nineteen times and succeeding the twentieth.

十九次失败，到第二十次获得成功，这就叫坚持。

25.Step by step the ladder is ascended.

登梯需要逐级登。

26.Adversity leads to prosperity.

困苦通向昌盛。

27.Patience and application will carry us through.

忍耐和专心会使我们度过难关。

28.Fortune often rewards with interest those that have patience to wait for her.

做事只要有耐心，到头总会有好运;耐心候好运，好运常会来。

29.All things will come round to him who will but wait.

只要肯等待，一切都会按时来。

30.Constant dropping wears the stone.

滴水不绝可穿石。

篇8：gre考试写作高分策略

gre考试写作高分策略分享

你需要一个gre写作策略

为什么很多考生在gre写作考试中会出现重复的问题?主要原因如下：

一。gre考试词汇储备不足

这是虚词单调的最常见原因。考生词汇量小，没有专门的文字训练和背诵，范文数量不够。没有足够的准备，他写不出各种各样的字，事实就是这样。

2.缺乏词汇掌握

作为一名合格的GRE考生，背诵大量单词是必要的。然而，在记忆单词的要求上也存在一些问题。很多人对GRE词汇背诵的要求只是相互熟悉，能够理解或大致理解词义，而很少有考生去了解句子中词汇的具体用法。这也使得考生知道了很多单词，看了大量的词汇，但当他们真正使用它们时，他们只能使用那些旧单词。

三。缺乏实践经验

一些考生可能已经意识到了背单词和掌握一些生词使用方法的重要性。然而，由于缺乏实践或无人帮助批改和复习，gre写作方法,gre写作怎么练他们不敢在实际写作中使用这些词。他们觉得自己不确定，害怕误用所以经过一轮之后，他们只能沿着一条稳定的道路，反复使用老字眼。

避免重复用词扣分

现在我们知道了重复问题的原因，相应的解决方案非常清楚。候选人需要做两件事：

一。特殊记忆写作词汇

首先，如果缺乏词汇，那么我们应该开始有意识地积累一些词汇，特别是专门用于写作的词汇。编辑建议考生可以参考GRE作文高分模式官方或权威出版物或黄金材料，从中收集一些用字不多但在模式中使用频率高的词汇，这些词汇不仅适合写作，而且可以带来高分，具有很高的实用价值。你可以在这方面积累更多的文字来代替写作和自己的习惯，这样会起到很好的效果，丰富文章的呈现形式。

2.积累更多经验

其次，如果考生害怕用生词制造问题，那么我们需要做的就是多练习。我们不必做一个完整的写作练习，我们可以专注于练习词汇替换，找到一些我们已经写过的文章，并用相同意思的词替换它们如果对词汇的使用不确定，可以通过QQ群论坛等方式查字典找例句或一般句子，帮助他人确定其使用方法，充分掌握词汇的正确使用方法，这样自然可以保证在考试中大胆使用生词，提高构词质量。

GRE作文范文：事物不会一成不变

2018年GRE作文范文参考：

GRE作文范文：审查的公正性

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