下面小编给大家整理了托福写作考试如何避免词汇和语句重复，本文共4篇，供大家阅读参考。本文原稿由网友“kokowj”提供。
篇1：托福写作考试如何避免词汇和语句重复
【立场：AGREE】
本文的Introduction被隐去。
【A phenomenon as Reason 1】
第一个理由以举例论证的方法说明了立场，没有说理过程，却在例子中诠释了作者的立场.
First, rarely do neighbors 【语法：表否定的副词置于句首时的倒装现象，是一个很好模仿的语法现象，这里是在主语前助动词，单复数和主语一致;注意：这种语法现象其实也是在强调句子表达的否定意义】exchange pleasantries nowadays, whereas people in the same neighborhood used to greet each other. This phenomenon happens in my apartment building. 【写作法：长句之后的短句，用来调整/缓一下信息节奏】 I have to confess that I am unfamiliar with the person who lives next door, and I am almost sure that he knows nothing about me but my apartment number, although we often bump into each other in the elevator. We may make eye contact a few times, but never ask the other’s name, probably because we are uninterested. Also, I do not think that my neighborhood is an exception to the overall situation.
【Reason 2 stated and illustrated by examples】
第二个理由的论述是一个经典结构，先说明作者认定的道理，然后用例子诠释了这个道理。
In the past, when the financial gap between people was small, people were friendlier. The minor advantage a person had could barely provoke another’s jealousy. Nor could 【语法：nor置于句首时的倒装现象，这里是把情态动词提前到主语前】it be the richer person’s asset be contemptuous of another. As a matter of fact, people used to be generous in offering care or giving a hand. At present, a person can be far wealthier than another, and the richer one may have an annoying sense of superiority, and meanwhile the less privileged may display hostility. China is an example. 【写作法：这个短句前后的信息都很丰富，尤其是之前一句较长，所以这个短句在这里起到调整/缓和信息节奏的作用】 When my grandfather was my age, he would spare 50 cents from his only dollar to help a neighbor who needed it. Today, a person who works in our office building, who drives an economical car, won’t stop blowing the horn to hustle my boss, who drives an expensive car, just because “expensive cars should go faster”.
10月14日托福独立写作真题+范文+思路解析!
10月14日托福独立写作题目：Do you think that one needs to take risks to finally reach success, or to keep cautious and careful and take risks less?
Do you think that one needs to take risks to finally reach success 【审题关键词】, or to keep cautious and careful and take risks less?
写作前请一定仔细审题，本题不是单纯的比较“冒险”和“小心”，还有一个关键的限制是“目的在于最终获取成功”，如果漏掉了这一关键信息，作文很可能出现不够切题甚至彻底偏题的惨象。
写作思路
敲黑板·划重点
首先，introduction不宜长，不宜在进入主题前做长篇累牍的绕弯或铺垫。过度篇幅的introduction，尤其是铺垫部分，会给读者(即人类考官)制造阅读压力，打击读者的阅读愿望，引起读者的反感。
其次，introduction的结构可能不是最基础的“引入-论题-立场”结构。在introduction里可能会出现让步内容(一种特殊的让步内容位置)，之后，作者可以通过转折来表明自己的立场。
【本文的 introduction 就采用了内置让步内容的方法】
Many people have the conception that they need to take risks to achieve success. This thought is provoked by the many inspiring stories where entrepreneurs, such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, dropped out of college and started their own businesses. Their bold moves are believed to be the key to their accomplishments. However, these successful individuals are the rare individuals. For the overwhelming majority of people, keeping cautious and careful is more rational.
this thought --- the conception 名词指代名词
their bold moves --- dropped out of college 名词指代动词
本文的body部分被隐去
敲黑板·划重点
首先，conclusion也不宜长，不要在conclusion 里过度重复 body 里的细节。
其次，作为一个独立的段落，有起码两句话才是“守规矩”的，不建议考生只写一句话潦草收尾。
In conclusion, if a person’s goal is to achieve tremendous success, conservatism may be undesirable, because the greater is the risk, the greater is the reward. However, most people, whose objective is to secure moderate success, should keep cautious and careful.
篇2：托福写作考试如何避免词汇和语句重复
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One’s job has a greater influence on the one’s overall happiness than the one’s social life does.
托福写作范文[立场：同意]
Our overall happiness is subject to many influences. The two paramount ones may be our jobs and our social lives. Here comes [“套路深”之 倒装句 机会] the question: is one’s job a greater influence than the one’s social life? I would rely in the affirmative [习语]. [“套路深”之 设问句(自问自答) 机会]
Before everything starts, a relatively clear definition of happiness is needed. It is fair to believe that prior to other factors, one’s financial security, which relies mostly on the one’s job – stability of the position and the salary, is the fundamental of the one’s happiness. [中心句] One who has difficulty making a living as is desired hardly has the mood to enjoy life’s other offerings. For example, one of my friends is recently suffering from a substantial salary cut and now can barely make ends meet [习语]. His mind is now where the source of income is, and he is obviously absent-minded even though there are friends around. Although he may put the worry aside [put … as
Here comes [“套路深”之 倒装句 机会] the follow-up question. [段落之间的联系不是简单的平行并列，而是 层进/递进] What about a financially secure person? When a job can fully satisfy the person’s economic need, in what ways does the job bring more happiness to the job holder than does the one’s social life? [“套路深”之 设问句 机会] One’s happiness is definitely not limited to [be limited to] how much money the job pays. Feeling needed, appreciated and respected is the next level up [习语]. This is what a job can provide and what a social life may not. [两句合成 中心句功能] [回答前面的 设问] In the job, one makes personal breakthroughs or accomplishments, gets better paid or promoted, feels trusted and admired by the peers, and plays a role that matters. In comparison, the social life may be pleasant but not that fulfilling. Friends like each other and not necessarily need to look up to each other; they enjoy each other’s company but can live without each other; their respect to each other often does not build on recognition on each other’s capability but on shared interests or common personalities.
Admittedly, that is not denying how important one’s social life is. Rarely does [“套路深”之 倒装句 机会] a high achiever at work live happily if he (or she) has nowhere to go except the office. While the job can challenge, frustrate or even irritate the person, the friends can keep the person undefeated, optimistic and delighted.
At this point, one should be convinced that a person’s job plays a bigger role in one’s overall happiness than does the person’s social life. We need to socialize and, to a greater extent, need to work.
[词汇学习重点：表示正/负评价的动词和形容词]
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篇3：托福写作避免空洞词汇和重复啰嗦是关键
托福写作如何提升考官阅读体验?避免空洞词汇和重复啰嗦是关键
托福作文词汇应选择使用不空洞的词
1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：
When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.
托福写作中应尽量减少重复啰嗦
1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简洁的表达方式为：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：
My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
托福写作语料库积累：关于饮食
托福写作语料库
健康饮食的重要性 ：
鼓励健康饮食习惯：encourage healthy eating habits ,
保持体形：keep fit,
集中注意力：concentrate/focus on; 容易分散注意力：get easily distracted
营养：nutrient, 特定的维生素：certain vitamins;
油腻的垃圾食品不含孩子成长所需的必要维生素，这样孩子无法在学习中集中注意力,因此学校应该鼓励健康饮食。
Greasy junk food lacks certain vitamins for the healthy development of the children, and students without sufficient healthy food might suffer from lack of concentration on their study and they get easily distracted, thus school should encourage healthy eating habit.
垃圾食品：junk food, French fries, hamburgers;
高热量：with high carbs, 油腻：greasy;
儿童肥胖：child obesity;
摄入过多的高热量垃圾食品会导致儿童肥胖。
It is really important for the school to encourage healthy eating habits, and junk food like French fries and hamburgers alike should be banned in schools. Too much junk food with high carbs leads to childhood obesity.
健康食品 ：
海鲜类： salmon， tuna, shrimp
水果类：fruits such as berries, apples, cherries, pineapple, oranges, frozen grapes, watermelon, cantaloupe,
蔬菜类：Vegetables - broccoli, carrots, cherry tomatoes, potatoes and sweet potatoes
高蛋白质低热量：high in protein low carbs
非常好的结合：a wonderful combination
学校应该提供蔬菜和水果等低热量高维生素的食品。
School should offer students a variety of healthy food and snack ranging from vegetables to different kinds of fruit. Like broccoli, carrots, cherry tomatoes, and apples, cherries, pineapple are also good choices. They are low in carbs, and vitamin rich.
通过适当的教育学生会做出更好的饮食决策：
Hopefully, with proper education, students can make appropriate eating choices.
既然学生可以摄取合理的营养，他们会更加集中注意力也会保持好的体形。
Since students are getting the proper nutrients, they will concentrate better on their study and also they will be more fit.
托福写作词汇积累
支持前/后种观点的人
people / those in favor of the former/ latter opinion4 }
有/提供如下理由/证据
have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
在一定程度上
to some extent/ degree / in some way
理论和实践相结合
integrate theory with practice
……必然趋势
an irresistible trend of…
日益激烈的社会竞争
the increasingly fierce social competition
眼前利益
immediate interest/ short-term interest
长远利益
interest in the long run
有其自身的优缺点
has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
扬长避短
Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
取其精髓，取其糟粕
Take the essence and discard the dregs
对……有害
do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to
交流思想/情感/信息
exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
跟上……的最新发展
keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …
采取有效措施来……
take effective measures to do sth….
……的健康发展
the healthy development of …
有利有弊
Every coin has its two sides…
没有什么事物是完美的
No garden without weeds
对……观点因人而异
Views on …vary from person to person
重视
attach great importance to…
社会地位
social status
把时间和精力放在……上
focus time and energy on…
扩大知识面
expand one’s scope of knowledge
身心两方面
both physically and mentally
有直接/间接关系
be directly / indirectly related to…&
经济的快速发展
the rapid development of economy
人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长
the remarkable improvement / steady growth of people’s living standard
先进的科学技术
advanced science and technology
面临新的机遇和挑战
be faced with new opportunities and challenges
人们普遍认为
It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
篇4：托福写作如何避免重复用词
托福写作如何避免重复用词?这2个方法你要了解
1. 通过简化避免用词重复
想要尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇，或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复的情况，这时候考生该可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简洁的表达方式为：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 用词组替换单词避免重复
有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：
My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
托福写作模板:小孩成长环境
托福写作模板及范文参考：
It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
托福写作范文参考：
With the development of the transportation system and some residence institution， the world is getting smaller and smaller， and people are not restricted in only one area. In addition to the convenient condition， because there are different places with different cultures， living standards， education environment and other disparity， they are inclined to transfer from one place to the other. Is it better to move around than stay in one place? I believe there are no uniform answers，but in my opinion， I do agree with the claim that to move around is better than to stay in one place.
Most people's growth comes with the transfers in their life. As for me， when I was young I lived in a small county. Because the school in there was not suitable to me， I transferred from my little county to a city to get a better education. As soon as I got to the city， I was amazed that the world here was so different here as my hometown .If I still lived in my hometown， it was impossible for me to make the wildest guess at what the real world looked like. The first transfer has made me to imagine my own life and spur on me to go further. With the confidence， I went into a university which I would never think of it before. The university is located in a different city so that I have to come into another world. Compared with my living city， the one is more complicated in which there are different people， more convenient transportation， more competitive environment. I love all of this very much. Communicating with different students and teachers， I have learned much from them which will benefit me throughout my life and my lifestyle. Now I am in a graduate school also so beautiful that I will never regret my selection of leaving my hometown because the transfer has given me a splendid life.
Also， like we students， there are many adults transferring their work place in order to grasp better opportunities. No matter in industry， in agriculture or in service， workers have rights to choose their work companies which leads them to work from place to place and then they accumulate precious experience and skills to get priorities to others.
People not only transfer in their own country， but also go abroad to get education， work or live through the rest of their life in appropriate countries. We can see that many students including me want to go to the foreign countries to study further and forge ourselves， and that many parents send their little sons or daughters to foreign countries to study. After all， diverse circumstances give persons new experience and broaden their narrow sight， even help them get more comprehensive understanding of the world， the society and our life itself.
However， some people may say that if people move around， they will pay for much such as money， time and energy. It is right to say that it takes one person some time to get used to his or her new environment， new personal relationship which indeed influences the growth of children， the efficiency of our work and the stability of our society and family. And I have to admit that people should make considerate plans before changing their places and may not transfer aimlessly and frequently. But I think sometimes it is just all the friction that has made the world wealthier and more beautiful. Therefore， I still think it is better to travel around than to live in one place.
托福写作模板:睡眠革命
Evolution of sleep
Sleep is very ancient. In the electroencephalographic sense we share it with all the primates and almost all the other mammals and birds: it may extend back as far as the reptiles.
There is some evidence that the two types of sleep, dreaming and dreamless, depend on the life-style of the animal, and that predators are statistically much more likely to dream than prey, which are in turn much more likely to experience dreamless sleep. In dream sleep, the animal is powerfully immobilized and remarkably unresponsive to external stimuli. Dreamless sleep is much shallower, and we have all witnessed cats or dogs cocking their ears to a sound when apparently fast asleep. The fact that deep dream sleep is rare among pray today seems clearly to be a product of natural selection, and it makes sense that today, when sleep is highly evolved, the stupid animals are less frequently immobilized by deep sleep than the smart ones. But why should they sleep deeply at all? Why should a state of such deep immobilization ever have evolved?
Perhaps one useful hint about the original function of sleep is to be found in the fact that dolphins and whales and aquatic mammals in genera seem to sleep very little. There is, by and large, no place to hide in the ocean. Could it be that, rather than increasing an animal’s vulnerability, the University of Florida and Ray Meddis of London University have suggested this to be the case. It is conceivable that animals who are too stupid to be quite on their own initiative are, during periods of high risk, immobilized by the implacable arm of sleep. The point seems particularly clear for the young of predatory animals. This is an interesting notion and probably at least partly true.
托福写作模板:学习问题
托福写作模板及范文参考：
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
托福写作范文参考：
Most of us can learn how to do something simple on our own with just a set of instructions. However， to learn about something more complex， it's always best to have a teacher. Teachers bring with them varied and useful backgrounds. They've been trained to teach individuals in different ways depending on their style.
For instance， some students learn better by discussing a topic. Others learn more by writing about it. Teachers can help students learn in the way that's best for each student. A textbook or a manual can only give you one way of learning something. Plus they're only as helpful as your ability to understand them. A good teacher can adapt her teaching to your needs.
Teachers help you focus on what you're learning. If you're learning something by yourself， it's easy to become distracted and go on to other activities. Teachers keep your attention on the subject. They also approach a subject logically， taking it one step at a time. On your own， it's tempting to skip parts of the learning process you think you don't need. That can hinder your ability to really understand the subject.
Learning a subject on your own is a very narrow way of learning. You can only use the information you get from the textbook. With a teacher， you get the information in the written materials as well as the teacher's own knowledge of the topic. Teachers can also provide extra materials to broaden the scope of what you're learning.
There's nothing wrong with studying on your own， and a learner can always benefit from some quiet study. For the best possible learning， though， a good teacher is the biggest help you can have.
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