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以下是小编精心整理的托福写作冲刺高分作文赏析，本文共11篇，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。本文原稿由网友“深井冰家里蹲”提供。

篇1：托福写作冲刺高分作文赏析

托福写作冲刺高分作文赏析

几乎所有拿高分作文的学生，对于独立写作最基础部分的把握可以说是天衣无缝的。何为最基础的部分?打字。托福写作较于其他三个科目不同，对于打字有着比较高的要求。尤其是独立写作，30分钟的时间需要至少写到300字以上，何况，在考场，环境和平时练习又是不一样的状况，想要在写作中拿到不错的分数，打字这个基本功是绝对不能拖后腿的。一方面，打字的速度要快，通俗说就是手速，需要考生充分熟悉键盘。另一方面，打字的准确性也是需要保证的，换言之，打出的单词要保证基本是无误的才可以，只有速度没有准确性也是不行的。和手写的习惯不同，这要求学生要学会在电脑上迅速反应出自己文章的中是否有错的单词。所以建议一些对打字不熟练或者经常打错单词的同学，平时可以多练习一下打字练习，勤能补拙。

说完基础，接下来我们就从W同学的文章来看一下，她之所以能够拿高分的原因。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend money helping more people access the Internet instead of improving public transportation.

Although, in recent decades, there has been a growing need for Internet access and the government has been strongly advised to increase its budget in this area, I personally think that it is more essential for the government to spend money on the improvement of public transportation than on more access to Internet.

首先，原题中有提到一个非常关键的词instead of，这其实就要求学生在写作时两边进行比较论证。我们可以很清楚的看到W同学对题目的正解，it is more essential…。大家都清楚，对于独立写作，ETS评分标准第一个就是address the topic and task。那么高分的作文就是effectively address the topic and task。

无一例外，高分文章处理的最漂亮的不是单词用的多么生僻，句子写的多么冗长，而是对文章题目的把握。题目理解错或不到位都会直接影响到接下来的论证，无疑就是“上梁不正下梁歪”。

For one thing, public transportation influences our life in a deeper and wider aspect than it is assumed. In fact, the great impact on the Internet is still not as comparable as public transportation. What is easily recognized is people’s need to commute back and forth between their homes and workplaces, or to travel from one city to another. Convenient public transportation shortens the distance between different locations, makes our traveling experience more acceptable and even enjoyable, and saves us plenty of time for a tasty meal or a good rest instead of wasting a large amount of time on a long tedious journey. What most people may not be easily aware of, on the other hand, is that public transportation also influences the quality of consumer goods taken from the factories or farmland over a long journey to its target customers. Take the infant formula of milk powder as an example, it is the common wishes of mothers to let their babies enjoy the freshest and highest-quality milk. However, if the production base of milk is a little bit far from the milk origin, the quality of the milk will likely deteriorate if there is no convenient public transportation such as expressways or airlines. Even after the milk power is produced, it may still have a long way to go to reach the babies, and without reliable public transportation, the packaging might easily break up or the products might be moistened due to increased humidity on the way.

这里截取了W同学两个分论点论证的第一个分论点论证。在段落的开始，她直接给出了分论点public transportation influences our life in a deeper and wider aspect than it is assumed. 尤其注意分论点中的deeper and wider，比较级突出了为何更应该投钱在public transportation上，符合总论点所需要回答的理由。也就是说从文章的结构上来看，分论点必须符合两个要求，第一回答总论点，第二总结分论点段的内容。很多同学在写独立写作的时候常常是写完总论点就把总论点要求论证的东西忘了，写完所谓的分论点就把分论点给抛了，之后的论证五花八门。这样一盘散沙式的论证无疑直接降低了拿高分的几率。所以，脑洞大，有想法是好事，但是也要符合“游戏”规则才行。在之后的论证中，我们可以看到W同学，运用了我们所熟悉的说理还有举例论证，层层递进把分论点论证清楚了。

According to the aforementioned discussions, it is apparent that public transportation not only plays an important role in our individual life, but can also contribute to making the earth a greener place. Therefore, the government should spend money on improving public transportation instead of increasing internet access.

关于结尾段的论述，就是对上述分论点的总结并且转述观点，言简意赅，不需要添加新的内容。

所以，不难看出，拿到高分的独立写作，首先保证打字速度和准确度;当然关键还是在于处理文章所给的题目，不偏题不跑题，在论证时，思维严谨，交代清楚细节。最后，语言不宜口语化。

准备：制定整体的计划

对于很多同学来说，备考托福是一个“功到自然成”的事情，也就是说，大家往往都会认为只要不断在做题目，不断在背诵词汇，到了差不多的时间去参加考试，总是没有问题的。但是，时间并不是我们想象中的那么简单。如果凡事没有一个明确的deadline，我们的习惯就是有多少时间就浪费掉多少时间，所以，如果还没有报名的同学首先应该强迫自己报上名，这样对于考试就会有一种紧迫性。

而当自己的时间显得特别紧张的时候，这计划就是显得尤为的重要。而在托福考试的备考中，制定计划的关键是“量身定做，细化步骤”。比如，想要在2-4周内提升自己的托福听力能力，那么，我们就要分清是突击conversation还是lecture，每天练习的时间和相关的题目等等细节问题。

练习：掌握机经的使用

在托福备考练习的时候，机经应该是所有学生都会去关注的焦点问题。同样，还有很多学生会把自己的考试都押注在托福的机经预测上。但是，对于托福考试来说，这也是个很大的误区，机经的定义是前人考过的题目的回忆。既然是回忆，就有不准确的地方。可是很多同学还是把机经等同于答案。新托福考试，适当的看机经是有用的，最起码会让我们把握最新的考试题型，明白出题者的思路等，但是，备考托福是实力为王。

冲刺：学会使用模考软件

想要让自己快速适应托福考场的考试环境，在托福考试之前，尝试使用托福模考软件是必不可少的。但是，现在市面上的托福模考软件颇多，我们又该如何合理的使用呢?在什么样的时间里使用模考软件才是最佳呢?在这里建议大家，在考前一个月左右练习使用模考软件，是最为合理的时间。而在模考软件的选择中，可以首选delta，之后再使用longman、kaplan、barron。而在最后，我们就可以使用官方真题Official来测试自己的托福真实水平。

总之，对于托福备考来说，除了每天的练习之外，备考计划和备考机经等等都是备考中一些不可忽略的细节，希望以上的内容能为大家的备考带来帮助。

托福阅读真题原题+题目

Rent control is the system whereby the local government tells building owners how much they can charge their tenants in rent. In the United States, rent controls date back to at least World War II.

In 1943 the federal government imposed rent controls to help solve the problem of housing shortages during wartime. The federal program ended after the war, but in some locations, including New York City, controls continued. Under New York's controls, a landlord generally cannot raise rents on apartments as long as the tenants continue to renew their leases. In places such as Santa Monica, California, rent controls are more recent. They were spurred by the inflation of the 1970's, which, combined with California's rapid population growth, pushed housing prices, as well as rents, to record levels. In 1979 Santa Monica's municipal government ordered landlords to roll back their rents to the levels charged in 1978. Future rents could only go up by two-thirds as much as any increase in the overall price level.

In any housing market, rental prices perform three functions: (1) promoting the efficient maintenance of existing housing and stimulating the construction of new housing, (2) allocating existing scarce housing among competing claimants, and (3) rationing use of existing housing by potential renters.

One result of rent control is a decrease in the construction of new rental units. Rent controls have artificially depressed the most important long-term determinant of profitability — rents. Consider some examples. In a recent year in Dallas, Texas, with a 16 percent rental vacancy rate but no rent control laws, 11,000 new housing units were built. In the same year, in San Francisco, California, only 2,000 units were built. The major difference? San Francisco has only a 1.6 percent vacancy rate but stringent rent control laws. In New York City, except for government-subsidized construction, the only rental units being built are luxury units, which are exempt from controls. In Santa Monica, California, new apartments are not being constructed. New office rental space and commercial developments are, however. They are exempt from rent controls.

1. What does the passage mainly discuss?

(A) The construction of apartments in the United States.

(B) Causes and effects of rent control

(D) The shortage of affordable housing in the United States.

2. The word They in line 9 refers to

(A) the tenants

(B) their leases

(D) rent controls.

3. Which of the following was NOT a reason for the introduction of rent controls in Santa Monica,California?

(A) rapid population growth

(B) inflation

(D) record-high housing prices

4. The phrase roll back in line 11 is closest in meaning to

(A) credit

(B) measure

(D) reduce

5. The word stimulating in line 15 is closest in meaning to

(A) experimenting with

(B) identifying

(D) encouraging

6. It can be inferred that the purpose of rent control is to

(A) protect tenants

(B) promote construction

(D) decrease sales of rental units

7. The word depressed in line 19 is closest in meaning to

(A) saddened

(B) created

(D) defeated

8. The information in the last paragraph supports which of the following statements?

(A) San Francisco has eliminated its rent control laws.

(B) Rent control leads to a reduction in the construction of housing units

(D) There is a growing need for government-subsidized housing.

9. According to the passage , which of the following cities does NOT currently have rent controls?

(A) Santa Monica

(B) Dallas

(D) New York City

10. The word stringent in line 23 is closest in meaning to

(A) straightforward

(B) strict

(D) efficient

11. According to the passage , which of the following is NOT exempt from rent control?

(A) Luxury apartments

(B) Commercial development

(D) Office space.

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托福阅读真题原题+题目

By 1776 the fine art of painting as it had developed in western Europe up to this time had been introduced into the American colonies through books and prints, European visitors and immigrants, and traveling colonists who brought back copies (and a few original) of old master paintings and acquaintance with European art institutions.

By the outbreak of the Revolution against British rule in 1776, the status of the artists had already undergone change. In the mid-eighteenth century, painters had been willing to assume such artisan-related tasks as varnishing, gilding teaching, keeping shops, and painting wheel carriages, houses, and signs. The terminology by which artists were described at the time suggests their status: limner was usually applied to the anonymous portrait painter up to the 1760's; painter characterized anyone who could paint a flat surface. By the second half of the century, colonial artists who were trained in England or educated in the classics rejected the status of laborer and thought of themselves as artists. Some colonial urban portraitists, such as John Singleton Copley, Benjamin West, and Charles Wilson Peale, consorted with affluent patrons. Although subject to fluctuations in their economic status, all three enjoyed sufficient patronage to allow them to maintain an image of themselves as professional artists, an image indicated by their custom of signing their paintings. A few art collectors James Bowdoin III of Boston, William Byrd of Virginian, and the Aliens and Hamiltons of Philadelphia introduced European art traditions to those colonists privileged to visit their galleries, especially aspiring artists, and established in their respective communities the idea of the value of art and the need for institutions devoted to its encouragement.

Although the colonists tended to favor portraits, they also accepted landscapes, historical works, and political engravings as appropriate artistic subjects. With the coming of independence from the British Crown, a sufficient number of artists and their works were available to serve nationalistic purposes. The achievements of the colonial artists, particularly those of Copley, West, and Peale, lent credence to the boast that the new nation was capable of encouraging genius and that political liberty was congenial to the development of taste — a necessary step before art could assume an important role in the new republic.

1. What does the passage mainly discuss?

(A) European influence on colonial American painting

(B) The importance of patronage to artist

(D) Subjects preferred by artists in the American colonies in the eighteenth century.

2. The word outbreak in line 5 is closest in meaning to

(A) cause

(B) beginning

(D) explanation

3. The word undergone in line 6 is closest in meaning to

(A) led to

(B) transformed

(D) experienced

4. According to the passage , before the American Revolution the main task of limners was to

(A) paint wheel carriages

(B) paint portraits

(D) paint flat surfaces

5. It can be inferred from the passage that artists who were trained in England

(A) considered artists to be superior to painters

(B) barely painted portraitists

(D) imitated English painters

6. The word consorted in line 14 is closest in meaning to

(A) made decisions

(B) studies

(D) associated

7. The word sufficient in line 16 is closest in meaning to

(A) adequate

(B) temporary

(D) expensive

8. According to the passage , artists such as Copley, West and Peal signed their paintings

(A) increased the monetary value of the paintings

(B) made it more difficult for other artists to copy the paintings

(D) distinguished colonial American artists from European artists

9. The author mentions James Bowdoin III and William Byrd in line 17 as examples of which of

the following?

(A) Art gallery owners who displayed only European art

(B) Art collectors who had a profound influence on American attitudes toward art

(D) Patrons whose helped to encourage artisans to become artists

10. With which of the following would the author be most likely to agree?

(A) Countries that have not had a political revolution are unlikely to develop great art.

(B) The most successful art collectors are usually artists themselves.

(D) Colonial artists made an important contribution to the evolving culture of the new nation.

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篇2：托福独立写作高分赏析

托福写作难点话题一览

What makes a good boss?

What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题目给出的范围很大，而且和实际生活密切相关，考虑到托福中国考生主要以学生为主，很多人可能对老板这个概念其实并不太熟悉，缺乏足够的实际认识。大家可以从一些具有和老板类似性质的职务上来寻找灵感，比如学校里的老师领导，或是同学中的课代表之类的角色，都能从中得到一些参考。小编整理的一些比较常见的思路是：慷慨大方，有明确的发展思路，善于和员工交流沟通等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

A good boss is imperative to a successful workplace. The best bosses are serious, creative, and flexible. If a boss lacks any of these qualities, problems are certain to arise in the workplace.

While humor and kindness are important characteristics for bosses to have, work is a serious business, and must be approached with a serious attitude. A boss must be able to keep his/her employees working hard and on schedule. He/She must set down rules, enforce them, and also personally adhere to them. If the boss comes in late to work, leaves early, or spends all day joking with the co-workers, then the employees will neither respect nor work hard for him/her. A boss must have a serious and professional attitude that sets an example for all of the employees in the workplace.

To confront the countless problems that arise every day in the workplace, a boss must be extremely creative. If a client needs the company to meet a deadline earlier than expected, a boss must find ways to motivate employees to work faster and harder. A boss who lacks creativity might force his/her employees to work overtime. In this case, the employees might be very tired and upset; they might work slower or produce lower quality work as a result. A creative boss might spend a small amount of money, and treat everyone to dinner at the office to encourage employees to stay late. In this way the company might meet the deadline, preserve quality, and keep employee morale high.

Finally, the most important quality that a good boss must possess is flexibility. While needing to set serious, strict rules, he/she must also recognize that at times the rules need to be bent or broken. For instance, a boss should strictly enforce attendance policies in the workplace. But if an employee with an excellent attendance record needs to take a day off for personal reasons, the boss should let him/her do it. In this way employees' loyalty to the company will be strengthened, and they will be more happy and productive in the workplace.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：small town or big city

托福写作难点话题一览

Live in a small town or in a big city?

Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

考生完全可以结合自己的实际情况来写。两种选择的优缺点其实都是比较明显的。具体来看，生活在大城市的优缺点是信息发达、工作机会多、生活设施完善但是人情淡薄;而生活在小城镇的优缺点是环境温馨，安静，空气好;人们相互了解、友善但是信息闭塞、没有好的工作发展机会等等。当然大家也可以采取“it depends”的策略，不同的阶段有不同的偏好来展开同样也是不错的写法思路。

本话题高分范文赏析

People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between a big city and a small town. It's a little bit haste to say that it is better to live in a big city than in a small town, or vice versa.

Living in a big city has several benefits. First, there're more job opportunities readily available in big cities than in a small town. Moreover, not merely are there more job positions in big cities and the qualities of the position are much higher as well. In addition, the pay is more decent. Second, children are supposed to be able to receive an education with a higher quality compared with their counterparts who live in a small town. For families,children's education is always put in the first place. Finally, living in a big city usually has a superior living standard to that in a small town. There are more commodities and services in city markets; there are more public utilities available in big cities; there are even much more television channels in big cities.

However, living in a small town also has some advantages. People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life style. Most of them do not have to suffer high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually less expensive. Instead of suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in small town. People in a small town do not have to get up so early in the morning because there has been no traffic jam, and nobody drive so fast in a small town as to cause car accidents. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with.

According to my current situation, although I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only exist in small cities, I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my country—Beijing, since I have found a pretty good job here, and a decent pay. I think I would prefer living in a small town when I get retired one day.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：luck or hard work

托福写作难点话题一览

Does luck have anything to do with success?

“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

写作思路展开结构分析

首先题目里的nothing to do有点太过极端了。很明显是出题者给大家挖的坑，即使同意这个观点考生也不能太过武断，要避免观点太过绝对和偏颇。所以建议大家选择的态度是不能完全同意也不能完全不同意，如果要同意立场尽量维持在“很大程度上同意”会比较好。考生可以指出luck确实存在，然后展开说可能导致人们成功的若干原因：诚实、睿智、幽默;执著;肯于做不喜欢的事情等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. “It had killed several people, even hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. ”I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. “As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasn't bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. ”But by some miracle, you see, I hit it. I don't know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock. “I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I knew I didn't deserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn't be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I'd just be dead. I'm not a big man, just a lucky one.” You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success.

When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonder it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don't know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case, hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itself is of no hope, and lack of luck should not be an excuse to failure.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：universities finance students

托福写作难点话题一览

Should universities finance students' sports activities equally as libraries?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

写作思路展开结构分析

不能完全同意。“same”是一件做不到的事情。普通大学，应该或更多的钱在图书馆上;而体育专科大学，当然应该花更多的钱在体育设施上。资金分配的重要原则是产出应该大于投入，而大学的办学原则是要better brains;也要better bodies.另外，从资金投入的角度来说，资金分配问题中关于资金的有效运用(efficiency of money allocation)的重要体现是投入产出比(input-output ratio)。即便是nonprofit-making organization也要保证资金的投入产出的平衡(balance of input and output)。

本话题高分范文赏析

The main responsibility of a university is to develop a student's academic ability. While physical health is an important prerequisite for mental health and academic achievement, sports should play a comparatively small role in college student's lives. Since a student's main activity outside of the classroom is studying, occupying from four to eight hours of their day, a peaceful studying environment plays an important role in a student's academic development. College dorm rooms can have up to eight students sleeping in one small room and are not good environments for students to study in. To provide excellent studying environments for their students, universities must build large libraries designed to accommodate students as well as books. Since sports should occupy a much smaller part of the student's time, perhaps only an hour a day, sports facilities need not be as extensive or well-equipped as libraries. In addition to the costs of building adequate library faculties, a university must also pay every year to keep its collection well organized and up-to-date. The goal of every university library should be to have the most current books and materials its students need in order to study and do cutting edge research. The larger the student body, the more comprehensive a library's collection must be. A well-trained staff must also care for the materials and help the students. Continuing costs for sports, on the other hand, are relatively low, requiring only a few part-time staff and maintenance routines. For the most part, students are happy to organize their own sporting events and exercise routines quite independently of the school. Although a student's health is critical to their academic success, the investment that a school needs to make to ensure a physically fit student body is relatively small. Considering that the main mission of the school is to develop a student's mind and not their body, the school should put more of its resources into its libraries and not its sports activities.

篇3：托福独立写作高分赏析

托福写作难点话题一览

Attending classes: required or optional?

Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

这个话题其实两边都是有些片面的，因此建议考生不要急于选择哪一个观点。正确做法是先尽量多地列举两种观点的优缺点，然后进行比较，最终选择一个立场。大家可以考虑一下这几个问题，比如在培养大学生时，是否应该以培养学生的自主能力为主?如果强制所有的学生去上课，是否真的会提高所有学生的学习效率?有些学生可能在某些课堂上得不到有效的帮助。如果允许所有的学生都可以自由选课，是否会有些学生失去目标?另外现行的选修课和必修课制度是否已经一定程度上解决了这个矛盾。考虑清楚这些问题的答案再选边站会比较好一些.

本话题高分范文赏析

The most important responsibility of college students is to pursue their course of study to the best of their ability. In most cases, this would mean attending every class. In reality, however, not every student is the same,and not every class is the same. If a student can study more effectively in another way, then that student should be allowed to pursue his/her studies to the best of his/her abilities, and not be required to attend classes that are not helpful to him/her.

Some students find it difficult to concentrate in large lecture classes and find reading quietly a more effective way of studying. If a student can achieve more by reading in the library and meeting with a professor during office hours than students who attend every class, he/she should not be prevented from studying in the most effective way for him/her.

The most important measures of a college student's academic progress are tests. In the weeks before exams, college student's need to arrange their own schedules becomes critical. For instance, if a student is very good at math but very poor at English, it might make more sense for that student to skip math class and spend the extra time preparing for an English test. If students are required to attend classes whose content they are already familiar with, at best they will be bored by redundant material, at worst they will fail tests in subjects they are less proficient in.

The argument might be made that it is the school's responsibility to organize its curriculum so that students are always challenged and therefore truly need to be at every class. I contend that it is impossible to tailor an entire school's curriculum to the individual needs of every single student. The best that can be hoped for is a well thought out curriculum with enough flexibility to handle the differences between individual students. Schools should trust the students to make choices that are in their own best interests, and use testing as the final arbiter of academic excellence.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：what makes a good neighbor

托福写作难点话题一览

What makes a good neighbor?

Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?Use specific details and examples in your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题目的展开需要考虑两个问题，首先是邻居能够带给你哪些帮助?其次是邻居可能会给你造成哪些困扰?把这两个问题的答案都写下来，基本上你就能找到话题展开的方向了。一般来说，形容邻居比较常见的一些quality有intelligence, honesty, a sense of humor等等。当然这也是描述各类积极的正面的人群都很容易用到的基本优点，还有比如optimistic and positive; politeness; loyalty大家也可以考虑用到这篇文章的话题展开当中去。

本话题高分范文赏析

Neighbors are extraordinarily important people in our lives. Many people make a decision about what place they want to live in based on their future neighbors. People most want to live near neighbors who are respectful, vigilant, and community-minded.

The foundation of any relationship, whether among neighbors or friends, colleagues or family members, is mutual respect. Respect between neighbors means that when they see each other they will be warm and polite.

Neighbors don't have to be friends, but they need not be strangers either. Because neighbors live close together, sometimes it is unavoidable that they will learn personal details about their neighbors. A respectful person will not intrude upon their neighbor's privacy, or share these private details with anyone else.

Another important aspect of being a good neighbor is to be vigilant. If people see a robber trying to break into their neighbor's house, then they should call the police. If they see a neighbor's young child in a dangerous situation, they should help the child, or at least give the alarm. If the government posts new regulations, they will help inform their neighbors of the new laws. If everyone in a neighborhood watches out for each other's safety, then the neighborhood will be a safer and more pleasant place. Moreover, good neighbors are community-minded. They care about their local environment. Good neighbors will not throw trash on the ground, and if they see trash on the ground they will pick it up. They will make decisions based with consideration to their neighbors. They won't play loud music late at night or get drunk and fight in public. They want to live in a happy, peaceful community and they believe that their personal actions have a direct effect on the happiness of all of their neighbors. If all the people in the community think about the good of the community when they make decisions, the whole community will benefit.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：opinion on a new restaurant

托福写作难点话题一览

What's your opinion on a new restaurant built in your neighborhood?

It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题目相信大家很容易联想到实际生活，因此无论从支持还是反对的角度来展开应该都能想出不少理由和论据。比如正面的有小区内的餐馆越多，竞争就越激烈，那么价钱就会更公道，反面的可以写可能会出现卫生问题，也可能有客人酗酒闹事等等。总之此题目可以联系实际生活想出不少例子，展开难度还是比较低的。

本话题高分范文赏析

Until recently our neighborhood hasn't had any restaurants. We have a local food market and several small convenience stores, and even several street side food stands, but no real restaurants. I'm personally in favor of opening a new restaurant in our neighborhood, and believe it will make people's lives more convenient, support the local economy, and create a healthier community spirit. Cooking at home every night is time-consuming and tiring for local families. After a long day at work, local people have to spend at least one hour to shop for groceries, and even more for cooking dinner, and cleaning up after the meal. By the time all is finished, they almost have no time to enjoy the company of their families. Eating out would save time if there were a restaurant nearby, but the closest restaurant is a 30-minute walk away. If a restaurant opened in our neighborhood it would allow local people to relax for a night or two every week and enjoy more time with their families.

A new restaurant would also help the local economy. Building the restaurant would require the labor of local carpenters, plumbers, and electricians. The new restaurant would need to buy a great deal of food and produce from local markets and supplies like furniture, cooking utensils, and everyday items from local merchants. It would also create jobs for waiters, managers, and chefs. Perhaps most importantly, a new restaurant could also potentially attract business from the surrounding neighborhoods, bringing more investment into our community.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：learn by yourself or with a teacher

托福写作难点话题一览

Learn by yourself or with a teacher?

Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题算是托福写作中比较经典的一道题目，类似的变体题也有很多。小编建议大家先不要急于选择哪一个观点，因为两个观点都有些片面。从好处上来说，有老师的好处是系统的指导、提供疑难解答、更快、更有效率等等。而自学也有其存在的必要性，比如自学能力应该是追求知识的过程中最重要的能力之一。比较合理的写法是两者结合来说，比如任何科目都应该指导和自学相结合。或是不同的科目、不同的阶段有不同的选择。

本话题高分范文赏析

Whether we need a teacher or not depends on circumstances. The relationship between a teacher and a new subject is somewhat similar to that between a tour guide and an unknown city. When we come to an unknown city for the first time, we definitely need a tour guide. We might have a detailed map, but it is unlikely functional—it isn't surprised that we can hardly interpret those mysterious symbols. Likewise, when we are beginners, it is wise to learn with teachers. They can tell us where to begin with, what we should do, and which reference we should choose. When we confront difficulties, we can ask them for help, and their advices will always be tremendously helpful. With teachers' assistance, we might learn easier, faster, and more interestingly.

After a period of time, we have learned a lot. We now know the city pretty well, even though there are still many places we haven't been to. It doesn't matter. Now that we are able to recognize those mysterious symbols on the map, what we need perhaps is not a tour guide but a more detailed map.

Similarly, we need richer references for learning. There are still many fields unexplored; they are, nevertheless, no longer puzzling. The task is simple: we will explore them one by one, little by little. If we are working on a certain skill, practice more; if we are preparing a test, practice more; whatever we are learning, what is always to bear in mind is that, like people always say, practice makes perfect. After another period of time, we might have become others' tour guide, but we still want to make out more. We want to know which restaurant is the most decent, which bookstore is the most professional, which coffee shop is the most classical. Even the most comprehensive map doesn't have adequate information. We again need experts.

In learning, it's much the same. We need experts to consult for specific problems. Furthermore, the most beneficial merit of consulting experts is that we can not merely refer to them but even discuss with them in depth. As is often the case, a solution for a complex matter is not waiting for us right there and then, sometimes it comes out of inspirations of discussion.

In short, having a good teacher is always better than having none, but the importance of a teacher varies from period to period, and more often than not depends on different stage in which we are learning.

篇4：托福写作高分

题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

In order to success in study or job, the ability to adjust or adapt to changing condition or circumstance is more important than having knowledge.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

篇5：托福写作高分

题目

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games, for fun and entertainment; Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

范文1：Argument 1 (for)

Children today rely too much on technology for entertainment. If children played with simple toys or spent time outside with friends, they would be physically healthier, be better at social interactions, and would have a working basis for many practical sciences.

分论点1:有助于健康 Probably the most obvious benefit of stepping away from technology and into the outdoors is an increase in physical activity, which directly transfers to increased health.Countless studies have shown that excessive sitting and watching a screen leads to obesity, heart disease, and other disorders(不运动的坏处). If kids are restricted in their use of technology, they will have to move more. They will have better eye-hand coordination from manipulating toys and throwing balls; they will have more muscle tone from running and riding bicycles or balancing on skateboards. Increased activity directly translates into increased physical health(运动的益处万能句).

分论点2:有助于社交Another reason that children should be encouraged to use less technology is so that they increase their social skills. If children interact, they naturally learn basic skills such as sharing and taking turns(社交的益处万能句1). In addition, their compassion and understanding will also grow(社交的益处万能句2). Children who interact with each otherbecome more articulate in speaking and expressing a wide range of ideas(社交的益处万能句3). Such opportunities do not exist when the child is hidden inside the house playing video games; such interaction is only possible face-to-face. Therefore, children should be encouraged to play with each other rather than entertaining themselves using technology.

分论点3：有助于积累经验 A final benefit of using simple toys is that children get a wide range of experiences that form the backbone of later study about sciences such as physics and engineering. By playing with blocks, bicycles, and balls, kids learn about balance, velocity, and gravity. Of course, the kids are not mastering the math behind the principles. However, they are developing a sound working knowledge that will help them understand the concepts in a way that they cannot do in the unreal world of video games where magic and fantasy are commonplace.

Playing with friends and simple toys, children become physically fit, develop social skills, and create a foundation for later study of the sciences. Therefore, children should be encouraged to spend more time doing such activities rather than entertaining themselves with technology.

step away from

远离，摆脱

eye-hand coordination

手眼协调

take turns

轮流，依次

become articulate in _X

在 _X 方面变得清晰

form the backbone of _X

构成了 _X 的基础

in a way that YYY

以一种 YYY 的方式

篇6：托福写作高分

For success in work or school, it is more important to be able to adapt to new circumstances than to have specific knowledge.

While knowledge is of course needed to get a job done, a person who can adapt well can find the information needed to succeed. A person does not need to know everything as long as he knows how to find answers. This point is made clear through a simple situation: a person needs to make a telephone call. The person can remember the telephone number and make the call. However, a person without that knowledge can still make the call if he is flexible enough to search for the phone number from a friend, a phone book, the internet, or other resource. It is clear that ability to learn is more effective than knowing the answer when an unfamiliar phone number is needed.

A person who can adapt can also bring new innovations to a workplace. Instead of just following the same pattern that everyone else uses, the adaptable personcan see better ways to complete tasks. For example, he could streamline processes or simplify procedures so that time and money is saved. The person is a much more valuable asset to the company than a person who sticks to routine. The adaptable person is therefore more likely to be promoted or given pay raisesbecause of his productivity.

Finally, an adaptable person can better handle crises or unexpected situations. Even if he does not have specific answers, he can react quickly and capably in an emergency. A dramatic example is when a fire breaks out in the building. A person who does not adapt well may panic or freeze. Alternately, he may stubbornly try to complete a task such as shutting down his computer before fleeing the building. By contrast, the adaptable person does not need to know procedures to use unfamiliar fire extinguishing equipment, seek safety, or help others find their way out of the building. This ability to deal with problems helps in ordinary situations such as organizational restructuring or transfers, too.

The ability to adapt helps a person succeed in many aspects of work and regular life. The person can solve problems, create more productive systems, and react effectively in new situations. Therefore, the ability to adapt is more important than having specific knowledge.

词句积累

knowledge is of course needed to get a job done 完成工作当然需要知识

the adaptable person 适应性强的人

streamline processes 精简流程

simplify procedures 简化程序

stick to routine 坚持常规

pay raises 涨薪

react quickly and capably in an emergency 在紧急情况下反应迅速和敏捷

篇7：托福30天冲刺高分107

【高分经验】30天冲刺高分107 托福“暴力”提分之道

对于托福考试的一些考试介绍我就不多说，诸如：考试科目的顺序、考试的报名、抢考位，在我看来，这些事情都应该在托福备考之前都详细的了解清楚，不要耽误了你的备考时间。先说一下我的成绩吧，我的成绩是107分：阅读28分，听力30分，口语22分,写作27分。只能说托福高手大有人在，我的成绩也只能说是不是特别高。

在备考的一个月时间里，官方真题Official应该是帮上了很大的忙，特别在最后的十天里，我基本上是每天刷上1-2套的题目。因为，在所有托福备考的材料中，相对于托福考试来说，官方真题Official有着最高的还原度。所以，在短时间内容冲刺托福考试，官方真题Official是最好的备考材料了。另外，就是托福机经，其实，现在对于机经的看法好像还是褒贬不一。不过，经历了一次托福考试以后，机经最为关键的并不是用或不用，而关键在于什么时候去用。口语和写作的机经真的非常重要，而在一定要在考前10天左右去看一些机经，才是最有效果的，过早去关心机经，其实对于备考并没有太大作用。

在托福考试的时候，词汇还是一个很大的问题，不过因为我平时比较喜欢看美剧，所以也是有着不错的基础。而且，在这里也是要提到，想要短期提升1万多词汇量并不是那么简单的。所以，词汇的累积还是需要在生活中慢慢积累的。而在冲刺考试的一个月中，我基本刷完了托福词汇440道经典题，非常非常重要。同时，也建议大家可以为自己准备一个生词本，遇到不会的单词记录一下，反复的记忆。

在托福考试中听力拿了满分，这也许有一部分的原因是因为比较喜欢追美剧。因为，毕竟美剧只能让我熟悉对话的场景，而托福的学术讲座类听力题也还是非常有难度的。而针对这样的一些问题，我主要还是建议大家采用听写的练习方式。而除了官方真题Official之外，我在听写练习中主要是用了sss的材料，每天一篇，由于其难度要高于托福听力，所以，坚持一段时间后，就会发现自己的听力能力有了很大提升。

最后，再提一下托福写作吧，其实，在备考之前我的写作能力只能说很一般。另外，我也没有太多时间去练习托福写作185题。所以，在写作练习中，就是考前10天一天写一篇针对考试那天机经上的题目(尽量每种类型都写到)。而且，一定是准确的把时间卡在30分钟里。

总之，对于托福考试来说，想要在短期内冲刺托福高分，备考资料和托福词汇等等都是一些不容忽视的环节，希望以上环节能为大家的备考带来帮助。

托福阅读真题原题+题目

The end of the nineteenth century and the early years of the twentieth century were marked by the development of an international Art Nouveau style, characterized by sinuous lines, floral and vegetable motifs, and soft evanescent coloration. The Art Nouveau style was an eclectic one, bringing together elements of Japanese art, motifs of ancient cultures, and natural forms. The glass objects of this style were elegant in outline, although often deliberately distorted, with pale or iridescent surfaces. A favored device of the style was to imitate the iridescent surface seen on ancient glass that had been buried. Much of the Art Nouveau glass produced during the years of its greatest popularity had been generically termed art glass. Art glass was intended for decorative purposes and relied for its effect upon carefully chosen color combinations and innovative techniques.

France produced a number of outstanding exponents of the Art Nouveau style; among the most celebrated was Emile Galle (1846-1904). In the United States, Louis Comfort Tiffany (1843-1933) was the most noted exponent of this style, producing a great variety of glass forms and surfaces, which were widely copied in their time and are highly prized today. Tiffany was a brilliant designer, successfully combining ancient Egyptian, Japanese, and Persian motifs.

The Art Nouveau style was a major force in the decorative arts from 1895 until 1915, although its influence continued throughout the mid-1920's. It was eventually to be overtaken by a new school of thought known as Functionalism that had been present since the turn of the century. At first restricted to a small avant-garde group of architects and designers, Functionalism emerged as the dominant influence upon designers after the First World War. The basic tenet of the movement — that function should determine form — was not a new concept. Soon a distinct aesthetic code evolved: form should be simple, surfaces plain, and any ornament should be based on geometric relationships. This new design concept, coupled with the sharp postwar reactions to the styles and conventions of the preceding decades, created an entirely new public taste which caused Art Nouveau types of glass to fall out of favor. The new taste demanded dramatic effects of contrast, stark outline and complex textural surfaces.

1. What does paragraph 1 mainly discuss?

(A) Design elements in the Art Nouveau style

(B) The popularity of the Art Nouveau style

(D) Color combinations typical of the Art Nouveau style

2. The word one in line 4 refers to

(A) century

(B) development

(D) coloration

3. Paragraph 1 mentions that Art Nouveau glass was sometimes similar to which aspect of ancient buried glass ?

(A) The distortion of the glass

(B) The appearance of the glass surface

(D) The size of the glass objects

4. What is the main purpose of paragraph 2?

(A) to compare different Art Nouveau styles

(B) to give examples of famous Art Nouveau artists

(D) to show the impact Art Nouveau had on other cultures around the world

5. The word prized in line 16 is closest in meaning to

(A) valued

(B) universal

(D) preserved

6. The word overtaken in line 20 is closest in meaning to

(A) surpassed

(B) inclined

(D) applied

7. What does the author mean by stating that function should determine form (lines 23-24)?

(A) A useful object should not be attractive.

(B) The purpose of an object should influence its form.

(D) The form of an object should not include decorative elements.

8. It can be inferred from the passage that one reason Functionalism became popular was that it

(A) clearly distinguished between art and design

(B) appealed to people who liked complex painted designs

(D) was easily interpreted by the general public

9. Paragraph 3 supports which of the following statements about Functionalism?

(A) Its design concept avoided geometric shapes.

(B) It started on a small scale and then spread gradually.

(D) It was not attractive to architects and designers.

10. According to the passage , an object made in the Art Nouveau style would most likely include

(A) a flowered design

(B) bright colors

(D) a textured surface

PASSAGE 28 ACBBA ABCBA

托福阅读真题原题+题目

During the second half of the nineteenth century, the production of food and feed crops in the United States rose at an extraordinarily rapid rate. Corn production increased by four and a half times, hay by five times, oats and wheat by seven times. The most crucial factor behind this phenomenal upsurge in productivity was the widespread adoption of labor-saving machinery by northern farmers. By 1850 horse-drawn reaping machines that cut grain were being introduced into the major grain-growing regions of the country. Horse-powered threshing machines to separate the seeds from the plants were already in general use. However, it was the onset of the Civil War in 1861 that provided the great stimulus for the mechanization of northern agriculture. With much of the labor force inducted into the army and with grain prices on the rise, northern farmers rushed to avail themselves of the new labor-saving equipment. In 1860 there were approximately 80,000 reapers in the country; five years later there were 350,000.

After the close of the war in 1865, machinery became ever more important in northern agriculture, and improved equipment was continually introduced. By 1880 a self-binding reaper had been perfected that not only cut the grain, but also gathered the stalks and bound them with twine. Threshing machines were also being improved and enlarged, and after 1870 they were increasingly powered by steam engines rather than by horses. Since steam-powered threshing machines were costly items — running from $ 1,000 to $4,000 — they were usually owned by custom thresher owners who then worked their way from farm to farm during the harvest season. Combines were also coming into use on the great wheat ranches in California and the Pacific Northwest. These ponderous machines — sometimes pulled by as many as 40 horses — reaped the grain, threshed it, and bagged it, all in one simultaneous operation.

The adoption of labor-saving machinery had a profound effect upon the sale of agricultural operations in the northern states — allowing farmers to increase vastly their crop acreage. By the end of century, a farmer employing the new machinery could plant and harvest two and half times as much corn as a farmer had using hand methods 50 years before.

1. What aspect of farming in the United States in the nineteenth century does the passage mainly

discuss?

(A) How labor-saving machinery increased crop Production

(B) Why southern farms were not as successful as Successful as northern farms

(D) The increase in the number of people farming

2. The word crucial in line 4 is closest in meaning to

(A) obvious

(B) unbelievable

(D) desirable

3. The phrase avail themselves in line 11 is closest in meaning to

(A) take care

(B) make use

(D) do more

4. According to the passage , why was the Civil War a stimulus for mechanization?

(A) The army needed more grain in order to feed the soldiers.

(B) Technology developed for the war could also the used by farmers.

(D) Machines were needed to replace a disappearing labor force.

5. The passage supports which of the following statements about machinery after the Civil War?

(A) Many farmers preferred not to use the new machinery.

(B) Returning laborers replaced the use of machinery.

(D) Poor-quality machinery slowed the pace of crop production.

6. Combines and self-binding reapers were similar because each

(A) could perform more than one function

(B) required relatively little power to operate

(D) required two people to operate

7. The word they in line 19 refers to

(A) grain stalks

(B) threshing machines

(D) horses

8. It can be inferred from the passage that most farmers did not own threshing machines because

(A) farmers did not know how to use the new machines

(B) farmers had no space to keep the machines

(D) the machines were too expensive for every farmer to own

9. The word ponderous in line 21 is closest in meaning to

(A) advanced

(B) heavy

(D) rapid

PASSAGE 29 ACBDC ABDB

篇8：2招助你冲刺托福写作更高分

2招助你冲刺托福写作更高分

第1招：建立清晰的框架

写作不仅考查语言的表达，还考查思路的表达，新托福评分标准中就有这样一项：well organized and well developed。所以要想拿到一个理想的托福成绩，在写作中，给考官展现自己清楚的文章思路是很重要的，不管内容表达如何，我们首先要做到的就是框架清晰。

区分段落是最简单直接的方法。看到这里，可能有人会觉得好笑，但是真的是有学生考试一着急，加上时间紧，就忘记了分段，所以我们这里还要再强调一下。一般综合写作建议分为4个自然段：第一段总述听力和阅读中的观点，后面三个自然段分点具体阐述(一个论点一个自然段，一般综合写作都会给出三方面的具体内容)。不建议只分两个自然段：一段总述，一段分析。因为分析部分还是需要清楚地告诉阅卷人，文章和听力总共表述了几层意思。如果都写在一些，容易给阅卷人造成漏点的假象。独立写作建议分为五个自然段：第一段引出论题，阐述自己的观点，中间三个自然段分三个方面阐述自己的理由，最后一个自然段进行总结。(如果只想到了两点原因，也可以写四个自然段，但是需要达到字数要求)

每一自然段的内容阐述建议按照以下顺序表达：主要观点 —— 具体阐述 —— 举例说明。我们在表达英文时，一定要记住，写每一个自然段的时候，都要首先提出主要观点。因为中英文表达逻辑不一样，中文习惯铺垫，我们写中文文章时，很喜欢在前面铺垫抒情，写了半天还不见主要观点，这是一种意境。但是在外国人的思想中，他们更喜欢直截了当的表达，所以每段第一句话，先把观点给他们，接下去再进行具体的阐述，这样阅卷人就会比较清楚地 get 到你想要表达的意思了。

第2招：写完文章要自查

在考试的过程中，文章写完之后还需要留出2-3分钟的时间进行自查，这一步也很重要的。因为是机考，我们需要把内容敲在屏幕上，所以在写作过程中，就避免不了会出现一些比较低级的错误，比如拼写，如果错误较多，就算文章写得不错，也会影响到阅卷人的心情，自然，分数也就达不到预期的效果。总的来看，大家经常会出现以下几种错误，我们总结一下，以便大家自查。

自查1：拼写错误

在考试中，考生会遇到两种情况：一种是打字的误打，另一种是对单词本身记忆的错误，因此不仅需要考生在平时的备考过程中多多进行上机练习，熟悉用键盘打字，还要求考生在平时注意背单词的精确性。

自查2：时态错误

托福写作除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态之外，一般使用现在时态，所以大家在检查的时候需要注意时态的运用，千万不能各种时态混用。

自查3：词性错误

英文中，每种词性都有具体的用法，最常见的词性错误是形容词和副词的混用，检查时需要重点关注一下。

自查4：句子表达是否完整

受中文影响，很多同学在英语写作中经常会出现一些表达不完整或者特别中式的句子。在写英语句子时，我们一定要遵循五大句型的句子结构，然后再将修饰成分填充进去，切记简单粗暴的词词对应。另外这里还需要强调一点，考生不能为了追求句子表达所谓的“高大上”去乱用句子，正所谓用错还不如不用。

综上，我们主要从结构安排和自查两个方面跟大家强调了一下托福写作考试中需要注意的小细节，保证这些细节不犯错误，就能够保证我们不会失掉一些不必要的失分。

托福写作15个优质亮点句型汇总

在托福备考的过程中，大家要学会搜集精彩句型，直到运用自如。只有不断地练习，才可以熟能生巧，融会贯通。下面为大家整理15个托福写作优质句子，如果大家能够熟练运用，就可以为自己的托福作文增加亮点。

1. Typical of the grassland dwellers of the continent is the American antelope, or pronghorn.

2. Of the millions who saw Haley‘s comet in 1986, how many people will live long enough to see it return in the twenty-first century.

3. Anthropologists have discovered that fear, happiness, sadness, and surprise are universally reflected in facial expressions.

4. Because of its irritating effect on humans, the use of phenol as a general antiseptic has been largely discontinued.

5. Insgroupsto remain in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produce something consumers consider useful or desirable.

6. The greater the population there is in a locality, the greater the need there is for water, transportation, and disposal of refuse.

7. It is more difficult to write simply, directly, and effectively than to employ flowery but vague expressions that only obscure one‘s meaning.

8. With modern offices becoming more mechanized, designers are attempting to personalize them with warmer, less severe interiors.

9. The difference between libel and slander is that libel is printed while slander is spoken.

10. The knee is the jointswheresthe thigh bone meets the large bone of the lower leg.

11. Acids are chemical compounds that, in water solution, have a sharp taste, a corrosive action on metals, and the ability to turn certain blue vegetable dyes red.

12. Billie Holiday‘s reputation as a great jazz-blues singer rests on her ability to give emotional depth to her songs.

13. Essentially, a theory is an abstract, symbolic representation of what is conceived to be reality.

14. Long before children are able to speak or understand a language， they communicate through facial expressions and by making noises.

15. Thanks to modern irrigation, crops now grow abundantly in areasswheresonce nothing but cacti and sagebrush could live.

篇9：2招助你冲刺托福写作更高分

2招助你冲刺托福写作更高分

第1招：建立清晰的框架

第2招：写完文章要自查

自查1：拼写错误

自查2：时态错误

托福写作除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态之外，一般使用现在时态，所以大家在检查的时候需要注意时态的运用，千万不能各种时态混用。

自查3：词性错误

英文中，每种词性都有具体的用法，最常见的词性错误是形容词和副词的混用，检查时需要重点关注一下。

自查4：句子表达是否完整

快速冲刺托福写作不走寻常路

很多刚刚开始备考托福的考生对如何备考新托福写作备考感到很茫然，毫无头绪。也许多数学生会想的一个名词就是“模板”。很多学生在托福作文备考时候的练习一般就是文章、模板和练习。但是，想要让自己的托福写作备考时间安排更为合理，我们又该关注哪些问题呢?

多数同学在备考的过程中，一般都是会选取托福写作题库185个题目进行写作练习。当然，在备考过程中想要逐一写完其中所有的题目是不太现实的。不但，成效很低，而且也完全没有这个必要。所以，我们不妨在练习之前，想将题库进行分类。分类可以分得稍微细节一些，在练习中，个分类写1～2篇就可以解决这个类的题目。

对于托福写作来说，对于思维逻辑有着比较严谨的要求，所以，看到题目以后提笔就写是万万不可行的。花上3～5分钟的时间去审题，去构思，是很必要的。而既然是开卷考试，大家就应该把审题的工作放到考试之前做，在这是就应该就要应该准备找到题点，准备好自己的论点内容。

对于多数学生来说，托福写作过程中，模板一直是常用的工具。那么，建议大家把托福写作中大约四五十个句子，排成编号。就是从文章的第一句话到最后一句话，你都知道要写什么并且知道怎么写。让自己知道该怎样应用模板和制作模板。

篇10：托福独立写作高分赏析

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：television destroyed communication

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Has television destroyed communication among people?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

写作思路展开结构分析

同意不同意都有很多内容可以展开的一道题目。如果选择不同意这个观点，你可以说一方面人们看电视的时间越来越多;另外一方面人与人之间的关系越来越冷漠。但是这两个现象并不是完全、直接的因果关系。造成人们关系冷漠的原因很多，比如，来自方方面面的压力：工作、生活。如果同意观点则可以说的确很多人为了看电视里的一些节目而改变了社交习惯和安排，看电视占据了大家的社交时间等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

While television has been somewhat harmful in its effects, it has hardly “destroyed” communication among friends and family, although for some people, the assertion that television has destroyed communication among friends and family seems pretty plausible.

Television, invented in last century, with its wide availability, increasingly prosperous programs, becomes one of the most powerful means of communication in the history, and is more and more difficult to ignore. Television is as much a part of our lives as are our meals, work, or school; studies consistently show that the average American child spends almost as much time watching television as does he or she in school. We all have only 24 hours a day and it is clear that the more time one spends on watching television, the less time one does with his or her family and friends. Hence the passage printed in the newspaper or magazine titled “Television took my husband away.” Tempting as such claim might be, it is hardly true.

Instead of television, it is the increasing pressure of modern life that took her husband away. We have no definite evidence to say people nowadays endure more pressures than did their counterparts in the past, but it is absolutely true that people nowadays undergo great pressures that come from various directions, including work, school, economy, and so forth. Investigations show that people who earn more than RMB 50, 000 annually spend at least 60 hours on work per week, much more than those who earn RMB 20,000 annually. Today a bachelor's degree may no longer guarantee a decent pay, more and more companies post their want ads claiming that applicants must have at least master's degrees, which take two or three years longer. People nowadays have very little time for anything; television is merely among many other factors that affect communication, and is definitely not the main cause of degradation. It seems that the more one is educated, the more one is aware of the deleterious effects that excessive television causes, and either deliberately avoid it or actually do not enjoy it. On the other hand, there really are many people addictive to television. But the fact is, were television not existent, surely these people would have found other escapes, such as alcohol or gambling for example. In other words, people always find a way to do what they want to do.

Therefore, I can hardly agree that television has destroyed communication among friends and family.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：influence of movies or television on people's behavior

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The influence of movies or television on people's behavior

How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

电影、电视等大众传媒(mass media)往往可以对人们的行为产生影响，通过改变人们的价值观、世界观、审美观而改变人们行为，比如通过制造“社会热点”而使大众不停地讨论一件事情;或是通过满足人们的幻想，或使人们处于平衡状态，或使人们一定程度上失衡。

本话题高分范文赏析

The impact that movies or television has had on our daily life, and society in general, is undeniable. No doubt it will become even greater as the scope of which continues to grow, and as the relevant technologies become more and more sophisticated, and so fascinating that virtually nobody will be able to escape. Already, it can be seen how western movies are exercising influence on our youth generation: they grow long-hair regardless of their gender, commonly part of which is dyed in gold; they wear jeans in each and every season, usually the knees of which are deliberately tattered; boys are fond of earrings or other odd pendants; and girls are keen on Marlboros and weird bad words. The major means that movies and television influence the public is by creating topics of discussion in the society. Movies offer people (the consumers) issues to talk and think about. Titanic had brought a worldwide uproar by its extolling of fascinating immortal love; Prime Color and Wag the Dog met the national debate on right and duty of the president of the United States. Antiwar movies such as Tears of the Sun and All Quiet on the Western Front among numerous others have been raising the question that is any war really to uphold justice or is it really worthy that an individual makes sacrifices to his country and at the same time ignores his own family or his personal values? Television also shapes our understanding of what is important and what is not important (to know). The “important” issues are being discussed over and over or in the beginning of a program. The “not important” stories are the ones that are not being told at all. The “not very important” stories are probably very short and hidden in the last part. By prearranging public issue, movies and television make decisions for us. Even though there are critical thinking individuals in any society, they are definitely in minority; the public in whole indeed lack skills of critical thinking, and therefore they are often led by the movies and television. In brief, movies and television, by offering topics and affecting the ways in which we discuss “the important issues”, has a strong influence on our perception of the truth, of the world or of the structure of our society. We have to admit that it has a role in our lives as a source of information, experiences, entertainment, amusement andrelaxation

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：change about your hometown

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The most important thing you want to change about your hometown.

If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

这个题目灵活度比较高，关键在于改变，尽量写积极正面，能够让家乡变得更好的角度。比如增加绿化，改善环境等等，因为一个好的环境会使人们更加快乐更加健康。从这类角度来展开思路明确符合主旋律写起来也会更顺手一些。

本话题高分范文赏析

I was born in a small town named Hailin, located in the North-East of China. The most serious problems in my hometown are the backward ideas about a woman's place in the family, school, workplace, and society. These negative stereotypes hurt not only women, but all of society as well. If possible, I would change the attitudes of the people in my hometown so they would view men and women equally. Discrimination against women in my hometown begins before they are even born. Because people here believe that only a man can carry on the family line, every family wants to have at least one son. Each family is only supposed to have one child because of the overpopulation problem. This means that if a family can find out a fetus is female before it is born they might abort it. Or in other cases, people will have many female babies before they have a son, which only makes the population problem worse. If female babies were considered as important as male babies, then these two problems probably would not exist. Discrimination against girls continues as they go to school and work. The prevalent stereotype is that women are not as smart as men and we shouldn't waste time and money educating them. Families often insist that their daughters stay at home and help with housework while sending their sons to school. Girls are born every bit as smart as boys and equally deserve to reap the benefits of education. Many of the world's famous scientists and leaders are women, from Marie Curie to Margaret Thatcher. We need to eliminate the stereotype that women are less intelligent than men so that our community can benefit from the achievements that women are capable of making when armed with education. In fact, women need to be respected enough to hold professional and leadership jobs in our community. This would mean that in the classified section of newspapers, there would no longer be jobs for “men only.” We will never know how many women could have done those jobs better than a man could have until the parents of every baby girl decide that their daughter is worth as much as their son. This is probably the most important thing that I want to change about my hometown.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：new factory near your community

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The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near your community.

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

写作思路展开结构分析

大家可以先讨论“假设工厂真的落成了，而带来的好处和坏处”，而后发表看法。从好处来说，考生可以写直接增加了就业机会(到工厂去上班);间接增加了就业机会(会有很多服务业，比如饭店、商店、超市等等跟着开业)。如果工厂规模足够大，物流规模也足够大，那么将最终成为交通改善的起点。另外大的工厂可以缴纳很多税，对地方财政有好处，进而促进社区的繁荣等等。从坏处来写，大家则可以写会带来各种污染，比如，噪音、废气、污水，或是工厂不一定会赢利对社区起不到促进作用等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

I live in a primarily agricultural community, and most of the population lives hand to mouth. Parents keep children home from school to work in the fields. If there is a flood or a drought, people starve. A new factory would mean regular monthly salaries as well as protection against natural disasters or a sudden drop in the price of our main agricultural product, say, corn. Regular salaries would allow families the confidence to make investments in their futures. The locals would be able to plan their finances accurately and free themselves from debt. This in turn would encourage entrepreneurship and further develop the local economy. People could begin to open shops, restaurants, dormitories, and entertainment facilities to serve the factory workers with their savings. Profits from these small enterprises would further enrich the local community and turn our relatively poor farmland into a truly profitable development zone. Perhaps more parents could then afford to send all of their children to high school and maybe even college. There would certainly be negative effects as well. If the area becomes prosperous, immigrants from poorer regions will come here looking for work. Because of their relative poverty they will work harder for less money than the locals and drive wages down. There might be more immigrants than factory jobs available, leading to an unemployment crisis with a rising crime rate as a potential negative side effect. On the other hand, the proposed factory would almost certainly have adverse effects on the local environment, particularly in regards to polluting the water. This is perhaps the most serious concern, because without clean water the area cannot sustain life of any kind, com, livestock, or human. However, because of the relatively desperate economic situation of my hometown, I believe the potential benefits of opening a new factory would outweigh the risks. If we take the proper precautions, such as imposing strict environmental standards and providing adequate social services for immigrants, the whole area stands to benefit.

篇11：托福独立写作高分赏析整合

托福写作难点话题一览

Why do people visit museums?

Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

考生这里需要注意本题的一个前提条件是人们喜欢在旅游的时候去博物馆。因此在给出理由的时候也可以适当往旅游的话题上带一带。一般来说，去博物馆的理由大致可以分为个人偏好或者习惯，比如喜爱历史等等。从旅游角度来说，也可以让游客在短时间内了解一个地方的历史、文化;可以看到珍贵的艺术、文化、历史、科学等收藏;著名的博物馆周边，由于游客众多，一般也会有很多其他值得参观的地方，也会有很好吃的餐馆;另外，也有些人去博物馆，没有什么特别的理由。别人都去，于是他也去了，纯属跟风行为。

本话题高分范文赏析

People travel to new places for many different reasons. One of the most common reasons is to see a new place, culture, or way of life. For a total outsider with only a short amount of time, museums offer a glimpse into these ways of life through specially designed education, cultural insights, and entertainment.

People come to museums to learn about the world. The educational experience in a museum is quite different than that of reading or studying. In a museum, learning experiences are direct and thrilling. Reading books about primitive history might seem boring, but seeing the huge skeleton of a terrifying dinosaur in person is a thrilling experience. Reading history books about the Nanjing Massacre are horrifying, sad, and yet abstract, but a trip to the Memorial Museum in Nanjing is an experience that has moved many students to tears. Museums can make otherwise distant and mundane educational experiences come to life. The museums of a place tell an outsider much about what the people of that place value culturally. A trip to the New York Metropolitan Museum of Art would tell the visitor that Americans are interested in art from all over the world, but by comparing the size of the European Art collection with that of the Asian Art collection, one might conclude that Americans feel a strong cultural affinity with European Art. Similarly, a tourist to a place like San Francisco, where there is a large museum devoted solely to Asian Art, might conclude that people from San Francisco have a stronger affinity to Asian culture.

Meanwhile, many people who travel simply want to relax and be entertained, and museums also provide an excellent venue for leisure. Even most nominally educational museums provide exciting attractions like movie theaters and special cultural performances such as dances, gourmet dinners, lectures, and musical performances from jazz to rock and roll. Many museums in the United States hold special nights once a week where young people can drink and socialize. Museums are not only spaces for education and culture, but have also become important entertainment and social venues.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：Why do people visit museums

托福写作难点话题一览

Why do people visit museums?

Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

本话题高分范文赏析

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：eat at home or out

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Eat at home or out?

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food athome. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

没有明显倾向性的题目，两边都可以展开。建议考生不要急于作出选择，先进行比较，然后根据情况选择。从两种选择各自的哟球额点来看，去餐馆或者吃快餐的优缺点是方便、快捷、多种口味;昂贵、卫生可能得不到保障、快餐使人发胖，而在家吃饭的优缺点分别是：干净、可以做出自己喜欢的口味、节省、与家人和朋友共同准备食物很开心;花费时间、可能做的没有餐馆那么好吃。当然，大家也可以从在不同的情况下会有不同的选择这个角度出发来写。比如周末休息应该跟家人在家里吃饭。与老朋友久别重逢应该找一家安静的餐馆等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

After a hard day of work or study, many people feel like cooking for themselves is too much trouble. They prefer to grab a quick bite to eat at a restaurant and go home for rest as quickly as possible. But for me cooking at home is worth the time and trouble because it is cheaper, healthier, and more enjoyable.

Buying my own groceries and cooking for myself is much less expensive than eating in a restaurant. I find that a meal that I cook myself on average costs half to two-thirds less than a comparable meal in a restaurant.

Restaurants have to rent space, hire chefs, waiters, and managers, as well as buy food and make a profit. When I cook I have no overhead. The only extra expense I have to pay is the time it takes for me to cook the food.

In addition to being less expensive, when I buy my own groceries I can be sure I am buying the freshest and cleanest meats and vegetables available. Restaurants might think it's more important to buy the cheapest food possible in large quantities to make a higher profit. I also try and buy the healthiest food possible. For instance, when I buy meat, I try and buy the meat with the least fat on it. In a restaurant they add more fat and oil to dishes to make them taste better, but for me, health is more important.

Finally, cooking food with my friends and family brings me a special kind of joy. In a world that has increasingly focused on turning everyone into consumers, I enjoy being creative and producing something good. I enjoy learning and inventing new recipes and sharing them with friends. Even though it takes more time to shop, cook, and clean up when I cook for myself, at the end I have a sense that I did not waste the time so much as I truly enjoyed life for an hour at the end of the day.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：Which is more important, book knowledge or experience?

托福写作难点话题一览

Which is more important, book knowledge or experience?

It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

写作思路展开结构分析

大家要注意这道题目两种做法都有很多内容可以说，所以一定要先进行比较，如果选择从书本中获取的知识角度来写，那么这种方式的优点是了解的知识类型题材、范围更多、学习内容更有深度更加系统化。缺点是书本上的知识有时过于教条、也不见得完全准确。如果大家选择从实践中获取知识，那么优点是获取直接、简单明了、更具实用性、同时有些知识无法从书本中获得只能靠实践来积累。从缺点展开，则可以说这种获取知识的方式缺乏体系，有很大的随意性，很容易让学习者产生片面理解。另外，老师不建议大家为了树立一个观点拼命踩另一个观点，也就是不一定要说A比B更重要，或者B比A更重要。大家可以选择在不同的情况下进行不同的比较，比如学习抽象知识，书本是最好的来源。学习游泳，这只能靠经验。另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可以。大家还可以从知识所属的科目来展开，有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育;有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理;还有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧;管理技巧。总之尽量避免一概而论(treat different things/problems/matters] as the same)，要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。

本话题高分范文赏析

In general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. We now live in a world that typophile is no longer overpriced, and that printed matters are readily available. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, chemicals, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. Unlike the experience of an individual that is limited by the range of that individual, books seem to have almost no limitation. Sitting in the local library, we virtually can travel everywhere through an interesting geographic encyclopedia, and certainly, with nearly no expense at all.

On the other hand, it can be argued that sometimes knowledge gained from experience is much deeper and more comprehensive than that gained from books. It is quite true that not every thing is contained in books. How to deal with personal finance, how to cope with current social trends, even how to most effectively organize our own mind, and numerous other things can seldom be found thoroughly and comprehensively discussed in books, we have to gain the knowledge by our own experience. And the sad news is that even some knowledge that is contained in books usually needs further comprehension, mainly through experience. As to which source is more important, the answers vary. Some knowledge can be acquired only through books. It's hard to imagine we can have a good understanding of history without reading books. On the other hand, some knowledge can be obtained only through experience. When we try to learn to swim, merely a detailed manual of swimming skills, even abundantly filled with illustrations, is at most useless. We have to jump into the water and then gain the knowledge with experience. We have to use books and experience as source simultaneously to get what we want to know. Take learning physics for example, both books and experiences are equally important sources, and examples as such are numerous.

Therefore, I think whether one source is more important than the other depends on circumstances.

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