托福写作怎么拿高分

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篇1：托福写作高分如何拿

托福写作高分如何拿?学会换词技巧让文章“焕然一新”

托福写作高分技巧一 换掉旧词让文章更有新意

Nowadays: “如今”。这是一个被高中老师所“教坏”的词，以至于每个中国高中生一写到作文开头就必定不会忘记的词!其实它只是个时间的表达，我们可以换成很多其他表达。比如说：

these days;

in the past several decades;

in current society;

in the modern society……

它们会让你的“今天”格外不同~

托福写作高分技巧二 换掉旧表达让文章不平庸

More and more people: “越来越多人”。这句话不仅在写作中常用，在口语中也是常驻大户，能否来点高级货?比如说：

an increasing number of people;

people in growing number ;

there are people in growing number ……

一个词大家都说，就会变得平庸，诸如此类的表达都可以积累下来，让你的作文增添小心机~

托福写作高分技巧三 换词也要注意正确表达

With the development of science and technology:“随着科学技术的发展”。有多少同学把这句话放在句首，来举下手。100个考生中80%的都用，如果你是考官会不会也出现眼疲劳~

小站君建议，在对词汇把握准确的基础上，可以多多尝试把某些词汇换个词性，给自己的文章增加一点生动的成分，避免一成不变的尴尬情况，比如说：

名词换动词，因为with +名词的短语，我们可以与as+从句进行互换，因为“with”和“as”都是“随着”的意思，所以这个短语可以换成，“as the science and technology develops”.这样的话，常用的development我们就可以把它动词化了。

名词换形容词，developing在恰当的情况中可以当做形容词，指“发展当中的”，那这个短语我们就可以写成，“with the developing science and technology”.

托福写作语料库积累：成功公司的特点

share some common traits ：有共同点

attracting and hiring the people who：吸引并雇佣X.X样的人

taking care of your customers:伺候好顾客

integrate s/th into：把X.X融入到X.X

be well thought out and well executed：经过深思熟虑然后执行的

poorly crafted business plan ：没有被精细制作的商业计划

is far superior to ：前者比后者高级的

well-crafted business plan ：精细制作的商业计划

sits on the shelf collecting dust：

搁置起来 (比喻形同虚设的政策等)

drives the activities and behaviors of the entire organization：

驱动整个组织的活动和行为

a ship without a rudder：没有舵的船

product strategy :产品策略

employee retention：员工保有率

in a world of continuous change：在不停变换的世界里

implement a culture of continuous learning：实施一个不断学习的文化

is a major contributor to success：X.X是一个成功的重要因素

托福写作语料库积累重要句子：

It simply can't be steered and ends up going around in circles.

无法驾驶并原地打转。

托福写作语料库积累适用的题目：

For any business to be successful, one must spend a lot of money on advertising.

托福写作语料库积累：团队项目

go beyond the textbook : 超越课本

real-world issues ：现实世界的问题

presented s/th to the audiences ：向观众展示

traditional book-based instruction :传统书本教学

is more demanding than ：比另外一件事情更费力

memorize facts from a single source ：从单一的源头记忆事实

细节罗列：

the history of their town ：他们家乡的历史

water quality in their communities ：他们社区的水质量

analyzing information from multiple sources ：分析不同源头的信息

discussed their findings ：讨论他们的发现

collected insect specimens, studied them ：收集昆虫样本、研究他们

托福写作万能素材适用题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it is more effective for students to work in groups than by themselves.

The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teacher’s salaries.

篇2：托福写作怎么拿高分

托福写作分为综合写作与独立写作，前者与阅读、听力结合，考察捕捉信息，并用自己的语言比较能力，不需要主观观点;后者题目一般是能让同学有话可说的话题。在托福写作过程中，很多同学们都想拿高分，那么托福写作高分是如何构成的呢?

一、文章结构

一般从体裁上划分，独立写作我们都会写成议论文，在议论文当中论点、理由、论据、结论和论证是5大关键要素，任何一篇议论文都离不开这5个方面。具体来说就是论点是文章的核心，理由是论点成立的依据，二者构成因果的关系;论据是对理由的具体解释，一般都是事例;结论是对论点的重申，二者很有关联，头尾呼应;而论证部分始终贯穿整个文章。如果你的托福作文想要得到高分，那么这5个要素就必须面面俱到，也只有这样才能写出结构严谨、条理清晰的高分作文。特点要注意的是，教育编辑在这里建议大家，在你的文章中除了这5要素之外，考生还应该在论点前做一些简单的背景介绍，一般2-3句就可以了，目的就是为了论点造势，让文章看起来有层次。

二、文章内容

文章内容就是为了让你的论点更加的明了和细化，一般都是以例子的形式出现在文章的段落当中。为了论证观点，有时需要从几个方面来进行阐述，这样每个方面都形成一个分论点，这论证起来更有说服力。

三、语言

在托福写作中，如果一篇作文的语法正确、用词恰当，并能准确的达意，那么得高分的机率就会大许多。纵观各种满分作文，我们可以总结出任何一篇高分作文都建议在语言的基础上的。当然在这个基础上考生可以追求更多样、高级的表达，使得你的文章更加的丰富。

为什么你的托福考试写作得不到高分?

一、照抄题目，照搬原文

抄的轻的稍微改一个两个托福考试词，但是还有真的是一字不改的照抄，怎么抄的呢?

例如有道题的题目是”Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Childrencanbenefitinimportantwaysfromtakingcareofapetanimal.“，然后童鞋第一句话真的让人怀疑是不是直接CtrlC+CtrlV了，童鞋第一句话是：”ForthequestionifIagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Childrencanbenefitinimportantwaysfromtakingcareofapetanimal.Well,asfarasIamconcerned...”

托福写作童鞋你过来我们好好谈谈，这是不是你的口语老师教你的，你告诉我是哪个学校的口语老师这么教的我保证不打死他，我选择狗带。凑字数凑到这个境界我也是五体投地了，咱能不这么屌丝直接抄嘛，例如用“Whenitcomestotheissueabout…,asfarasIamconcerned…”也好啊。

二、托福写作考试素材根本不能证明自己的观点

屏幕前的小伙伴请不要嘲笑别人，这个问题实在太普遍了。

有一次一个童鞋在写练习题28的独立题(Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Parentstodayaremoreinvolvedintheirchildren'seducationthanparentswereinthepast.)时候，第一段是这么写的：“孩子的教育受到重视，孩子的将来也取决于他们的表现，家长们很关心孩子的教育。因此我同意现在的家长比从前更重视参与到孩子的教育中去了。

大家看到这感觉到问题的所在了么，这位童鞋一直在说“现在孩子的教育受到家长重视”，托福考试然而这并不能证明“现在的家长比从前更加重视参与到孩子的教育中去了”呀。童鞋们，托福考试写作要切题，要切题呐~~~

三、假大空的废话一大堆

如果说上一个致命伤太普遍的话，那这个致命伤真的是太普遍~太普~遍~太~普~普普普~遍~了~~~感受到了老师上一句话有多空旷了吗，是的，就是这种感觉。

其实这个假大空的废话，由于我国的教育制度和语文作文理念多年的根深蒂固，简直就是我国童鞋的硬伤。托福考试流程无论是描述一件事情有多么深远的意义，还是描述一个东西有多么有意思，总是反复不停地说：“这个事情有意义是因为这是多么有意义的一件事”“这个东西是多么的有趣是因为这是一个多么有趣的东西”(此处省略一万字)。

因此，童鞋们，请跟我一起来举例子——“这个东西多么的有趣是因为有一次我带着这个东西出去玩然后……”

四、托福写作考试跑题-新托福写作第一大低分原因

这类童鞋一定是和咱一样从高中万恶的语文作文开始就发散性思维太严重，有从一开始就跑的，还有走到半路说着说着就跑偏了的。

前两天刚看到一个童鞋交上来的一篇作文中题目是这样的，“Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.”然后该童鞋在作文中大致思路如是写道：“Alwaystellingthetruth”是不理性的，而TA认为我们应该做一个理性的人，TA自己是理工科的学生，TA觉得理工科的学生更为理性，而文科的学生总是不那么理性……然后就没有然后了，请计算老师收到该作文时的心理阴影面积。

五、自相矛盾

出现这个情况的童鞋，和跑题的童鞋写文有着“异曲同工之妙”，跑题的童鞋是要么一开始就跑偏，要么半路跑偏。而自相矛盾的童鞋呢，不是举例子写着写着不知道怎么就矛盾了，就是写到后来写得自相矛盾了的。

篇3：托福写作怎么拿高分

1) 加上姓名、时间、地点等

很多中国学生在写例子的时候会使用“比如说有一个人……”这样的表达。这样的表达看起来底气不足，且中式思维严重，很难受到考官青睐。考生完全可以改用另外的表达“我有一个朋友叫Jason，他在两年前做了X.X事……”这样写就看起来舒服多了。在叙述个人类例子的时候，尽量使用具体的人名、地名和时间。这样能使你的例子看上去更丰满、富有细节，也更像真实的事件，有说服力。

2) 与论点结合，写出X.X之前和X.X之后的变化

需要特别注意的是，例子一定是为论证服务的，绝不能脱离主题举例子。有的考生非常心醉于自己编出来的故事，但是却忘了自己在写托福作文，这个故事并不能证明你的观点，那这样的文章得不到高分一点也不奇怪。

这里的X.X指的是论点中的主题词。例如在写备考资料中的一个题目：公共交通是否应该免费时，有一个分论点是公共交通免费以后，私家车会减少，这样尾气排放得少了，环境也就变好了。这里的主题词就是私家车的数量，例子就可以写成N年前私家车很少，环境很好，然后私家车变多以后，环境就变差了。例子可写成：

10 years ago, in my childhood memory, the city which I live in now is one of the most beautiful cities I have ever seen. The blue sky and the clean water were quite impressive to me. However, 3 years ago, when I came back to this city again, I was astonished by those changes. The city developed rapidly during those days. There are far more private cars than years ago on the road every day. On average, every household has one or two cars. The city may be described as “developed” now, while the sky here is never as clear as ever.

这个例子当中所用的词汇、句型基本都是中学所学过的。但是其中用到了我们刚才所谈的第一个技巧，加上了时间细节，也用到了第二个技巧，扣紧了主题，说明了有私家车变多之前和之后的变化。这个例子看上去文采平实，但却符合托福考试的评分规范，单就这个例子而言，就是可以得到4~5分的高分的(满分5分)。

3) 写完例子以后，一定要再结合论点论证说理

这一点不难理解，却是很多考生所忽视的。再强调一遍，例子的存在是为了更好地论证论点，因此在写完例子以后，需要再加上至少1~2句话重申一下你的论点。例如上文中出现的例子，写完之后，还应再加上If the amount of the cars can be reduced, I believe it will further improve the environment here, and be beneficial to all the citizens here as well. And The free payment of pubic transportation will make this come true.这样就是一个完整的论述段了。

托福写作考试该如何准备?

考试前：

1.熟悉指令。每场考试的指令都是相同的，因此考试时没有必要花时间仔细阅读指令。考试之前，你一定要对考试指令娴熟在心。

2.迅速提高记笔记的能力

在托福写作综合部分中，考生必须能够准确复述Lecture中的主要信息以及它们间的逻辑联系，因此，速记的能力就很重要了。学习并熟悉一些简单的速记技巧会使考生在考场上获得更多的相对优势。不要尝试逐字逐句地记录，在不影响记忆情况下，单词可以采取缩写。用各种符号去表达文章的逻辑关系。

托福写作考试中：

指令一出来就立刻跳过。你对指令应该已很熟悉，因此只要指令一出现就立刻用鼠标点Continue，将你的时间省下来用在答题上。

如果综合写作任务的内容你并不熟悉，不要担心。所有你需要回答的信息都包含在段落里。回答这些问题不需要有任何背景知识。

仔细地阅读材料。你只有有限的阅读时间。阅读段落时，仔细记笔记。注意主要观点和主要的支持信息。不要写下你读到的所有内容。不要写下太多不必要的细节。

仔细听。每段你只能听一次。考试时你不能重复这些段落。边听边仔细记笔记。不要写下你听到的所有内容。不要写下太多不必要的细节。主要要记下所听材料的要点即可。

清楚地组织自己的回答。回答应包括说明阅读段落和听力段落之间关系的主题句、支持主题句的重要材料、关于阅读材料的一个段落、关于听力材料的一个段落。

利用过渡词使你的回答连贯。如果能显示出回答的观点是如何相互关联的，你的回答就更易被读懂、理解。

坚持使用你所知道的词汇、句子结构和语法点。这时不是你尝试新词汇、句子结构和语法点的时候。

注意显示在计算机屏幕上标题栏内的时间。该标题栏显示本节考试所余时间、本节问题的总数、你所做问题的总数。

提前几分钟写完你的答案，留出编辑校对的时间。你应该利用最后的3~5分钟检查自己的回答，看看是否有句子结构问题和语法错误。

托福考试需要哪些证件?

1、托福(TOEFL)考试证件-----护照

护照是最好用的身份证明，要确认护照是否没有过期，还有就是最后一页的下面记得要签名。

有关护照办理：(参考)到当地公安局出入境服务大厅申请因私护照申请表，需要带上户口本户籍所在地，常住人口登记表那一页，身份证。拿到现场复印，因为复印有具体的位置要求。如果是集体户口，需要带常住人口登记表原件所需费用：照相费：40元;护照工本手续费：200元。

2、托福(TOEFL)考试证件-----身份证

身份证只要没有过期，无论第一代还是第二代都可以使用。

3、托福(TOEFL)考试证件-----学生证

学生证必须要确保上面的注册章到目前你的学期为止都要盖上。

有些学校，如吉林大学的学生证是学生卡，而这种只有数码照片的卡是不被考试认可的，因此这类学校的同学一定要出示带个人照片的证明信。 要的是纸质的证件,希望同学们注意。

4、托福(TOEFL)考试证件-----身份证明

的要求如下:考生本人所在学校学生处、系(院)办，或所在单位人事部门，或户籍所在地派出所，或档案所在地人才交流中心，或街道办事处开具的身份证明信。户籍所在地派出所开具的户籍证明信应包含考生照片;其他身份证明信需有本人照片、本人签字、本人身份证号码，个人体貌特征描述和经办单位人事部门电话，经办人签字及联系电话。

篇4：如何在托福写作拿高分

Both the author and the lecturer are dealing with the issue of functions of shafts in Egyptian Pyramids. In the listening， the professor refutes all assumptions mentioned in the reading.

First， even though the writer proposed hypothesis that shafts may provide fresh air to the inside chambers， the professor argues against this by indicating the failure of shaft to reach the outside. Without being able to connect the internal pyramids and the external， shafts can’t exchange air.

Second， according to the listening， it is true that constellations play an important role in religious beliefs in Egypt history， but the position of shaft that corresponds to positions of stars in sky fails to prove the function of shafts. Contrary to what the reading believed， pyramids were constructed much before the establishment of relationship between beliefs and constellations.

Third， the lecturer also contradicts the author who regarded shafts as the link and passageway for reincarnation of the king’s soul. According to the listening material， the king doesn’t need reincarnation. On the contrary， the king’s soul could go through walls.

独立写作

话题分类

教育

题型

绝对词题型

考题回忆

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should limit their children's hours of using electronic devices such as video games and televisions.

篇5：如何在托福写作拿高分

Given the prevalent high-tech， children are increasingly exposed to computers， cellphones or other such electronic devices. The time-consuming activities on those technologies have already raised great concerns from the public despite advantages they bring. I am among supporters to call for parents’ proper supervision on time limits of using those devices.

First， limiting the time juveniles spend on electronic devices sets foundation for their academic performance. In order to do well with study， adequate devotions especially enough time to preview and review， is essential. However， it is not so easy for children themselves to be self-disciplined when it comes to computers and cell phones for those devices display much vivid and amusing cartoons， series of TV programs or video games. As a matter of fact， children often cannot help watching one more 15 minutes after another 15 minutes， excessively entertaining themselves， after which they may probably feel exhausted as well as guilty， too exhausted to go on performing well and too guilty to bearing burden. This kind of emotion usually leads them to let academics go. On the opposite side， with limitations on time of using such devices， chances that young students actively come back to textbooks and do practices are quite good because this restriction prevents children from being physically and mentally over exhausted， which is a basic requirement for study.

Second， setting restrictions on use of electronic products provides more opportunities for cultivating versatile talents. Designed to be appealing， video games， TV programs or social medias on electronics mentioned above attract rather great attention from the youth who are supposed to explore themselves and the outside world. Actually， youngsters are isolated from other peers and various activities by excessive use of computers or cellphones. If parents could appropriately supervise their children and help them to arrange the time， young students under 13 could hang out with friends， visit museums， volunteer to serve communities or do bodybuilding so that they may develop communication skills， open their eyes， form the citizenship and maintain healthy both physically and emotionally， which they may be devoid of after being a couch potato or leaning against the chair to constantly click buttons. Even though some of those electronics intend to educate the target audience， adolescents need to be guided by their parents because the seemingly beneficial designs for improving abilities are indirect.

To conclude， based on above arguments， parents should set a rule on how long their children could use electronic devices for the sake of their academic achievement and well-rounded development.

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篇6：托福独立写作怎样拿高分

托福独立写作怎样拿高分

一、确定托福写作的立意

看到托福作文题目时，不要着急下笔。首先要进入破题与立意结合的阶段。充分的破题所积累的大量思维方向给我们更多选择，而选择的立意最好满足以下条件：

1. 要与论题相匹配

论题问的如果是提高生活质量与否，一些无关紧要的改变就应该弃之不用，比如烹调时间缩短这一项改变，是事实，且未对生活质量有直接明显影响，就应该避免用作主要论点。

2. 选择的无论是2个还是3个论点，一定要有内在联系

这其实是整个立意阶段的重头。之后要立意，就是要明白自己表达的对象是什么，明确立场。然后站在这个立场上，挑选支持自己的论点。

3. 要能言之有物

这是再功利不过的一条标准。比如食物准备时间缩短能让人性情改变，破题时觉得不无可能，真落笔时却不知道由何说起，如果选了这一条为一个主要论点，结果却是写了一句话就走人，那还不如选个能下笔，能展示语言功底，也能显示思维缜密的写作方向。

按照说服力强弱排列分论点

破题结束后，需要整理行文思路。破题过程其实是个发散思维的过程，而立意，则是要把思维收回来，组织化，理清它的脉络纹路，让他们按照自认为最有说服力的顺序排列好，准备落于纸上的过程。这个说服力的强弱，应该以什么标准判断呢?

哪些论点更有说服力?

能说服读者的议论，在论点选择上应该遵循一个原则：三个(或者两个)论点不能在层面上有交叉，但要符合一条明线：支持全文观点。而最打动读者的论点选择，不仅遵循上面的原则，三个看似不交叉的论点间还有一条暗线贯穿一致。令全文浑然天成，回味无穷。

立意的第一步，按照上面的原则看，当然要先确定观点。以题目为例，笔者愿意选择否，食物易于准备降低了人们的生活质量。确定观点后，破题时得到的思维方向，明显不利于后续展开的就应该排除。

托福写作满分作文要怎么写?

那么，怎样写才能写出一篇好作文呢?

写出一篇高分作文，首先思路要正确，要站在出题人的角度思考问题。

我们用一个写作话题举例：“为了晋升，到底要承担更多(个体)工作，还是更多参与团队任务?”。有同学一上来看到 “团队” 二字就乐开花，大书特书团队合作如何效率高，只字不提对“个体晋升” 这件事。ETS花半天出了题，我们是不是应该多思考一些再落笔?比如这道题，我们既要写出团队协作的效率高，又要写出个体晋升的便携性，有对比才能显出文章的深度。即便准备了模板，也要想想怎么把模板里面有价值的信息逻辑正确地嵌入到文章里。

说完思路，我们来说说语言方面，ETS要求正确和逻辑流畅的句子。至于那种5句话里面就有5个逗号，1个连词都没有，像 “there have many people say” 这种，男阅卷人看了要沉默，女阅卷人看了要流泪，我们是不是还要在基本语法上多下些功夫?

如果一篇文章如果审题思路有偏差，例子不清晰，语言也凌乱，又怎么值得24+的分数呢?

托福写作模板思路分享之保持身体健康

托福独立写作题目：Agree or disagree: it is easier for people to maintain good health today than it was in the past.

是否同意：相比过去，人们更容易保持身体健康。

思路讲解：

一道老生常谈的今昔对比型考题。今昔对比题是每年必考题型，这道题更是在过往的几年于中国大陆和北美至少考过三次，重要性和经典程度不言而喻。

如果选择同意，即人们现在维持好的健康状况比过去更容易，可以这样展开构思：

1.医疗技术的进步可以预防及治愈在过去或许会致命的(fatal)疾病。可以拿手术、HPV疫苗等举例。

2. 现代人饮食更全面均衡，这对健康有利。过去人能够吃到的食物种类较少，甚至在灾害发生的年份，只能吃到草根树皮等;而现代人能够接触到各种食材，包括蔬菜、瓜果，鸡蛋和谷物等，营养摄入更充分。

如果选择不同意，也就是人们在过去比现在更易维持健康，可以考虑现代社会存在哪些不利健康的因素，如空气污染，繁重的生活工作压力等。

托福的写作技巧

很多考生都在询问到底如何才能提高自己的托福写作水平。出国托福频道小编特意为大家整理了写作提高办法，希望对大家有所帮助!

新托福独立写作一共有3个评分标准：如何展开论点，如何组织结构以及如何运用语言表达观点。

语言的表达是项相对较耗时的任务，不是一朝一夕即可掌握的，因此急需考生的长期酝酿;而如何展开论点，相对应其实与如何运用语言是相辅相成的，同样是需要时间。中国考生写作分数不高并不是因为不知道说什么理由，而是不知道如何用英语恰当的表达自己的中文思路。因此这3个评分标准中最有技巧最易提升的便是第二个：如何组织结构。

第一，连接词过渡句

任何形式的英语文章中都应该具备一定量的连接词(路标词)，因为它们是有助于读者顺利阅读的导航坐标;大多数考生在备考时也的确会准备一系列此类连接词，用于文章每个段落的段首;包括有表示第一，第二，第三等的连接词。但是单纯有段首连接词还不足以支撑全文的结构，因此考生应该同时准备段中连接词，包括比如说，因为，但是，相对比而言等，粗略估计，全文完成下来可以达到15个以上的路标词，不仅承接了全文，结构清晰明了，而且也为时间紧张下的写作减轻了不少字数压力。以下为常用连接词：

1， 第一：in the first place/ first and foremost/ to start with/ to begin with/ first of all/ first/ firstly

2， 第二：in the second place/ secondly and equal importantly/ to continue/ second/ secondly

3， 第三：in the third place/ last but not least/ third/ thirdly

4， 一方面、另一方面：on one hand/ on the other hand; for one thing/ for another

5 表原因：because/ because of/ since/ due to/ as/ thanks to/ for/ owing to

6， 表结果：so/ therefore/ as a result/ consequently/ as a consequence

7， 表举例：for example/ for instance/ such as/ take…as an example/ to illustrate

8， 表承接：besides/ furthermore/ moreover/ what’s more/ in addition/ additionally

9， 表转折：but/ while/ however/ nevertheless/ nonetheless

10，表比较对比: to compare with/ compared with/ in comparison with/ by contrast/ on the contrary

…

当然，仅仅依靠连接词是不足以表明全文的连贯性的，适当的添加过渡句也是很好的承接手段，如Official Guide To The New TOEFL P263中有一篇关于DISHONESTY KILLS RELIABILITY 的5分范文中就有出现多处明显的段落过渡句，如第三段首After stating that everyone’s opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling…用来承接上下两段，以引出自己的观点看法;第五段首Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite…等都明显具备良好的过渡功能，让全文更加流畅舒服，朗朗上口。

第二，内在论证统一

Official Guide To The New TOEFL这一官方指南中也明确在写作部分提到但要知道，仅仅使用第一，第二这样的连接词并不能保证作文结构的严谨，还要注意让所有的观点与文章的主题相关，紧扣中心思想。换句话说，作文要有统一性，评分原则中提到的统一性，渐进性和连贯性这些都是评估作文结构是否严谨，读者能否比较容易地跟上作者思路的标准。通过上段叙述，我们不难发现作文论证统一性的重要性。

而事实上这也正是被许多考生所忽略的问题。在拿到试题后，考生们不是先腾出时间构思结构框架，而是急着抓住哪怕是一分钟的时间动笔写作，其实如此的选择是要不得的，朗阁海外考试研究中心强烈建议各位考生在考试时不要舍不得这准备的时间，正所谓磨刀不误砍柴功;因为只有当你事先构思好而不是边想边写，你才能真正做到论证内容的一致性，观点与论据的统一性，也才能真正取得高分。另外，用最直白的作答应对题目的提问，用单边的手段安排整篇文章成5段的总分总思路是十分适用的。

考生在备考写作的时候，可以多做一些这种类型的题目，并适当的做些准备，比如背诵一些连接方式，多在逻辑上把握自己的文章等等。

篇7：托福写作想拿高分就要这样用

As the technology of public transportation keeps advancing, more citizens can choose to dwell in the cities that are beneficial to their own development. Inevitably, there occurs a controversy whether moving to a new city or country will lead to the rupture of relationship among friends. From my perspective, I think the statement is not sensible.

Firstly, moving to a new country or city will not result in the loss of old friends. To be more specific, the maintenance of friendship doesn’t lie in how far they live with each other and the development of technology has diversified the ways of interacting with friends. The invention of cellphones break the shackles caused by distance and overseas students can choose to communicate with their family members and friends through a variety of Apps like WeChat that makes video calls possible. Except for that, by looking at the pictures popping up all over the social media like Facebook, people can easily capture what is happening to their friends. For instance, my friend Selina took selfie in the Sydney Opera House a week ago and I would learn that she was having fun in the Australia with her picture posted on the Instagram. Therefore, a wide range of advanced electronic gadgets can be used to sustain friendship.

Moreover, instead of losing old friends, city migrants can even enlarge their social circles and achieve more success. Restricted in a city for a long period, people may be trapped in a situation that would block their development and they can gain refreshing experience while immigrating to a new city. My friend of Mine named Michael served as a Market Analyst in a renewed company in Beijing. However, he couldn’t see any progress in recent years and then an opportunity comes out. Because of his five-year working experience, a foreign trade cooperation tried to recruit him as the Market Analyst because the firm was planning to start a new program. Then he grasped the chance and earn a challenging life that he likes even though he was required to work in Shanghai. Our relationship have not experienced any interruption and his strong ability of being adapted to the new environment helps him to make lots of new friends. Accordingly, moving to a new city can, occasionally, help to break the deadlock in our professions.

Admittedly, it can be sensible that friends can be estranged owing to the long distance with each other. Specifically speaking, the chances to meet with each other will be limited a lot. However, as I just put, for one thing, people can talk with each other through various social network software. For another thing, the distance between cities is not a problem anymore since there have been many public transportation tools like the high-speed trains and airplanes that will lead us to anyplace we try to go in a very short period.

In a word, moving to a new city or a new country is good choice under some circumstance. Besides, the highly developed technology can help to strengthen the relations with our friends and the possibilities of living a different life and achieving success can both explain why I stand by the statement that it is a good thing to move.

托福写作模板:了解跟你观点相反的人更重要

It is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours.

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篇8：托福写作想拿高分就要这样用

With the increasingly diverse means of acquiring information, it has become a common phenonmen that we are exposed to conflicting ideas about a single event, which has aroused deep social concern. A growing boday of average people are wondering whether it is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours. From my pesepective, it is advisable to be a good listener to the different viewpoints.

Firstlly, receiving news presented by people with dissenting perspective can help people have access to the comprehensive information and get closer to the truth of the events. As is common sense, every single event or piece of news is not as simple as we expect. So it is an indisputable fact that nobody can have a panoramic view of the truth of the incidents due to the limited experience and knowledge span. In this case, gaining news from our opponents will definitely deliver a brandnew perspective and make us have a second thought of our own viewpoint. In other words, the clashes of different views will temper and refine our opinion about the events, with the result that a whole picture is formed. On the contrary, just selectively listening to the similar ideas, people will become narrow-minded.

Besides that, another potential benefit of obtaining news from those with opposite view is the higher likelihood to make acquaitance with more people. As is known to all, the way person responds to someone whose opinion differs drastically from theirs reveals their true character. To be specific, being tolerant of different voices about one thing reflects that a person is endowed with the quality of inclusiveness and humbility, which can make him/her leave a good impression on others. Consequently, no one, including those from opposing party, will refuse to become friends with humble and inclusive ones. Instead, those solely accepting same opinion are usually self-centered and arrogant so that they not consider others’ thought or feeling but impose their own opinion. Thus it is unlikely that they will build friendship with those with different ideas. Even worse, the alreadly established friendship may also end, once the disagreements occur.

In a nutshell, it is sensible for people to read or watch news from people with dissenting perspective, in order to gain the whole picture of the news and enlarge the social network.

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